This Devil Is Not Just a Lolicon

Yes, I didn't see any poisonous spots, which can be said to be very good in Tomato (I finally found one that I could read after searching for a day). The character of the protagonist is quite in line with my taste. He is unconventional but responsible and reliable, gentle and kind. Apart from his love of smoking and drinking, he has no major flaws. But the images of smokers and drunkards make the protagonist's character more vivid. Secondly, this worldview is also very novel. The geographical and cultural environment of the protagonist can be seen as Western Europe and the Second Industrial Revolution, but it also exists in other countries and regions such as China. Overall, it's great😋, give it a five-star support.

I am a sassy person, and I was impressed by the author's writing style. The plain and warm style makes it comfortable to read and not boring. It can only be said that it is not in line with the public's reading habits, but it is a surefire success for those who like daily Canadian fantasy. I have been reading novels for more than ten years. This book maintains the level of the first thirty chapters and ends at about two million words. Even if it is not popular on the entire Internet, it is definitely the best in this category. I sincerely recommend it, I don't like it if you criticize the author, hahaha. Big cheers for the author.

I don't know if it's my personal problem or the author's style of writing Western fantasy novels. Personally, I think the world line is a bit blurry. I suggest briefly introducing it on the cover page of the book, such as racial composition and territorial composition. In addition, the language style of mixed narratives and discussions and the Western fantasy writing style of The Riddler are also a drawback. There are a small number of such sentences. It can indeed have an eye-catching effect, but too many words will make readers feel irritated and create a sense of distance. Especially on an online platform like Tomato, where light novels are popular, it is recommended to reduce the Riddler's sentences as much as possible; finally, it is recommended to write some people's minefields (hate fake people eating people) on the cover page of the book to avoid malicious low ratings. Overall, the book is good, with good writing style, but there are bad reviews and it is a new book, so the rating is low. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

To be honest, I have read more than 30 chapters, and it is quite good. The male protagonist is not a pure Asasi male protagonist, but he is not a virgin, and there is no poisonous point in the protagonist at the moment.

Sylvie is so cute [adoration][adoration][adoration]

It's good to read, but so few people read it... This book must survive.

I just discovered that it was written by the same author as the novel I read before. I said the style was so similar, and I gave it a five-star review [Chigua].

It's beautiful, but the writing is mediocre.

The author has published his education and training articles This is a huge five-star review for the author

It looks good. I like the male protagonist's character very much. The characterization is still very good. I hope Tina's emotional line can be supplemented in the future.

Like the protagonist's character

I've read Chapter 23. It's good to watch, but up you should know that there will be no good end for those who stab each other [smile][smile]

It's a very good book, but it's not finished yet, but it really touched me a lot. How can I put it this way? If I were asked to give a very objective evaluation, I might give it 3-4 stars, but it made me feel full of emotions from beginning to end. If the author's writing skills were better and he could give this book a perfect ending instead of the hasty ending it has now, it would definitely be a good book. The five stars now are just an encouragement to you, the author, but you have to remember to reflect and reflect. The actual evaluation is only worth 3-4 stars.

I can only say that Xiao Lang's portrayal is awesome, and it's hard to dislike. It feels like the dirty, dirty, fantasy of satisfying people's selfish desires should be in novels. Otherwise, it would really feel perverted.

Education and training, I want to see education and training

This is my favorite family, five stars directly

This book is really wonderful and the content is very solid! However, I personally feel that perhaps because it is slightly less unique in terms of world view and core settings, and because some naming styles overlap with other works, the overall appeal has been weakened. But I sincerely hope that the author will not give up because of the temporary traffic volume. I will always be here to support you and look forward to you continuing to write the stories in your heart - using dreams as horses and working hard without stopping. [Laugh]

Greatness needs no words

It was a great work before 1972, but it successfully ran away from me in 1972 [laughs]

A very good narrative, nothing too sinister.

So far it's pretty good, the writing is good, the male protagonist has a good personality, and the female protagonists around him are both very likable so far.

The writing is excellent, the plot is interesting and novel, Sylvie is cute

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

This author has definitely played Riot games

The writing is not knife enough (other people say knife, but I think it's okay, it just advances the plot normally, not counting knife) [laughs] The overall plot is very good

It perfectly fits the fantasy in my heart. The author still understands it too well [laughs][laughs]

Come on, it's a book with great potential. I hope the author will update it by 10,000 words every day.

The emotional scenes are very strong, and it goes without saying that the rating shouldn't be so low. I haven't seen the back yet. I heard there is a knife. Did it go back in the end? By the way, the protagonist's situation is a bit miserable. Will it improve in the future? To be honest, when I saw this world view and the identity of the protagonist, I felt an atmosphere of tragedy, just like some underground spies had nothing to eat in the end, and I was a little worried...

It's a good-looking movie at night. I'll take a look at how Tina and the male lead are trying to make up for the 5 stars later. Come on, I think what I wrote earlier is very good and has potential.

It's really good. The male protagonist seems to have a very likable personality so far.