I'm Really Not an Undead Holy Mage!

The previous book was very interesting to follow from dozens of chapters to the end, but I felt that Twenty Years of Dominance was too fast, and Ye Ran became a training maniac. In the end, it felt like he was constantly changing maps to find materials, cheating and upgrading his training. It's not that the first one was bad. Overall I liked it, but the pace was too tight. I hope this one can write a better story. This subject matter is indeed relatively unpopular, but it is therefore more fresh. If paired with a twists and turns and fascinating plot, I believe the results will be better than the previous one.

Starry Martial Saint is the most beautiful book I have ever read. The upper limit is too high. For me, it feels difficult for any subsequent books to surpass it. I hope the author can release better works. Hello, fellow readers. But generally speaking, the monster farming and map farming materials are relatively simple, but his part of "Borrowing from Heaven for Another 50,000 Years" is really the peak, I can only say that it is a stroke of genius.

This book is really good to read. It is a rare western fantasy work. The name is actually a bit inconsistent with the content of the novel. The content of this novel is very solid. It can be clearly seen that there is an outline. The main line is very coherent. Even if there are very few people who read it, it can be regarded as an unpopular treasure. Be careful, although there have been a lot of updates now, the updates are slow. It's hard to see now that I can't see them.

The writing is very good, I hope you can stick to it. I don't understand that the author has already written out some parts, which is equivalent to clearly indicating it to the readers, but the protagonist ignores these. Is it intentional to portray the male protagonist in this way? 🤔

Traditional Western Fantasy is still worth watching You can't write without stressing your fighting ability, right? Then I'll change my mind and leave

Comparing this book with the previous one, the style of this book is almost the same as that of the protagonist who is relatively low-key, which is in line with my opinion. After all, there are so many people who want to show off in reality, and invisible pretense is the most deadly thing. Also, the fighting style is much better compared to the previous book. The fights in the later stages of the previous book were basically all numerical crushing, and those skills were basically not used at all. It was all numerical crushing. In terms of fighting, this book is much better than the previous one, and more fighting scenes are described. Overall, this is my favorite Western fantasy novel. I don't like other Western fantasy novels. This is my favorite novel because I can really get into it. I can't get into other Western fantasy novels.

It's good-looking, not too much talk, the sentences are smooth and fluent, the subject matter is rare, the rhythm is well controlled, the description of the characters is neither too much nor too little, and the characters are not too thin. There are some parts that the protagonist won't think about carefully, but he can still accept it. After all, I am from God's perspective, and the scene switching is reasonable. It is only a little over 100 pictures so far, which is still a bit less. Cheers, author [sending heartfelt wishes]

Next, I will use the most direct, the most truthful, the least roundabout, the most heart-breaking, the most hard-core, the most straightforward, the least ink, and the most painful point. The most ruthless, the most to the point, the most straightforward, the most straightforward, the least foreshadowing, the least polite, the least sensational, the least nonsense, the least roundabout, the least grindy, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least long-winded, the least procrastinating, the least tactful, the least disguised, the least hidden, the most straightforward, the most explicit, the most real, The most transparent, the most vicious, the most refreshing, the most refreshing, the most superior, the most powerful, the most enjoyable, the roughest, the most effective, the most ruthless, the most accurate, the most stable, the most absolute, the top, the most explosive, the toughest, the fiercest, the sassiest, the most reckless, the most aggressive, the fiercest, the crispest, the brightest, the most transparent, the driest, The cleanest, the neatest, the most domineering, the most hard-core, the most vigorous, the wildest, the most straightforward, the roughest, the least pretentious, the least cliché, the least formal, the least fussy, the most talkative, the most focused, the most results-oriented, the most truth-telling, the most core-focused, the most key-pointed way to tell you, it's very nice.

It's pretty good, but the previous plot is a bit repetitive. It feels like every time I press it first, I'm about to put it on, and then pinch it again, which feels a bit uncomfortable. However, this kind of thing is inherently slow to develop. I hope that if I continue to write it down, my results will definitely gradually improve.

I think it's okay, the content is quite good, and the world view is relatively large. However, I feel that too few people have read it. Maybe there are some problems in the article. Some parts are a bit contradictory and there are too many words. But I don't think the problem is big. Come on, author. I hope it will get better and better.