(Time travel, single female protagonist, no harem, invincible flow + system, follow the plot)
This is my first time writing a novel, but the text and content are not good enough. In addition, the author is short on time and is busy reviewing for the college entrance examination. Of course, if you have any questions, you can ask them and the author will try his best.
Reader comments
I'm afraid you can't see it, so I give it five stars. I dare say that the author has never watched Naruto. Sometimes he may not have played it for a year. What is the filth of the fourth battle? Uchiha Madara was knocked unconscious by stones for a whole day? Even if you don't have Hashirama cells, your skeleton, and the back of your head is slightly smashed, let me go, it's really awesome, your rock is more awesome than the Rasengan, the fourth generation Raikage was fine after taking a block, but here you are, you will fall asleep after eating a stone like an eternity, and you will be even more awesome in the later period. I have never seen Boruto. What do you mean by pottery stone, fine decoration, and a trace of Xun's breath? The two of them really have this ability. They have been searching for so many years in the ninja world. Ever since they knew Kaguya, they have been looking for Kaguya for a long time without finding it. What makes me even more sad is that he faints at every turn. Hashirama's cells are arranged layer by layer. I won't even mention it. If you let Shiro Zetsu take a hit, Shiro Zetsu won't faint. What does it mean to fight a war of attrition? If you can't defeat the King of Hell, what is the third form? Susanoo can reach a thousand meters. Your third form is a pencil, and your fourth form cannot go ten thousand meters. And in your third form, you can kill Yama Emperor in half with a single knife, which is really awesome. Besides, don't you have a wooden shield and component cells to fight? If you have a deep understanding of the story of Naruto and Genshin Impact, please stop reading when you reach chapter 50. I'm afraid you will be pissed to death. In the comments, a group of fun people said that ninjas are particularly fragile. No matter how fragile the team is, they are still on the same level as Raikai's Ninja War Love. Not to mention that it is a body of filthy soil. Even if there is no filthy soil, it is at least a Ninja War in the ring. Alas! Even if True Love really fights with Hachi, you may not think that Hachi can really beat him. The comments said that the good ones are either the navy, the soul, or the Naruto plot, but I haven't seen too much of it.
How can Susanoo move so easily when he is nearly a thousand meters away😅 With such a body and height, he can pinch a demon like a chicken. Even though he does not have the reincarnated body, but with Madara's ability, his body will not be so brittle. Tianzhi Zhenxing lacks expressiveness. Judging from the original work, the scope of the explosion is not limited to that area. The author Pay attention to these issues when writing later, and also mention how the protagonist feels a little embarrassed in the real world. The protagonist has these abilities and is a little less powerful. I feel better like Madara. The main problem is that the expression is not strong enough. Susan should be more reasonable, nearly a thousand meters...
Also, when using Super Shinra on the boat at the beginning of Inazuma, you have to lose the boat. The author lacks experience. Please improve it more. Follow my example and get 4109 points🤓
The book is very good, but when there are many people in the novel, it feels like only one person is talking.
I hope I can finish it
So is it a single girl or multiple girls [thinking]
It's purely good-looking, better than the plot of Genshin Impact
Finally found a person with Madara's ability and intact character
Do you want to dance too?
Come on, author, it's very interesting.
Very beautiful, very unusual
I don't have anything to say, because it's so beautiful
Very beautiful and highly recommended.
The characters in the book speak without ""
Personally I think it looks great, but why don't you get any review points?
I'm afraid you can't see it, so I give it five stars. I dare say that the author has never watched Naruto. Sometimes he may not have played it for a year. What is the filth of the fourth battle? Uchiha Madara was knocked unconscious by stones for a whole day? Even if you don't have Hashirama cells, your skeleton, and the back of your head is slightly smashed, let me go, it's really awesome, your rock is more awesome than the Rasengan, the fourth generation Raikage was fine after taking a block, but here you are, you will fall asleep after eating a stone like an eternity, and you will be even more awesome in the later period. I have never seen Boruto. What do you mean by pottery stone, fine decoration, and a trace of Xun's breath? The two of them really have this ability. They have been searching for so many years in the ninja world. Ever since they knew Kaguya, they have been looking for Kaguya for a long time without finding it. What makes me even more sad is that he faints at every turn. Hashirama's cells are arranged layer by layer. I won't even mention it. If you let Shiro Zetsu take a hit, Shiro Zetsu won't faint. What does it mean to fight a war of attrition? If you can't defeat the King of Hell, what is the third form? Susanoo can reach a thousand meters. Your third form is a pencil, and your fourth form cannot go ten thousand meters. And in your third form, you can kill Yama Emperor in half with a single knife, which is really awesome. Besides, don't you have a wooden shield and component cells to fight? If you have a deep understanding of the story of Naruto and Genshin Impact, please stop reading when you reach chapter 50. I'm afraid you will be pissed to death. In the comments, a group of fun people said that ninjas are particularly fragile. No matter how fragile the team is, they are still on the same level as Raikai's Ninja War Love. Not to mention that it is a body of filthy soil. Even if there is no filthy soil, it is at least a Ninja War in the ring. Alas! Even if True Love really fights with Hachi, you may not think that Hachi can really beat him. The comments said that the good ones are either the navy, the soul, or the Naruto plot, but I haven't seen too much of it.
How can Susanoo move so easily when he is nearly a thousand meters away😅 With such a body and height, he can pinch a demon like a chicken. Even though he does not have the reincarnated body, but with Madara's ability, his body will not be so brittle. Tianzhi Zhenxing lacks expressiveness. Judging from the original work, the scope of the explosion is not limited to that area. The author Pay attention to these issues when writing later, and also mention how the protagonist feels a little embarrassed in the real world. The protagonist has these abilities and is a little less powerful. I feel better like Madara. The main problem is that the expression is not strong enough. Susan should be more reasonable, nearly a thousand meters... Also, when using Super Shinra on the boat at the beginning of Inazuma, you have to lose the boat. The author lacks experience. Please improve it more. Follow my example and get 4109 points🤓
The book is very good, but when there are many people in the novel, it feels like only one person is talking.
I hope I can finish it So is it a single girl or multiple girls [thinking]
It's purely good-looking, better than the plot of Genshin Impact
Finally found a person with Madara's ability and intact character
Do you want to dance too?
Come on, author, it's very interesting.
Very beautiful, very unusual
I don't have anything to say, because it's so beautiful
Very beautiful and highly recommended.
The characters in the book speak without ""
Personally I think it looks great, but why don't you get any review points?