You Want Lessons on My Dust Escape Jump Gun?

This book is great. I feel that the sublimation point of this book is... No longer confused about the myth of Susanata Daibutsu. The details of the expressions and moods of the other four shadows are vividly portrayed. I haven't read such a great book in a long time. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

The best Naruto article on Tomato in 2025. The rest all started from playing tricks in the ninja school. It's hard to keep people entertained. This plot is enjoyable from beginning to end, and the writing is smooth and witty. It is a rare and excellent novel.

It's hard to beat me after fighting for a long time without even one of the Kage's dying. The writing is very good, but Madara and Hashirama were shaved too hard, and Mutsu is incredibly powerful. I can't stand it even if two of my favorite characters die, but the writing is really good, very good, 5 stars.

It feels similar to a semi-invincible novel. Now there are more than 50 protagonists, and I feel invincible. I feel that it is not difficult to fight in the later stage, 👄👄👄 but there are too many memes, even if they play a lubricating role, it is very embarrassing and there is no sense of substitution. You can reduce the number of memes, such as the latest two, the fighting is really exciting, just this battle, it is exciting!

It's so beautiful and has a lot of jokes. A rare perspective, the character does not collapse. After watching it, I fell in love with the two characters Wu and Huanyue. I clicked on the author's column and saw that the author's other articles were not very long. This article is so good. I hope the author can write a longer one. [Sending my heart to you]

I originally wanted to read it again before giving a rating to the author's book. After all, there is a book that has been discontinued and I don't trust the author very much. It was abrupt, and I played with jokes a bit too much, but later I found that these jokes were integrated well, and the author would not miss every joke and would make up for it. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, you who read my comment are like a fragrant and soft little cake ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Ouch, oh my god, this is so exciting! Especially when these second-generation Kage besieged Senju Hashirama together! It makes my blood boil when I see it!

It's pretty good among Naruto movies, the logic is clear, please don't stop updating [Like] [Shy]

Although there may be some aspects that the author wants to express that are not comprehensive (such as the detail of the plan, and some other aspects), overall, the enjoyment and desire to read are both top-notch, which is very good.

It's quite good-looking and super interesting. It's obvious that Xiaozhu and Wu are truly in love. The author really can't let them be together! Let the mustache become a woman and become the heroine

Let me talk about the good points first. The author has been updating continuously, so you don't have to worry about interruptions. Moreover, the writing is very logical and there will be no plot collapse. The writing style is also very good●)o(● Also, the extras are mainly about battles, because the author considered that some readers like to watch battles, and some readers like to watch daily life, so the extras are written to relieve boredom for readers who like to watch battles, so if you don't watch them, it will not affect your understanding of the plot. Let's talk about the shortcomings: the dust escape is useless at the beginning to defeat the Uchiha class, but the dust escape in the original plot of Naruto was only developed after visiting the Uchiha class. I hope the author can fill this hole. I would like to add that this book is not finished yet. The author is now updating two chapters a day. If you can't accept it, you can save this book and read it in one go when it is finished. The plot at the end feels a bit weird, there are a lot of typos, and the writing is not as good as the previous plot.

Although it's not from Konoha, Iwa Ninja Village is also very good-looking, the protagonist is very intelligent, and there are no surprises.

Perfect has both an IQ and a burning passion, and is not brainless or hot-blooded. It's so cool.

The writing is quite good, well-founded, and quite interesting, especially the angle sentence: The children run away and go back to Kuku to drink rebel drinks. I just hope to write about 1 million words. It seems that your other books don't have many words.

This is the best Naruto novel I have read recently.

Randian is well written and funny, and it's comfortable to listen to. There is even a short article about the author's mysterious epilepsy, so it's a five-star review.

This book is written with humor, passion, and abstractness, but there are too few of them. It is considered excellent in Tomato. There is no heroine, but there is a "bond" exclusive to our Hokage, which is worth watching.

The subject matter is novel, but it will most likely be finished in about 500,000 yuan. The author's timeline jumps very fast. He was 30 years old at the beginning and now is 260,000 yuan. He is almost 70. The ninja world has also been unified. 200,000 Yuan has completed the 2 million progress of other novels.

It's very interesting and worth reading. It's a great novel for newbies.

A unique insight. The change of mentality from youth to old age is also in line with common sense. What is a bit unreasonable is the attention paid to Nagato for decades without interfering with it. However, for the sake of plot development, I also understand it somewhat.

After reading this book, I feel that it is relatively novel compared to similar works, but the writing style is similar. I think novelty is more important than writing style, and most of the novels of the same type are cool. If it can be less cool, it will be less homogeneous than the slow improvement of combat power, and it will stand out more.

Well, it's so beautiful. I cried when I watched Ghost Lantern Huanyue Die. It's so beautiful. I'm telling you this. I don't want to cover most of it. I want to give it 100 points. Take a look. I'll regret it for the rest of my life. Then the protagonist is Wu and the CP is Huanyue.

It's well written and the characters are described very delicately.

It looks good, the only drawback is that there are too few updates [laughing evilly] I hope the author can improve it

I wasn't going to comment. But I have a good idea, so I'll come back and say a few words. It has many advantages, the plot is exciting, the pace is fast, and the setting is novel. But the shortcomings are also obvious. The combat power is a bit low, but it is not a shortcoming. After all, Naruto's combat power is already low. The main reason is that there are too many meme elements, some are interesting, and some are difficult to meme. Secondly, it is a bit out of place, but it should be regarded as a style. Overall, I think it is a good work, and I give it four stars. I hope that the author's subsequent works will be both stable and refreshing.

This is the best type of writing I have ever seen, and he is very good at writing battle scenes. I feel like I have pictures in my mind, and the logic is super clear. The mix of jokes will make the readers more inexplicable, and the battle scenes are not too boring. Everything is designed very reasonably, and there are no poisonous points (this is the best article [shy]). I hope you won't stop reading. Really, I highly recommend it.

It's quite interesting. The protagonist is the second-generation Tsuchikage at the beginning. Through a series of means and decisions, he leads the Iwakage Village to gradually grow. I highly recommend reading Chapters 62 and 63. My stomach hurts from laughing [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

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I have read all the books written by the author under this account and the previous one. I am surprised that he can write so much. I was always banned before. I only write the kind of books that have a bit of FD symbolism and darkness. The fact that I can write so far and have good traffic is already the author's best book. Come on [Love] [Please update] By the way, I hope the author will exercise restraint when writing, and don't leave people with no books to read [please update] Also, is that crimson person you? I saw that account commenting like the author on one of your books before [what]

The writing is really, really, really, really good. It feels just as funny as Dave's earlier book, but a little different, with a bit of passionate comedy. It reads like a Japanese bad comedy fighting TV series (I forgot its name).