[Character development + gacha + multiple heroines + nearly invincible protagonist + steady progression + data-driven + plot-focused + everyday-life scenes]
My name is Lin Lingyi. After a speeding truck sent me flying and I woke up, I discovered that the world had changed completely.
In this world, humanity is constantly threatened by abyssal monsters, and spirit-contractors are the only force capable of fighting them. To become a spirit-contractor, you have to draw a spirit contract card at the age of eighteen and summon your first spirit. Some people draw an S-rank spirit and soar to success; others draw an F-rank spirit and fall into despair; and some fail to summon anything at all, leaving them to spend their lives as fragile ordinary people.
“Wait, spirit contracts? Gacha? Why does this setting sound so much like the world in that game on my phone?”
On the day of his first spirit summoning, Lin Lingyi, who had never spent money in a game before, tentatively topped up six yuan. He immediately summoned the only golden SSR heroine spirit in the entire game, and from then on, everything changed.
Monthly pass? Sign me up! Quarterly and annual passes? Sign me up! Limited-time deals? I'll take them all! I'll spend as much as I can, until I've spent it all!
But just as Lin Lingyi was enjoying the benefits of spending money, a new problem emerged.
“Is there no justice? No law? You're spirit contracts, spirits bound by contract. Since I summoned you, I'm your master. So what's with all you scheming girls trying to make a move on me?”
Under the pressure of the spirit girls, Lin Lingyi paid a terrible price for the mess he'd made.
Secretly give yourself a good review... This is my first time writing this type of article, and I didn't control the pacing well. The early stages of the plot may be a bit clumsy and draggy. I hope you guys can bear with me 🥺 🥺 But if something bad should be scolded, you don't need to be polite~~
Good luck to the author. Have you considered adding some beast girls later? Classic underground boxing gym, classic coming to rob the male protagonist. Since you cherish the male protagonist's ability, shouldn't you give benefits instead of threatening the male protagonist? I don't understand. Then again, since the male protagonist has nothing to protect himself, what should he do in a high-profile manner 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦 🤦
It's okay, but the author is too persistent in explaining the data. You can consider writing some specific data in the chapter reviews to reduce the occurrence rate in the text. Most people will feel irritated by repeated data. Of course, if you insist on writing it like this, we won't fix it. It's just that there will be fewer people who can persist in reading. 5 Stars. Wait and see.
Go fast when you need to, and slow when you need to. When you need to write about combat, write about combat. When you need to write about daily life, write about daily life. You can't talk about water either. For this type of writing, it's pretty much the same. There are already 11,000 viewers. Come on! There are too few comments now
Looking forward to the performance of the new book, come on
Introduced from the first book, looking forward to the second book being more exciting
Apart from the author's self-destruction, the text is very good
Come on, author, I believe you can write well
Not bad, very pretty
Very good, worth having