JOJO: Start by Saving Xu Lun

The best Jojo story I have read so far, the plot is reasonable, the stand-in ability is strong but not negative, the cp is not broken, the person is equally strong, and even the first to sixth generations of Jojo are brought together in a reasonable way, it is really very interesting to watch

It's super good-looking. Not only does it not have the ability to be a substitute, but every substitute has a trace to follow, so it doesn't look so average. The plot is reasonable, but the part about the substitute's memory doesn't feel right.

This book really doesn't talk about the peak of JoJo, but it can also be ranked in the top ten. The author has obviously written a certain amount of articles about JoJo, which makes this book different from other JoJo fans on Tomato. He has captured the core of what JoJo wants to express and expressed it in the same way. Although some people may find it unpleasant, many of the plots also make me feel like Jojo. Anyway, come on, I am looking forward to it, hahaha

Overall it's good, but the stand-in battle is too tight. The protagonist encountered several stand-ins throughout the day, giving the impression that these stand-ins could work together but had to fly alone.

It is indeed the best JoJo article so far. I have seen the latest chapter and the only drawback is that there are few updates... The plot is not to mention, and the portrayal of Marco is also very good. If I have to talk about shortcomings... I can't see Marco's own ability at the moment (after all, it is not a problem for the protagonist to always borrow strength). Of course, it is only Act 2 at the moment. I trust the author.

This book is very interesting. The protagonist's ability to stand in for a drifter is also very interesting. The plot is compact and the villain brings a strong sense of powerlessness. Will the protagonist learn the cavalry maneuver later on? Can the Drifter load a terrifying evil beast? The protagonist rides the Drifter and launches a cavalry spin. School is about to start. Have you all finished your homework? [Thinking][Thinking]

I like it very much. I really want to read the sixth book, but there are few books that are well written. Your writing is very good. I give you five stars. To be honest, it's a pity. It's well written. Unfortunately, I can't stand the cp that doesn't match the original work. JOJO is actually more about a battle of wits. There is basically no situation where a team falls in love, and it is not allowed. They are all busy with business, that is, stopping Father Pucci, just like stopping Dio. Polnareff did not stop, I ran away first. Anyway, come on, author [blow kiss]

The novel is okay, I like the subject matter very much. After all, it is a rare JoJo novel. Saving Xu Lun received good reviews, but there is no heroine, so I gave it a good review and ran away [laughing and crying]

The plot feels like a JOJO, with a slightly faster pace and a lot of fighting. Occasionally there will be some funny plots, and reenactments of famous scenes. The fighting can be completely imagined through description, and the intellectual battle is not too brain-burning, which is quite good. However, I personally feel that it lacks some of Jojo's wonderful metaphors. Overall, this is a very good JOJO fanfic.

Time deletion is to delete the next 10 seconds or so in the real world, such as jumping directly from the 1st second to the 11th second. Time stop is to freeze the time at the first second in reality and the time in reality will not flow. It does not mean that from the first second to the third second, other people cannot move but others. Dior once said that it is strange to use real-world time to calculate the length of the time-stop. Therefore, it is not true that the boss directly deleted the time-stop, because the time-stop can be understood as creating a separate timeline. It does not belong to the real world and is not affected by real time.

How can I put it this way? I feel like this novel is really 10 out of 10 very good-looking. I mean, everyone has to take it and use their brains. We are what others think. It doesn't use our brains at all. It's 10 out of 10 and very good-looking.

It's pretty good. As for the heroine, I just hope that since you wrote the ambiguous plot with her, you won't let it go. No matter how Xu Lun looks at it at the moment, it should be like this. Ff It would be good if there is one.

It looks good, but the battles are too frequent and it feels compact, but there is nothing you can do about it. Araki doesn't stop too much, so keep going.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good-looking JOJO fanfic. I hope the author will continue to work hard and create higher-quality works.

It's very interesting, and many of the settings are also very good. The former enemies of the Qiao family are resurrected and attack. The protagonist is Qibelin and is Giorno's subordinate. It has three major combat systems: ripple, stand-in, and spin. I just watched the main character meet Anna Sui so far. Very exciting

That's great! It is considered to be the best work among JOJO articles. Good luck to the author.

It has great potential. It's the only JOJO fanfic I'm currently reading. The drawback is that two chapters a day is not enough.

It's quite interesting, and it allows me, a person who has never watched JOJO, to read it while checking the information. There are also a lot of likes and interactions from the author.

Author, I really read you right. It seems I made the right bet. Come on, the author writes very well.

Very good, the protagonist has a firm belief, and the protagonist's surname has Zebelin, he can use spins, ripples, and substitutes

The logic is good, the story is compact and the style is very JoJo [like]

Too little, not enough The author has his own design and understanding of the plot, the rhythm is relaxed and moderate, the character description is logical and incorporates his own design, a high-quality work

Awesome. Marco is really awesome [laughing and crying] This author's writing style is so good, there is no glitch in it, it's basically all about battles. If you like watching battles, you can join in, and it also includes fate. Basically, I think it's quite consistent, but some Internet memes will be added, which will make it a little bit funny, right? If you like to see more fighting and a little bit of comedy, I definitely recommend this book.

So, does this book have a female protagonist [exploration]

Why does it make me feel like Beyond Paradise? What about the background of that game? JOJO characters from all eras can appear.

Fighting is fun! I feel that the protagonist's performance in ACT 2 is a bit too passive. ACT 1 can produce surprising effects. Is it fate for everyone to survive? How does the protagonist play dio?

It's really good. Although there are sometimes some inexplicable events that pop up, overall it's still good and can make people motivated to watch it.

In JoJo fandom, as long as the protagonist has a golden spirit, I will give it five stars. Later the protagonist starts to feel empty. His sadness, his anger, and his obsession were all genuine. But as the plot of the new world progresses, it feels more like I am pretending to be someone rather than living as my true self...

I feel like what I've written so far is pretty good, and there's nothing poisonous about it.

Okay, okay, the battle of wits part is great