Qingmei************

This book is a little more relaxed, with a single heroine who is pure love [sending my heart] Whatever. . .

Male and female protagonists: The male protagonist is slow (he doesn't dare to be with the female protagonist because he wants to increase his strength and take revenge). The female protagonist really likes the male protagonist and has turned into a yandere. But the NPCs are very powerful, and the setting is similar to the path of cultivating immortals in the end of the world. The righteous path is weak, the demonic path kills people, and the furnace training is the norm. Easy to write but doesn't feel too relaxing The plot progress is relatively slow, but the writing is okay.

It's good to read, good to read, good to read, there are more emotional lines, it's a lot sweeter than the previous book, I really like the story of Gentle Master, but it's a pity that it's not a harem story, this book is worth reading. [Laughs][laughs] Not bad

After fifty-four calamities, calamity clouds still cover the sky. The light of the soul in his chest overwhelms all sentient beings, and the sword energy in his fists stretches across the northern plains. Four hundred years have passed and come and gone. How can we have a new look without death? Abandon this remnant body for the breeze, sweep across the sky and regain light years!

Only then did I realize that the protagonist is also named Mo Jian. Isn't this the pseudonym of the male protagonist in the previous book? Is there any connection?

Nice writing [blowing kiss] Big boost to the author 👏

Good-looking, love to watch, like to watch

It's okay, you can watch it

Not bad, I won my heart

It's beautiful, thank you to the author!

It's okay, it's pretty.

It's really good-looking and quite funny. I want to laugh all the time while watching it. Haha

It's very good, very well written, except for some places where it's a little bit toxic. Everything else is perfect

If the author is capable, as long as he polishes it more, he will definitely be able to write a better work. Overall, I felt that the words were gorgeous, the language was humorous, and it was quite interesting. However, the narration in some places seems a bit stiff after using more modifications, giving me a deliberate feeling of "writing". For example, in some places where the male protagonist or the female protagonist reveals their true feelings, I feel that this is not so natural, a bit stiff, and cannot bring out the emotions of the characters very well. In short, what I mean is that some places do not need to be modified deliberately with words. I personally think so.

666, Isn't it said that you are turning into a yandere? When will you start to change?

It's very good, and the author's literary talent is good, and there will be no procrastination.