The End of the World: Trapped School and Survival of the School Beauty

Let's talk about the advantages first. The battles are well portrayed; the atmosphere is well created. The campus road chapter is tense throughout and has no flaws (except for the reuse of some materials). I can read it in one go; the plot is compact and there is no sense of delay or repetition, but it is a bit too fast for people to react; Of course, there are still shortcomings. 1. First of all, it is limited to the narrative rhythm of the story. The characters are not fleshed out enough. The male and female protagonists are okay so far, but the supporting roles are a bit thin; 2. And with the amount of information set in the current blowout release of the game, I am very curious about how the game will unfold next, and whether there is a risk of insufficient stamina; What follows are some of my personal suggestions. You can write some memory fragments as a buffer for the narrative rhythm while enriching the characters.

It looks good. The protagonist is brave and resourceful but not too brainless. I just feel that when I broke out of the fog in the story, no one else except the heroine was of much use. Apart from driving and decorating the car, I hope they are not joining the official routine or working for the official. The most important thing is that the team members can bring benefits to the protagonist, rather than relying on the protagonist to improve this type of game.

It's very interesting, the protagonist is very strong, and the heroines are not a flower vase. They rely on each other, and the relationship in the apocalypse is very precious. The protagonist's team is also very united. In the apocalypse, there is not only despair, but also the brilliance of humanity [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

Finally I found another good apocalyptic novel. The male protagonist has a pretty good character, he is decisive in killing and has principles. The description of the emotional line is okay, but I feel that there is a lack of memories and supplementary characters. The description of the horror elements is also quite good, but I feel that the writing style could be better.

It's okay. I've watched 50. Let me talk about the shortcomings first: some sentences are not fluent, some words are awkward, and there is a bit of secondary [face covering], and then... I personally think that the mentality of the male protagonist, a high school student who is about to take the college entrance examination, changes a bit quickly, and he becomes cold and ruthless not long after the beginning. Then, the advantages: The scenes and monsters are well described. It would be better if there are pictures [eat melon]. Overall, it is still watchable. E... Currently at chapter 80, there are some minor issues before chapter 50, but it's not a big deal. But after chapter 60, the plot reaches its climax. To be honest, it made me angry. To be honest, it's not as good as Bo Ran [face covering], but it's still worth reading.

The plot is okay, but I guess it's going to be a hit.

I read it on December 30, 2025. I didn't have any novels to read at that time, so I found a novel on the recommendation page and listened to it on the way up the mountain. I thought it was okay. It's pretty good for an apocalyptic novel. It took me 33 days to finish it. Unfortunately, it was discontinued. I'm looking forward to the next chapter o(*≧▽≦)ツ┏━┓

It's great to find this book in Tomato. The emotional description of the male and female protagonists is acceptable in Tomato. It is true to support each other and make progress together. [Like] (I listen to and read books at work)

Very nice to look at. It is a rare novel with no system and no time travel. The protagonist only has a proprietary plug-in, a growth-oriented plug-in that seeks advantages and avoids disadvantages. There is probably some foreshadowing in it. The development of the plot is also very exciting, with various familiar and unfamiliar monsters developing unexpectedly. The protagonist is a team leader who is absolutely responsible for the management and command of the team. He tries his best to protect his teammates and will not let his teammates deliberately block injuries for him. There is a problem. The emotional description of the male and female protagonists. Logically speaking, it should describe the major stages of emotional changes between the two parties, reflecting the emotional integration of both parties. For example, if you get to know each other and fall in love, there will be a major stage, and the end of each stage is suitable for what the author describes in the article. But the fact is that the author describes almost every small stage when both sides experience combat, escape, upgrade capabilities, etc. It feels like it is too frequent, and I only see it at least four or five times. Although you describe it well, it makes me uncomfortable when I read it too often.

