[No System, leveling up in the early stages, starts crushing the competition around chapter 70]
Once a lowly servant disciple, Chen Zhao risked changing his spiritual roots in pursuit of a future on the path to immortality. As he was pursued by the sect elders, he accidentally activated a mysterious treasure and gained the ability to travel between worlds.
But why is the world on the other side a Western fantasy world?
What magic? What battle aura? Can't they sense the abundant spiritual energy in this world?
Why is nobody harvesting all these spiritual herbs? You say they're all defective potions? Then what does a proper one look like?
The demon race has invaded with its armies, and the human race has been routed for a thousand miles. Looks like this world is in danger too! Better get out of here as soon as possible... Wait, I accidentally smashed a Foundation Establishment cultivator while running away, and you're telling me this is a demon general?
Something's not right here! Who put a yellow robe on me?
Dragons are attacking, and the dragon race is purging the world? A talking body-tempering treasure has delivered itself right to my door.
Evil gods are reviving, demons are invading? What kindhearted demonic cultivator sent me all these merit points?
An undead disaster, a tide of death? What a coincidence. I was just looking for materials to refine battle puppets.
The forest is running wild, a giant-tree disaster? Why has my stock of pills suddenly grown? Anyone care to explain?
Faith has fractured, and the gods are facing their twilight? I've had my eye on those magical treasures called Gungnir and Mjolnir. Could I “borrow” them?
The void is devouring everything, and the world is dissolving? I was just wishing for materials to contemplate the Dao. This couldn't have come at a better time!
Oh no! I've got the unification bug. Let's start with a small goal: bring the entire planet together!
The writing is quite nice, better than other books of the same genre, and better than the kind that writes about a thousand-year-old immortal emperor who is suppressed by the laws of the world and can only talk about love. He talks about regaining his strength but does not do anything as good as the author. I have given up on that kind of book after reading it too many times. I had to bite the bullet and read it before. Shi Shi has read it too much. This book by the author is really good 🤦
Fellow Taoists, it's me, the author First of all, thank you fellow Taoists for your love. I won't say much else. I will try my best to update it every day. I am usually very busy at work, so I cannot reply to some comments in time. I hope you will forgive me. Newbies create, and there are inevitably loopholes and imperfections in the framework. If you are confused, just laugh and laugh at the author for being sick again. The country will remain green and the water will flow forever. I wish all fellow Taoists good health, all the best, family reunion, and smooth sailing.
It's so verbose, and the setting is also extremely poisonous. It's so easy to change the spiritual roots. Just pull out the dead person's and stuff it in the stomach. It's unbelievable. I've been reading novels for fifteen years, and I've never seen such an unnatural setting. Geniuses in the world of immortality are all hunting targets. So as long as your cultivation is strong, your descendants will all have the best spiritual root qualifications. It's extremely poisonous! Run!
Everyone in the comment section says it looks good, but I don't think it looks good [laughs awkwardly]
After reading more than 50 chapters, I thought that Qi Refining was the base camp of Jindan's millennium plan, and he was already a god by killing Jindan. I didn't expect that there were masters. Because it would not be opened for a while, I didn't need the storage bag of Jindan and buried it. I didn't see the sense of interpenetration between the two worlds. There was no way to combine alchemy with alchemy, and there was no way to combine magic with spells. The magical world is just like a background board, and I am starting to enjoy it after more than 70 pictures. Anyway, I can't hold it anymore. The writing of the world of cultivating immortals is not very good. The protagonist is neither good nor evil. He can't get up and down. There is one in the middle of the card. Npcs are popping out in piles. It has no effect at all. How has the combat power collapsed? I have to make a copy to explain a lot. There is almost nothing in the plot. It makes my eyes sour. It can be said to be quite boring.
I keep saying that I am afraid that there are some old monsters in that Western fantasy world, so I have to be careful, and I always use ancient Chinese titles to talk to people? You've already searched your soul and you still don't understand? And didn't your protagonist travel from modern times? At least you know a little bit, right?
The previous plot is relatively compact, the protagonist's growth is step-by-step, there is nothing wrong with the behavioral logic, and the actions are very purposeful. Although the fish-explosion world started in Chapter 70 and is about to return to the main storyline, it would not look good if it really exploded. It's not that this idea is not good, it is very creative and refreshing, but when fighting, you are 50-50 against level 6 opponents, and you are 50-50 against level 5 opponents. It is understandable to learn the combat skills of Western Fantasy Time, but you have said it yourself. In the battle of level 5, you wrote two chapters in just a few minutes. Don't you think it's a waste? Then I returned to the world of cultivation, and it didn't look good. Instead, I continued the way I wrote in the Western Fantasy World. I always entered the game leisurely when the friendly forces were at a disadvantage. To be honest, this was really watery, with a very poor look and feel, and I quickly became tired of aesthetics. In addition, there are too many "ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh", not just this one, but also a lot of bad jokes. Occasionally adding them to the article can make it more interesting, but at a glance, the inclusion of such things in a large space particularly affects the sense of immersion, and it also feels like it was kicked out when it was about to be taken in. It feels like going to the toilet can be solved smoothly and comfortably, but it is broken by a twitch. These shortcomings are really fatal. 4 Stars is a score for friendship after watching it for so long and the early setting up part is very attractive.
At the moment I feel so-so, a bit interesting, but not much
I have been chasing this book for a long time, but I just found out today that the rating is only 5.9? It's too low, not great, but it can definitely make up for the lack of books, and the logic is not too flawed. It should at least get a 7.5-8.3 Score.
Poison, poison, poison,.