After Becoming a Top Guide, Bai Yueguang Was Robbed by a Mad Dog

The plot is good and the writing is okay. I suggest you save more manuscripts and change the cover. This cover is really hard to make people want to click on it. Keep up the good work!

It's a short story, I can read it anyway, but I feel like some settings may make me unconsciously associate it with other things, so it's a bit of a filter. After that, the little guys inside are quite cute, so you can look back without any pressure. But maybe in the end, the heroine only favored her brother, and it felt unfair to others [laughing] But perhaps because of the length, other people's emotions are indeed not deep enough. I think some of the settings in it can be expanded and written. If there is a framework, the perfect writing should be more comprehensive. Millions is not a problem [cool] But seeing as the author also said that it's up to you to write, if you're practicing writing, then you don't ask for anything else, just read a short story to spice it up [laughing] Come on!

I read this in one sitting and it's really good. The five-star review is absolutely correct. This is really the author's daughter. I was originally worried about abusing the baby girl, but it really didn't happen. Hehe, I hope you can type quickly. Also, the author should pay attention to his health.

Beautiful, I feel sorry for my brother, I want my brother [crying]

Go ahead, I like the heroine's character so much.

It's good-looking, super good-looking. The heroine is weak at first, but she has strong perseverance and suffered a lot. The plot transitions are smooth and the psychological description is natural. I hope that the subsequent plots will be the same as before and the heroine will be strong and strong. Five-star praise

The female protagonist is a smart and hard-working type, and all the male protagonists have their own characteristics. The system is not easy to control. So far, the only thing I want to complain about is that my brother has lost his memory again and again [face covering]

Author, are you playing in deep space? [Laughing and crying]

If you like it, be sure to keep updating. I have been feeling tired of novels recently. This is one of the few spiritual food I have [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

I think it is very well written and the story is very heart-warming. I have found it over now and I feel a little reluctant and regretful, but I think they will be very, very happy in the parallel time and space. It is a super heart-warming story [Love] [Love]

😘It's very beautiful and the heroine's character is very distinct.

How could it be so beautiful!

Looking back, the emotional line between the heroine and her brother is so delicate, it feels logical and natural.

Okay, the writing is good!

To me, it feels pretty good. Thank you for your hard work, author. Come on, I'm waiting for your next book. [Sending my heart to you]

It's good-looking, but I feel like it could be written more. Many things have been covered in one stroke because of the emotional flow of the main writer.

It's so good. I finished reading it all in one go. The setting is quite novel. It's a pity that the author wrote too little and it's not enough to read. I hope I can add a few extra chapters.

Super good-looking, super good-looking! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's okay, but it can be seen that many content settings in the article are integrated with deep space. I hope there will be more originality of my own.

Looks good! Ahhhh, this one is really beautiful. The heroine is kind but very smart. She also likes to get along with her younger sister and her older brother. I'm so happy ꉂꉂ(ᵔᗜᵔ*)

Please update soon, I thought it was finished. I didn't expect that the update hasn't been finished yet, so hurry up and work hard to write [note]

I just discovered this book now Very well written~~ Come on author ٩(˃̶͈̀௰˂̶͈́)و! ! !