Mixed Martial Arts Master at Hogwarts

This one is all about the Dumbledore conspiracy theory, and it's the first one I've come across. But if it's Old Bee's conspiracy theory, Old Bee really can't play with it [laughing and crying] [covering face], I seriously doubt that the first grader will almost overthrow Old Bee... [Thinking]

The writing is really good, but of course there are also flaws. For example, Dumbledore is written as being too calculating, but it mainly expands the worldview very well. It has expanded to Hong Kong, and the combination of martial arts and magic is not bad. Worth a look.

I tried to read it again, and it was obviously easier to read than before. The remaining minor problems are just a matter of experience. I think what attracts me the most is the author's reconstruction of history. It not only fits the original work but also has no major logical problems. Although the first book is a bit immature, it is not a big deal as long as experience is accumulated. I look forward to the next book [Like][Like][Like]

From the current point of view, this is indeed a rare good book. The world view and layout are much grander than Harry Potter itself. Although the characters have two designs, they are indeed novel and do not deviate from the characters themselves. The plot is also very good at the moment. The whole world is slowly unfolding. As long as the follow-up does not collapse and can be completed, it should be a very good book. The author originally published the first-person version, but later he was persuaded to change it to the third-person version. The overall reading experience is much better. Although there are still some problems with personal pronouns and symbols in many places, the author is working very hard and diligently on the changes. This is probably because I saw that the author is really hard-working and I think it is quite sad. I have to re-read the whole text and make detailed changes [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] [thinking] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] Overall, although this book has some minor issues, overall it is a good book as long as it doesn't collapse. Come on, author, don't cut it [laughter]

I think this book is pretty good and very novel. I have read several fanfics and I think this book is quite eye-catching [Like] Because I read it for the main plot, I didn't read too carefully the three or four copies that the author wrote more carefully. I personally think that the one involving two time travels is relatively better. It may also be because of the new book that the overall ratings are not very high now. I hope that when this book is finally stable, the score will be above 8.5. In short, for readers who have read a lot of Harry Potter fan fiction, I personally highly recommend reading it. The idea of ​​​​this book is really novel; for readers who have not been exposed to Harry Potter fan fiction, after all, it is not finished yet, you can also read the fan fiction of other authors while chasing this book. I wish everyone a pleasant reading experience!

It's possible. This is an unimagined path. It's much better than those who just follow the rules and work as a nanny. It brings a lot of freshness to people. To be honest, why did his rating drop so drastically? And I see that there are a lot less comments. Has the author offended someone?

Yes, the plot is reasonable and there are no pitfalls. All logical background checks are in line. I love talking about Dumbledore.

It's very thoughtful and interesting. It's worth watching. I won't spoil it. The two copies are also very interesting. Moreover, there are many innovations, many combinations, and we have taken a path that I have never seen before.

The novel angles and plot arrangements are designed to be eye-opening, but the author has done a good job of justifying himself. One star is deducted because of the eunuch.

Interesting, new ideas

A Hogg fan with a routine that I never thought of This wild history is so wild [shocked]

It's okay. I can see that the author has great ideas. He will get better as he practices his writing skills.

The author has put great care into it. It's very good. Please write slowly and don't rush for quality rather than quantity.

It's good to read. This is another good book after Death. I really hope it doesn't end badly.

Guys, this book is really good in HP series, you can read it.

You can see [learn it], it's logical, it's not as big as it is, it's reasonable, it's just a bit too private, but it's all reasonable, so the beaver in the river said it's very reasonable

It's good-looking and has a great worldview. It's different from what I've watched before. I'm used to watching female videos and then male videos, just like a local who is used to eating local snacks and suddenly travels to taste another kind of food.

The heroine should be Hermione

It's beautiful, clever, innovative, and has a grand world view. Please update the author soon.

Except for a few first-person characters occasionally, it is overall very good and has a lot of Chinese elements. It is a very good novel! This book is quite good, but the world view is too big

A good book

I just want to know who the heroine is

Who is the heroine? Single or multiple?

Great, keep it up!

It's beautiful. Come on [Adoration]

There are a lot of private devices, but I like this kind of thing

Very good, Eastern martial arts and Western magic

Why don't you give him high marks for such a good book?

A relatively subversive hp, not bad

The subject matter is good. If possible, take Avalon.