Red Ship Girl: I Used Military Souls to Build an Army on Mercury

I've read a lot of Kanji articles. Due to the positioning of the original work, most of it was reduced to stallion novels, and most of them were later eliminated within 200 chapters. The main line other than Sese is the first hurdle. After the main line is clear, the proportion of the main line of emotional drama will conflict and a group of people will be screened out. The looseness of the article filters out a lot of articles. This is the second hurdle. The third is the relationship between the factions, because most people like ship girls from multiple camps, so the ship girls built are often from multiple camps, which indirectly causes the commander's stance to gradually change to no stance. Once the sirens or villains can't keep up with the protagonist, their role will basically disappear. Therefore, it is necessary to introduce in-fighting plots (fighting brainless villains or directly creating separate camps to clash with the original work) or colluding with the Siren Deep Sea to disgust people. Therefore, the commander should always have a clear camp and firmly control it. This is also the biggest feature of this article. The position is precise and clear, which is harmonious but different from other camps. Seeking common ground while reserving differences, and taking a firm stance against the Deep Sea Sirens. But there are still some shortcomings, one of which is the completeness of the protagonist. His characteristics other than combat scientific research are insufficient (of course, they can be improved in the future). Secondly, there are hidden dangers in the arrangement of the ship girl scenes, which are 055 and 076 at the beginning. Although there are many benefits in early development, the low living space of old battleships will be further squeezed, and the subsequent plot and sense of presence will be further compressed, leading to a kind of mediocre plot arrangement restriction. The plot arrangement of New Ship Girl will be more difficult in a sense

Excellent work, quite good for a new author. The specialization in medium-type ship girls is the only one among the ship girls. The description of other types and support technology is also very good, but the growth of the protagonist is not well shown at present, but I believe the author can write better and better.

It's so good to watch, I finished reading it without even realizing it, and I give it a thumbs up.

After reading the entire chapter so far, I can see that the author is very thoughtful, and the details of the battle are relatively close to actual combat. It is the best written military-related novel I have read on Tomato. I hope to keep up the good work [laughs]

Good-looking, good-looking, love watching ~

Five-star support! Talk about your feelings I didn't know my own strength before I returned home. I fought like this in the first battle after I returned home. Is this what the saying goes, military fans are just like pigs? It seems that there is a difference between talking on paper and actual combat! The problem is that you still don't know what you have in your hand. You hit it with a hammer. I'm not a military fan, I'm just an ordinary person. I also know that after the missiles wash over the ground, just let people go over to pick up the equipment. What's so hard about it! Hey, no more, no offense intended, come on

The settings of the Chinese ship girls are good, and the characters of the ship girls are also clearly portrayed. The ship girls of different camps feel more vivid. Especially the nostalgia of the Soviet ship girls is well written and can make people feel after reading it. Although I am a bit anxious to keep up with the latest updates, it is still within the normal progress, especially since the author did not blindly update and reduce the quality, so it is worth waiting. Looking forward to more exciting stories in the future, come on, author!

The plot of the story is exciting, the language description is full of personality, and the characters are relatively typical. Worth reading!

A very wonderful work, the plot is cleverly conceived and the characters are relatively typical. Highly readable!

As an old bookworm, I feel pretty good. Being able to drive in gives me the motivation to continue reading. The main reason is that the main character doesn't have a wedding ship or a heroine or something like that! It would be better if there was one. He must be guarding so many beauties. It would be abnormal for the protagonist not to make any movement at all, unless he is a eunuch (no, is the protagonist really a eunuch? [I'm about to cry]. Looking like that, there is no hope!

There is still room for improvement in the emotional description, and it feels different from the emotional descriptions in the shipgirl novels I have read before. It feels more formal, not as indulgent and leisurely as other novels, and has less romance. The content I've seen so far is really good. There are no loopholes in the logic, and there are no poisonous points. It's very good. The more I read it, the more pleasing it is to my eyes. Come on, author.

After reading this, this is the first time I've seen so many books on ship girls written about Chinese ships. Overall, it's very good. It can be seen that the author's writing style is indeed limited, but it is not easy to finish it and finish it successfully. I look forward to the next new book, and I also wish the author can go further and further on the road of creation and do better and better [Like]

The author's writing skills may be poor, but the character description and relationship between the characters are handled very well, and I think the storyline is very exciting. It would be nice if there were less content in the form of reports. [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

The plot is very exciting, highly recommended!

It's very good. Every time a ship is released, it will be accompanied by a picture.

The anchor sinks, The waves are deep. The clouds opened thirty thousand miles away, They are all the soul of Bitao. Five five five stars, Worth it. [Learned]

Magnificent and exciting, this is such a good book, so powerful! [Like][Like][Like]

It's a rare book written by a Chinese-style ship girl. It's very interesting. Come on, please update it.

There can be more non-important ship girls, such as 052 series, 054 series, 056 series

Wow, this is my first time reading a novel with this theme. It's well written and beautiful.

Come on, author, the writing is great. It's rare to see a Chinese ship girl again, please keep updating

Very nice! The character of the Chinese ship girl is clearly drawn and vivid and three-dimensional. The idea is clever, and it is very informative to read! Great, great, highly recommended! Continue reading. The more I read, the more I discover many different wonderful things. I am looking forward to the following stories. Hurry up. I look forward to it~~

There are no poisonous points. The author is positive and consistent with basic values. It is excellent and readable, has a strong story, is interesting and vivid.

The author has a strong writing skills and clear logical thinking. This is the first time I read a book like Ship Girl, and I finally followed the author's footsteps. It's very interesting [Top post][Top post][Top post]

It's okay, brother, it's okay

This is my first time reading a novel with this theme, and it is very well written.

Really good! Very new subject matter! Ship girl! Super excited!

The storyline is fascinating, interlocking, and wonderful!

Come on, come on, the author is big

Ship girl! Love to watch!