As a modern basketball player, Li Nianjiu traveled to the world of Slam Dunk and became a rich second generation. He combined the physical fitness of two generations with modern basketball technology. How can he write his own story in the world of Slam Dunk?
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I prefer this type to nearly half of Shohoku fanfics. It seems to be okay so far, but there are a lot of minor problems. For example, the protagonist's combat power is a bit unstable. It has always been said that the NBA is physical and has played league-level games in the United States. When it comes to Japanese high school games, the opponent is supposed to crush all the high school students who are opposing him. As a result, sometimes it seems that the game is back and forth, not so crushing. Also, I remember that the games in Slam Dunk were played in halves and halves. As a result, the author sometimes used halves, but sometimes used a four-quarter system, which was a mess. Also in the chapters where Immortal is injured, the protagonist's name is sometimes written as Immortal, which feels very confusing.
If possible, please break it down into paragraphs. Thank you.
I prefer this type to nearly half of Shohoku fanfics. It seems to be okay so far, but there are a lot of minor problems. For example, the protagonist's combat power is a bit unstable. It has always been said that the NBA is physical and has played league-level games in the United States. When it comes to Japanese high school games, the opponent is supposed to crush all the high school students who are opposing him. As a result, sometimes it seems that the game is back and forth, not so crushing. Also, I remember that the games in Slam Dunk were played in halves and halves. As a result, the author sometimes used halves, but sometimes used a four-quarter system, which was a mess. Also in the chapters where Immortal is injured, the protagonist's name is sometimes written as Immortal, which feels very confusing.
If possible, please break it down into paragraphs. Thank you.