HP: Tenderness Outside Time

This is the most enjoyable Sri Lankan CP book I have ever read! This book describes Noah's love for Sri Lanka very delicately! There is also this sentence, "Snape, you have pushed away the people who care about you again." This is Sif's mockery of himself, and it also contains the scarred heart.

It's a pity that it's not over yet. Of course, I don't want it to end so quickly. I strongly recommend it. The author's logic is clear, the protagonist's IQ is online, and the two are strong (can it be considered mutual redemption?). The author's writing style is very nice, and the subject matter is novel. If you can continue writing like this, it will attract more readers. Moreover, the content is coherent, the transitions are not stuck, and the logic is normal and does not make people feel stiff. This is very good at keeping readers from feeling bored. The author's knowledge reserve is also sufficient, which makes the entire article very good. The world view of the novel is very complete, and the setting is also very complete. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into it. Noah is the sunshine that comes for the professor, but the sunshine is not the sun. Someone blocks the dazzling part for you, and only delivers the warmest ray to your hand. No matter how cold the corner is, as long as there is a beam of light coming for you, spring will slowly grow.

It's so good to watch. It's rare to see a teacher from Sri Lanka click in immediately. The character's personality is also well grasped. I look forward to the teacher's follow-up chapters.

It looks good, but changing history comes at a cost. Gellert hopes to save Dumbledore and uses himself as a bargaining chip for this. What about Severus? He didn't want Severus to lose someone he loved because of him again.

First of all, the professor has set up a good job Secondly, the protagonist Noah's ultimate goal is very clear - to save Snape in the war Finally, the daily emotions between the two are very delicate and sincere, which can touch people's hearts. Overall, this is a good book worth reading

The content is wonderful and the emotions are expressed very well. Noah's emotions towards Sif are delicate and complex. At the same time, Sif's emotions towards Noah have also changed. I look forward to the following plots. The author will give you a lot of support [laughs]

It's a good article, quite interesting. I like some of the descriptions very much, especially the previous descriptions of Noah doing experiments. It looks very professional and is very consistent with HP's style. But there are also areas for improvement: (This is not a criticism, just what I think can be improved) 1. Please divide it into paragraphs appropriately and describe the details appropriately. If each paragraph is too long, it will kill the reader's interest in reading and reduce the readability of the article; 2. The pace of the plot feels a bit fast, and some details could be polished better, especially the relationship between Noah and Si Jiao. The relationship develops too fast, and Si Jiao's change in attitude towards Noah is also a bit abrupt. I gave it five stars. I hope the author can keep writing. Come on!

The plot arrangement is reasonable, the characters are suitable, and the most important thing is not to criticize any of the characters. When you watch it, you will feel that this is how the real Snape reacted when he fell in love. The ending is very happy, and it can be called a dream master level.

Not bad! The male protagonist in this article has a clear development path and clear goals. The golden finger (?) Is also very reasonable. Although some of the school's daily designs are not very "original", they can be used as private designs and are totally fine. The ocss are completely together after the completion. The other sub-CPs (non-original characters) except GGAD (or Tonks and Lupin obviously) are all open-ended and can be touched at will? The highlight of this article is probably the hero's rescue route and development route! It looks refreshing and refreshing😊 Oh! Five hours, a very comfortable pace☺️ If you are particularly concerned (does anyone really care) that the sweet version of the extra ss is OOC but you have already read the fanfic of cp being ss, who would care about this (hey!)

A book worth reading! It is rare among the Sri Lankan fics that I have read that it retains all the important plots and the main character is not particularly hung up on. It is just the Saint Godfather and the replacement family identity. It is still smooth and not too outrageous. I replayed the story but all the characters made me feel warm in my heart when I watched it, (but it reminded me of the original war before and after, ahhhhhh, the psychological committee member made me uncomfortable!) The story line was also handled very well, and the setting of parallel time and space was cleverly designed into an organization similar to the Time and Space Administration, and it was so satisfying to watch it all at once. . . Although I feel that Noah is not as shrewd as previously depicted in the subsequent plot, hahahaha, maybe it is love that makes people take off their guard. I like this type of protagonist so much. I have a paranoid love for Si that I can't let go of but that I cherish extremely much. It would be great if the original Si could also get this kind of preference.

I don't understand that the rating for such a masterpiece is not 9.9 Is it because people who read books have their brains filled with splendens? The author only shows the structure of Hongfa at the end. The protagonists in thousands of worlds are trying to chase and save professors in different time and space. The setting of 07 made me cry in just a few words Isn't this what we are in front of the screen? Every Sri Lankan fan wants the professor to be happy and live. From the original novel to the movie to the fan, from watching to getting to know the professor, to falling in love with the professor. This article is not just a story about the hero and the professor It is the epitome of Sri Lanka fans and their expectations come true! I would like to express my sincere gratitude to the author. This is the most empathic day I have seen in the 15 years since I started watching a fan. I have slowly come out of my PTSD tendency. Every day when I fall in love with the professor is so beautiful. I chase the sun and get up early and go to bed early. It took me 19 hours to read it, so I read it again and again.

