"What? This is obviously a child's nonsense!" Liang Yan didn't even eat the popsicles, but grabbed the manuscript on the table and held it in her arms.
"What has become of me? I can't continue writing! Huh..."
He sat up and poked his bulging mouth, "Okay, okay, I can't write anyway."
As a novel, I undoubtedly failed, but as a novice, I am not such a failure. In short, no matter how I read this book, it has no future, and I really don't know why I feel more and more guilty the more I write it. I am not a savior, I am a failure. I can only try to be more prepared and then...
Reader comments
You are the first one in all the Ninjago novels I have read that treats Lloyd like a girl [crying][crying][crying]
The writing is not bad. It would actually be better if the people who were sacrificed were replaced by the protagonist in the fourth episode of Elemental Arena. Then in the ghost story, the protagonist returns to fight Moro and reach a reconciliation with Lloyd. I actually think it is very good.
Actually, I think more importantly, I want to watch the protagonist before he comes back. It would be better if the story of Lloyd's experience could be written. I hope the author can write it. At the same time, I also want to take a look [laughs]
The character of the main character left me a bit suffocated, but since there are so few Phantom books, I might as well support it.
Sex-changing Lloyd + Minecraft + Ninjago feels okay [eating melon]
I felt that the second volume was too abrupt, with no connection to the full text and no foreshadowing. It was like walking on the road and suddenly jumping out of bed. However, skipping does not affect the reading (I have not read it), but skipping a large part of the original plot should be considered a poisonous point [eating melon]
More Lloyd drama. And is Lloyd the heroine?
Good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good
But I haven't finished watching it yet. What I like is when Liang Yanga was a little kid😍
Compared with the original version, the duplication check rate is still too high.
There's nothing I can do about it, I'm not happy to see it if others want to see it
Is Lloyd the heroine? By the way, when Lloyd gets older, he seems to be as tall as Kai and the others, right? Then the main character is about the same height as Vaed who has not grown in size.
This is the first time I've seen Lloyd transformed into a girl. It's very novel, but I hope there can be more cp scenes with the protagonist. There are too few cp scenes between them [crying]
I hope the author pays more attention to his health [laughs]
I wish the author a speedy recovery!
Give Lloyd and Liang more sweet interactions
It's very beautiful, but there's a little less written now, not enough to read at all.
The author did a very good job. I really like to see this special novel created by the author.
Oh, sexual transversion? Interesting. [Eat melon]
It's so beautiful, the protagonist is very gentle, and Goldfinger is the MC.
Come on! I like you, author! ! !
It looks good, I love watching it, I still watch it
This book is very good
Come on come on author
Come on, author, follow along
It feels good, but I don't understand some parts
Author, there are two you in this world.
A very good book, support the author
For me, I think it looks very good. I just hope that the emotional line can be written more. Hehehehe, there will be more updates [laughs][laughs]
You are the first one in all the Ninjago novels I have read that treats Lloyd like a girl [crying][crying][crying]
The writing is not bad. It would actually be better if the people who were sacrificed were replaced by the protagonist in the fourth episode of Elemental Arena. Then in the ghost story, the protagonist returns to fight Moro and reach a reconciliation with Lloyd. I actually think it is very good. Actually, I think more importantly, I want to watch the protagonist before he comes back. It would be better if the story of Lloyd's experience could be written. I hope the author can write it. At the same time, I also want to take a look [laughs]
The character of the main character left me a bit suffocated, but since there are so few Phantom books, I might as well support it.
Sex-changing Lloyd + Minecraft + Ninjago feels okay [eating melon] I felt that the second volume was too abrupt, with no connection to the full text and no foreshadowing. It was like walking on the road and suddenly jumping out of bed. However, skipping does not affect the reading (I have not read it), but skipping a large part of the original plot should be considered a poisonous point [eating melon]
More Lloyd drama. And is Lloyd the heroine?
Good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good looking good But I haven't finished watching it yet. What I like is when Liang Yanga was a little kid😍
Compared with the original version, the duplication check rate is still too high. There's nothing I can do about it, I'm not happy to see it if others want to see it
Is Lloyd the heroine? By the way, when Lloyd gets older, he seems to be as tall as Kai and the others, right? Then the main character is about the same height as Vaed who has not grown in size.
This is the first time I've seen Lloyd transformed into a girl. It's very novel, but I hope there can be more cp scenes with the protagonist. There are too few cp scenes between them [crying] I hope the author pays more attention to his health [laughs]
I wish the author a speedy recovery!
Give Lloyd and Liang more sweet interactions
It's very beautiful, but there's a little less written now, not enough to read at all.
The author did a very good job. I really like to see this special novel created by the author.
Oh, sexual transversion? Interesting. [Eat melon]
It's so beautiful, the protagonist is very gentle, and Goldfinger is the MC.
Come on! I like you, author! ! !
It looks good, I love watching it, I still watch it
This book is very good
Come on come on author
Come on, author, follow along
It feels good, but I don't understand some parts
Author, there are two you in this world.
A very good book, support the author
For me, I think it looks very good. I just hope that the emotional line can be written more. Hehehehe, there will be more updates [laughs][laughs]