I Put Jiuzhou at the Top of the Myriad Worlds!!

The narrative is female-oriented, the background is male-oriented, the group portraits are female-oriented, there are many high-profile female supporting characters, the female protagonist has no emotional ambiguity, and there are no close male supporting characters around her. The heroine design is okay, I look forward to the group portrait creation, the plot conflict is slightly insufficient (the sense of urgency is not enough. The copy is a little loose, the reality should be more tense), and the final exciting point can be amplified a little more. It's not a brainless cool article, it doesn't have a lot of praise, it doesn't have a golden finger, it doesn't have a lot of praise for its female supporting role, it doesn't have a word that humiliates a woman, it doesn't have a lot of praise [heartfelt] Here's a little suggestion: If you don't have CP, it's best not to add emotional scenes to the main/supporting characters. If you don't have CP in a female channel, you should be the heroine and focus on women. If you don't have CP, you won't expect Xiao Cong. Once you write Xiao, you will inevitably add male scenes. It's okay if you can explain it in a few words. If the length is too long, it will take away Xiao's presence. Female-oriented narratives are women's home field, and if too many men are portrayed, it is easy for them to take over the spotlight. Just a small suggestion, looking forward to the follow-up, feel free to do so.

Five stars for encouragement. Novice writers usually have trouble grasping the rhythm. Either they are a lot of nonsense or they talk a lot in a muddle. The pace of this article is good and the plot is quite interesting. I look forward to the future development. Well, it should be said that there are many male passers-by, few women, and many roles. Because there are many men, there are positives and negatives, reaching a very strange situation. Of course, this article is not a female-oriented narrative. What is said in the comment below is wrong.

This plot is quite special, but to be honest, if you encounter such a plot, 99.9999999% Of people will die.

The logic is effective, and the combat is well written. It can be seen that the world view is very large, and it is not just a male leader. There are many high-ranking women and powerful female players, which is great! Be encouraged! 😄

It's a very novel setting, and it looks pretty good so far. But the introduction says it's a group portrait, but now it's all about individuals fighting alone. I don't know if it looks good when it's a group portrait, or whether the author can grasp that degree.

Six-star praise ⭐️, the world background, framework, outline, and themes are all 100% original and very attractive. The heroine is cautious but can grow up quickly. There is nothing wrong with it.

Support the new book, don't be too lazy. The content of the book is still good. The first copy is very exciting. Although some things are written a bit sloppily, it does not affect reading. The world view of the dungeon feels very big. The content of the first dungeon revealed many different things, and the rhythm is still acceptable. Come on, author, please update more [flying kisses][flying kisses][flying kisses]

The protagonist is cautious, dares to gamble and fight, has perseverance, endurance and brains. I have just experienced the second copy, and I can see that the world view is huge. The author wants to write "Evolution", so the introduction states "No gender opposition"

Hahaha, what a big idea

Looks good, no big flaws