Great Ming: The Age of Discovery

Beautifully written. Make some immature suggestions. You can add the perspective of some characters, such as the perspective of a workshop worker. When you make money from work, your life becomes better and you can write about it. People in the capital can write about new things and products. Some of them praise it, and some think it is bad, creating conflicting stories. Landless refugees work in workshops, and military households in dilapidated households work in workshops. They work as navy or sailors. They make money and return to their villages or forts to celebrate the New Year. Everyone is envious of them, and the competition is invisibly changing. You can fix the perspectives of several people or groups of people who bring about changes under the impact of new things and products, which can enrich the novel. You can also write about the northern route to the Golden Continent (America), establishing a supply point on the way, contacting the Indians, exchanging goods for gold, discovering gold, bringing it back and shocking everyone, blinding everyone, triggering everyone's gold rush, aiming to speed up development. In novels, there must be intangible transformations, and changes must be described from multiple perspectives.