Suddenly I realized that I didn't post a book review. What follows is my feelings. Why when I fell in love with you, you were no longer there. A two-male HP fanfic, the original male protagonist and Severus. After the war, Severus died, but the male protagonist fell in love with him from the traces he left before, and tried every means to return to his timeline. He was willing to use his life to run to him. If he failed, I would come to you, and if he succeeded, I would come to love you. Noah's love for fried chicken is very good, and I feel sorry for Sev. His past has destined him to not accept love from someone easily. The sentence in the article "Snape, you have pushed away the people who care about you again" I really feel that Sev is going to be broken, but this is enough to prove how important Noah is to him, but the rhythm in the later period is a bit tiring and plot-oriented, especially After their "breakup", I felt pricked all over when I couldn't see the sweet couple, but it was actually okay. I was very depressed. Noah couldn't tell Sif the reasons for some of his actions. Sif was also angry with Noah, but Noah couldn't just watch Sif die. This was the purpose of coming to this world. Is it them who were tortured? And I was whining. There are other CPs, such as Deha or Harder. It doesn't matter, I will eat them both. There are other CPs, all from Tianmi. I want to say one more thing, sister yyds! She is truly the best sister in the world, and I am so moved. This book is not bragging, but I just want to say about those "bullies" that they are not born bad, they have done all kinds of bad things, they are not good, and no one forgives their bullying behavior, but do you want to watch them die if you can save lives? Even if you want them to die, you have to wait in line, and Sifu is the first. All in all, this book is sweet, and there are some abuses in the later stage, but it is still sweet. It is sweet but has a knife, which is a fairy tale. You can knock many pairs of CPs as much as you want. The capital HE, the extras are also very interesting. If you want to knock more, you can join the group, and you will have a good meal with the teacher. In fact, it made me cry, but more importantly, I was moved. Noah and Sifu will be together forever. Noah's letter to Sifu surprised and moved me even more. I love you, just like I am in love with you.

Marvelous! This is the most satisfying book I have read recently! The characterizations of the professor and Noah are both great!

I hope Severus's psychological changes can be detailed. If there is a chance, the 3+1 group can also be weakened. Although I don't resist and accept it, I will also like the deputy CP, but I would like to see the double redemption and quick push of the time group... If there is a hidden line and feelings, let's just pretend that I didn't see it (I hope the edible version can be reduced)

It's a very good book written by Sri Lanka. Noah and Sif are very sweet, and the sad moments in the middle are completely acceptable to the point of being mildly sad. The ending of the story where everyone survives is particularly good. Although I hate Sirius very much, I have to admit that he is Harry's only family except his aunt's family. Harry is a good boy and the four little ones are also very cute. The pace of the plot is a bit fast but very good. People can understand the whole story and there are no gaps. I really like it. The characters are also very three-dimensional and everyone is very vivid. This is how love is. I travel through time in order to meet you. The author writes it well. The happy couple should be together forever [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

Well written It's just a little thing that I've been struggling with... Noah finally returned his body to Emerson. This is an unfolding that I didn't expect. It's also good that he doesn't have to force himself to play the noble Slytherin. But it always gives people the feeling of being plucked from the fruit, such as the signature of Wolfsbane Potion? Just a few random thoughts...

It's the most consistent novel I've seen so far. The male protagonist doesn't have a big gold finger and his feelings towards Sri Lanka are the most satisfying to me. Wow, this article is my first time writing a praise article for storytelling. Why is it so low! This male protagonist is totally awesome to me, especially the way he gets along with Sri Lanka's teacher, it's so cute, you two give me a hard 99! Sifu is also very cute. Sifu, we like you.

The writing style is delicate and the emotions are sincere, without deliberately criticizing other characters [cry][cry][cry][cry] It looks so good that I cried to death

Keep up the good work and try to finish the National Day. Hey hey hey

The character creation is very good. For the main character who crosses time and becomes a little snake, the two characters are very good. It is worth mentioning that most of Ron's books are accustomed to exaggerating Ron's bad side. This book amplifies Ron's kindness and righteousness, and his absolute affirmation of his friends. He has no doubts.

I finally found gold in the history of tomatoes [crying][crying][crying]

It's really beautiful. This is the most beautiful thing I've ever seen. There's nothing else I can say about it. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Please bear with me screaming here. I hope I won't be deducted by Professor Snape and Professor Byron.

Nice! Great sweet article! The affectionate fox travels back in time to attack, and the love that is always available, coupled with the professor's decisive confirmation of his feelings, is a sweet story rarely seen in HP. The most important thing is that the writing is very good, and the plot and emotional drama are perfectly integrated. It is a rare good book. It is highly recommended by senior readers of HP.

It's so beautiful. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ry oozing ssssssssssssssssssssingsinginging kissing kissing kiss of kissing kissing boy of the teacher, girl of the teacher of the school that you should be able to stop.

Sweet love makes me happy, but twisted emotions make me intoxicated😍😍😍😍😍

The writing is very delicate. The fox travels through time and space, and finally meets Sif, and melts the ice in the professor's heart with love and restraint.

It's beautiful, I like it very much [sending my heart]

The teacher's writing is really nice [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

It looks great. Does Sri Lanka teach you left or right position?

It looks so good. I'll knock it off first (づ￣3￣)づ╭❤~