The Hot-Blooded Wanderer Pretends to Be a Big Boss and the Riddler Queen

Hmm... I might be a little more straightforward in my evaluation. The advantages are obvious, the writing is strong, and the worldview clearly has its own framework. The shortcomings are also obvious. The expression method is not good, and it is tiring to watch. Furthermore, the characterization is not very good, and it is often very fragmented. The subject matter, the characters, the characters, and the writing style are all very good, so I won't say much more. I'm not very good at praising others. I'm also an imaginative player myself. I agree with the author in many places, but what the author writes often doesn't meet my expectations. So I will focus on some of the shortcomings: the author cannot express the plot and characters accurately and concisely, and there is a "no hook" situation analyzed by Lin Bai. At present, there is no plot that I am looking forward to, and I am confused. Furthermore, the atmosphere of the entire article has a feeling of being depressing and bland, not because of the desperate future in the plot setting, but because the author seems to... Modify the sentence to make it look like endless stagnant water, which is too watery! There is another point that I pay most attention to when reading a book: "the charm of the protagonist." Unfortunately, the charm of the protagonist in your novel is not enough to fascinate me as a reader. I hope there will be more highlights in the future. Well, rational evaluation and personal opinion may be a bit sharp.

Give yourself a five-star praise for coding seriously. ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

This is a very good-looking and novel comic with two male protagonists. Because of the riddle character Lin Bai, the flower of the high mountain, and the passionate and sunny Mo Zeyu, coupled with the urgent atmosphere of the coming apocalypse, combined with themes such as hot-blooded comics of superpowers, the author has filled the atmosphere. There is a plot, the characters are obviously vivid, and the main characters are Xie who is cursed by luck, and the black crow who is the intelligence. It is a rare and conscientious work. If the setting is not broken, the plot is not broken, and it is not difficult to finish, I think it will definitely become popular. So far, it is a masterpiece. Don't take it off the shelves, the author is great, it's my spiritual food

How can I put it this way? It's very nice. It's very nice. It's super nice. Haha, I watched a similar one before, but the "protagonist" knew the existence of the artist and knew that "who" was pretending to be a god. I found it very uncomfortable. I liked this, I really liked this setting. Has it been taken off the shelves? ? ? ?

As usual, I want to watch the updates. After all, I have reached the critical point, but what I saw has indeed been taken off the shelves. I don't know what happened because I am just a silent reader, but I know that the author must have been wronged, so I support Dada's choice and hope that Dada will be in my own life. Happiness, this story cannot continue, but I believe they must shine in their world. I like this book very much. It brought me some happiness during my internship life, so I want to thank you for letting me see such an interesting plot and my favorite setting. Finally, I wish you a happy day.

Why are you gone! ! ! Your writing is so good! ! How did it become like this! It's not a book I've only had for a month! ! ! ! Why are you gone? ! .[Almost crying][almost crying][crying][crying]

The books written by the author are all very suitable to my taste. Well, I am not very good at saying beautiful sentences, so I will give you five stars [laugh][like][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][K ISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS]

No. I came back from vacation to see how many updates there were, but it was taken off the shelves. No.

I originally wanted to keep it, but today I suddenly found out that it was removed from the shelves. Maybe someone was jealous, and then the evil spirit was at work. Well, I will keep this book until you come back.

Why is such a beautiful book removed from the shelves? ! My spiritual food is gone˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅ It's rare to read a serialized book, why was it suddenly taken off the shelves (●●)

The most pity is that after reading halfway through, the novel was taken off the shelves for some reason. It's like in another world, a group of people just started a new story, and it ended abruptly. It's such a pity, such a pity. What's the difference between this and the final ending where the whole world is destroyed? The most painful thing is falling in love with a certain character in this book, and because the whole book has been taken off the shelves, I can no longer see his future stories. It is just like a sudden death, and even more difficult to accept than a sudden death. I understand the author very well, because it must be very difficult for this book to be removed from the shelves, because I am also an author of a novel, and every character in my novel is just like my child. It is very, very uncomfortable to see a child who cannot continue to grow due to unexpected circumstances [crying] I can only hope that the author will not encounter this kind of situation again in his next work.

It's good to read, but the first two chapters have a bit too much description of scenery, but once you get over it, it becomes very good to read later. The author is quite active, and basically he will respond if you have any questions.

Although there are only two chapters now, the subject matter of this book made me lock it at a glance.

No, don't take it off the shelves, please, [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] How beautiful is this? I still want to see it!

Super pretty! The content of the comic may have a certain length problem, but the different information from the perspective of the protagonist of the comic and the protagonist of the book makes up for this very well. The plot analysis on the forum is very enjoyable to read, straightening out and adding a lot of details, and there is a sense of substitution. You must continue to read [Send Heart]

Baby Lin Bai's narcissistic look is so cute! I look forward to the future plot development, especially the emotional line, it will be very interesting. It's just too short, woo woo woo [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

Why was it suddenly taken off the shelves?

Why was it taken off the shelves? What's going on?

It's not tied yet, but I liked the first few chapters (after all, it's the genre I like) (dog head. Jpg) After it's finished, I'll review it again (assuming I haven't given up and the author hasn't stopped updating)

Super pretty ꒰^ↀωↀ^꒱❤❤ Damn it! Why was it removed from the shelves! ! ! (╬•̀•́)

? I didn't open any tomatoes for a week and they were taken off the shelves? [Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical] Damn foreign persimmon ah ah ah ah [crying] [crying] Where is my book?

It's really good. Dead Tomatoes is the one who actually pulled my wife's book off the shelves.

? ? ? Why was it taken down?

Dad, do you still plan to write this book? [Cry][cry]

I really like this subject, and I hope the author can write it carefully to the end.

Super pretty! Author, don't give up. If you really can't do it, you can't just start a new book and continue writing. [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

Don't take it off the shelves, ahhhhhhhh, I like this novel so much, don't want it, ahhhhhhhhh, what the hell is so-called originality, ahhhhhhhhhhhh, don't ahhhhhhhhhh, I still want to read it, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

Woohoo, why is it removed from the shelves [crying] The first three pictures hit my mark perfectly. If it is not considered systematic from the perspective of a comic reader, they originally had a happy family. Once they awakened their powers, lost their eyesight, and had a glimpse of the future, they resolutely embarked on a journey for their final destiny and became the Riddler.

The protagonist is handsome, has a high IQ, Tomato has not found a meal replacement (I didn't find it), the writing is good, the plot is very enjoyable, and listening to the book will make you feel more involved. I haven't found my thunder and lightning at the moment. The more I read, the more I want to watch, and I look forward to the follow-up development.

Ahhhhhhh why has it been removed from the shelves. . .