The writing is good, the combat power is sufficient, and it is not as mindless as a cool novel. The heroine is also very vivid. Except for the routines and the few typos that can be said, there is no problem except for the repetitive parts [I learned it]

It's pretty good. The story is very compact and the writing is relatively delicate. However, the plot is a bit stiff. For example, there are a few points where I knew something would happen if I watched it with golden eyes, but I just went to watch it and something happened. You can try a smoother transition. I'm looking forward to the following plots.

Yes, some monsters feel like contained objects, the protagonist is not brainless, and the world view/setting is fine. The author writes very well about emotions and details, especially the description of the monsters and the emotions he felt when absorbing the "seed". However, every time I encounter danger, the constant thing before me is "quietness" [face covering], and I don't see any foreshadowing or anything like that.

Overall, it can't be five stars, but I haven't seen a traditional apocalyptic novel for a long time. This one really has the flavor of a traditional apocalyptic evolution novel. The disadvantage is that it uses too much AI and hasn't been manually revised several times.

It's very interesting. At first I thought it was a Cthulhu element, but it seems that it is not just pollution on the spiritual level, with negative emotions. In the apocalypse that appears in a fixed location, the protagonist's eyes are like a ray of hope in despair. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is mutual. The male protagonist's ability gives him calmness and reason. The female protagonist not only accompanies the protagonist, but also grows and depends on each other with the protagonist, which is equivalent to an anchor. Whether the other members of the protagonist group will be added later depends on how it is written. It is a very interesting book.

It's a good-looking post-apocalyptic novel that was delayed by its name. The protagonist is also very normal. If you don't have a virgin, you won't kill people randomly. The team growth is also good, but the intensity is too high and the mortality rate feels very high. The recent one is not good. It was boring after entering the base. The opening chapter was obviously very good. It was scary and exciting. The strength is steadily improving. Now it is boring.

The configuration of the protagonist in this book is really invincible. In addition, the heroine has output and control. I feel that the combat power is really balanced. The protagonist has the feeling of being monopolized for eternity. There are currently 131 chapters. Wow, the author's writing style is stable. The book is good. It has life and death, the kindness of giving to others, and the tenderness of working together to advance love. The protagonist's setting has a feeling of being arbitrary for eternity. It's a good book. , What I could feel last time was that I had upgraded alone, that this book had a clear heroine. Let's talk about the kingly passion first. I have finished writing it. The level is online. There are not many abnormal human strongmen. The level is under control. If you can find something, this book is a hit.

It's really good. The author could just change the cover. The cover made me look at the book several times without even wanting to read in [laughing]

I read the book in the middle of the night and stayed up until six o'clock. I read it again today and finally tied it. I think it's very interesting. The male and female protagonists are not tired of getting along with each other. The female protagonist is not a flower vase. Both of them are very powerful and the setting is also very interesting [shy][shy][shy]

It's well written, why are there so few people reading it?

Very good, support me

It can be pretty

It's okay, I hope it's a single girl.

Shili's gold rush belongs to Yes

Very handsome brothers

A very good book

It's so beautiful that I'm speechless, and I'm alive again [almost crying]

Okay, 🍅There are not many apocalyptic novels where the heroine is not a pendant

As a new author, it's pretty good.

I hope it doesn't break, it's already very good on tomatoes. Although there are a few small flaws, they are not major problems. A few suggestions for the author: It feels like this is purely a solo show of the protagonist. Even if the other supporting characters awaken their powers, they feel useless. Even the heroine's sense of presence feels very low. Also, escaping along the way, bringing so many ordinary people with him, is of no use at all. Even if they are allowed to cooperate with the battle to improve their physical fitness, it feels like they are really useless. If that's the case, you might as well write that the male protagonist leads his team to escape alone. Well, some people will definitely find fault and say that it is too holy and brings so many burdens, if you write it like this. Later, you can describe more supporting characters, and then describe a few other powerful people with special powers. Don't make it too monotonous. Then add as much pictures as possible for ordinary people (personal suggestion, for reference only)

I decided to give you the title of Brother Jingjing [smile]