The Great Voyage: a Wild Start and Invincible All the Way

Not bad, not bad, worthy of praise. The writing is quite good at this stage. As long as the follow-up is not bad, it will be a good book. Of course, I would like to see the protagonist group be pirates and the like. Also, wow, the author should not make the protagonist too strong in the follow-up, at least as strong as his teammates. Write a group portrait. This book of yours is very suitable for writing group portraits.

The plot is good, there are relatively few routines, and it is also very exciting. The images of several crew members on the protagonist's fleet are quite three-dimensional and distinct. The author has not ignored them. Reading now, I feel that it has just begun. After the abilities and personalities of these people are almost introduced, the subsequent stories should be more exciting. I am looking forward to seeing it.

It's pretty cool. Maybe it's because of the protagonist's name at first. Secondly, there are too many levels of items. Others are okay. Please support me.

It's good-looking, with few unreasonable parts, but it's okay if you throw away your brains. It's mainly not good, and it's the content I want to see [Love] [Love]

It's pretty cool, but are you a little bit slower than him? The second book is also

It took me a few hours to read it, and I feel that this book is quite good. I don't know if other people will like it, but I quite like it anyway. I hope the author can keep writing. Come on! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

Come on, you must keep going. This book currently has 183 chapters (when I reviewed it) with a rating of 7.3. Moreover, your new subject matter definitely has great potential, and your worldview is large enough to definitely support up to six or seven hundred chapters. Moreover, your previous writing is very good, including character descriptions and logic. The most important thing is that there are not many nautical articles on Tomato. Your book has great potential.

I support it, it looks pretty [cool] [cool]

The characters are clear and the content is exciting

The characters' images are three-dimensional, the protagonist's image is richly created, and it's a good pirate story.

Personally, I think it's pretty good. It's a good ocean survival novel. The positioning of pirates is also very novel. The author's writing style also portrays the characters in the novel well.

It's not bad. There's nothing really bad about the plot, and the characterization is okay. It's just a bit draggy, but it's acceptable.

I love it, love watching it, come on! Is there still a need for a boat repairman or a musician?

The book is good, I read it in a large size, there is nothing poisonous about it. [Laughing]

It's very to my liking, but the only drawback is that it's too slow, not enough to watch, not enough to watch at all [angry][angry][angry]

The subject matter is novel, you can [like]

Has the previous content been changed? I remember that the female protagonist is not imprisoned on the island?

So far, it's okay. The author listens to your opinions. Come on, author [smile]

As long as it doesn't suck, it's fine.

There is no poisonous point, and the killing is decisive. [Laugh]

After listening to it for a while, I felt it was well written. There are only three negative reviews, so why is the rating so low?

The overall transition is still very smooth. 🥚The combat power is a bit too fast. If it is so fast, will it be difficult to write later (although it is really fun to look at being invincible) [Exploration]

A rare book by Tomato, highly recommended.

It's very well written. It's the first time I've seen this kind of subject matter. I hope I can add more.

This is my favorite type, highly recommended

To be honest, this is the most interesting pirate article I have ever read. The author is very thoughtful and the story is novel and interesting.

It feels good. The author works hard and interacts with readers [like] [like] The rating is a bit low, maybe because there are so few people. It should get better gradually.

The writing is okay, the characters are well drawn and distinct

Okay, very nice

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