Bengtie: Pam Used It as a Speed Bump at the Beginning to Make Him Fly.

It's okay. The following are my suggestions. If you don't like it, you don't have to read it. You think Shi may have eaten too little (stacked armor). The strengths are okay. The writing style is fair and highlights the protagonist (note only the protagonist). Many people say that the group suppresses the protagonist too harshly. I don't think it is too harsh. In fact, the suppression force is to highlight the protagonist. Based on the protagonist's previous strength. If you can't suppress the combat power, just let the protagonist find a place to farm. If you say that the pressure is too harsh, it's just a matter of brains. Also, the purpose of suppressing the combat power is to highlight the protagonist. For example, in the plot of Bengtieyuan, the protagonist team fights Cocolia. Is there a bunch of people there to make soy sauce? Most fanfics don't use brains. Of course, the author didn't say it, right? By the way, do you know why it is 4 stars? Because you kid 🐴 gave Sag to someone else, I'm so angry that I have a stomachache 😣

After quitting traveling and then returning, I started writing this novel inspired by my thoughts. This is also my first time writing a fanfic, so I may write a bit poorly, such as incomplete checking of settings and the like. I hope everyone will bear with me. I am also working very hard on the creation and making up for the regrets in the original plot. There is one last sentence... Please feel free to scold me. If you scold me, I will read your comments. After all, you are my dearest readers. [Cool] Thank you everyone for reading!

To be precise, the plot is quite good, but the settings of these legendary elves in the God of War League are actually very strong, but your settings are very weak. To be precise, their settings themselves are very strong. In fact, it is also good for you to try to set up some plots yourself. I actually just want to ask, is there a female protagonist? Hey hey hey [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

The writing is quite good, and there is nothing particularly bad about it for the time being. When will the creditor be changed? Every time I see a creditor telling someone who owes a debt, it is very difficult for the creditor to break.

Okay, okay, the two chefs are ecstatic, the Purcell elf adds Bentie, it looks good! The author must have saved the manuscript, so hurry up and serve it up! I want to see Rey, Gaia, Cassius, Blake, Muse, Pony, Incarus, Zagros, Hamoret, Mirius...[Smirk] The battle power in the early stage is really heavy, but everything will be explained later. It is really exciting, especially the Star God battle!

No, are some plots skipped? Let me ask. The story of flying sky and chaos. There is also the plot of the departure on the 8th day. None

By the way, when can the author summon the three elves that came out when Ultraman was mobilized, Belial, Zero and Tiga?

Life is everywhere... Nowhere to be found. If you don't code, I won't read [laughs evilly]

Very innovative, new ideas

My Sargeras, I want to see Sargeras and Inkaros together, they are enemies after all, it's a pity

Mainly to criticize the CP of the protagonist and Huan Hu. ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Love to watch, Seerchu and Bengtiechu are ecstatic

I think it's very beautiful

The main character group is a bit weak but I think it's pretty good.

May I ask, is there a female protagonist? Is it single or multiple?

Can the Wuwei Awakened One collide with the Star God?

The writing is quite good, keep up the good work, author.