After Debuting as Exo's Maknae, I Shine in the World

It's okay, not the same as those cool articles. The overall story is more daily, but it's actually a bit boring. Without conflict, it's hard to make people want to watch it. Also, the plot of describing family friends (people outside the circle) is a bit too heavy. The parents are okay, and there is really no need for younger brothers and sisters who are not in the circle. I understand that the author should want to use family relationships to shape the characters' personalities and warm atmosphere, but in fact, I want to say that 0 people really care. I think we can mainly talk about things in Korea like Asteroids, and interact with local idols and groups instead of just between groups. But now I know that there are probably fewer people outside SM. After all, it has been a long time, but I can still get in touch with the empress or the function. In the end, I'm really looking forward to how my debut will be handled later on. My signing as a brother and running for the third time can be considered a small climax.

Well, what I wrote before is still okay, but um, maybe it's just me, um, just an idol, maybe I just can't accept falling in love, maybe it's just that everything else is fine.

The writing is really good. I have read a lot of Korean entertainment books. This one is basically very reasonable. I hope it won't stop updating. As long as this kind of subject is finished, people will continue to read it. What is written at the back is a running account [what]? It's really messy. Why? The writing was okay at first.

Yes, you can see the real sister-in-law in the fanfic, the author is quite realistic.

It's really beautiful. I'm not a bastard. The part written by the trainee is very real.

I read it for 3 hours and wrote in great detail the days of a young man's struggle in Korea. Ou Yangguang shines like his name [Like]

The beginning is very nice and very routine, and I don't like it too much. I will continue to comment on it later. I hope it will be cp-free. Don't do ambiguous plots! ! ! Well, although the front part is pretty good, the back part feels a bit bland as you look at it. Of course, I didn't say it was ugly. I didn't say that.

Looks good, looks good, supports [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Feel very good about myself

Thirteen people were unexpected. The only bad thing was that Wu was not replaced.

It's okay. The protagonist is not an ordinary person. I hope I can put aside trivial worries as soon as possible.

Can we really talk? I like Kim Ji Won very much.

It's very interesting to watch, but I hope there won't be any more storylines, and I hope we can always have a sweet love.

It's really good to watch. I hope to write more variety shows. It's so painful [Sending my heart]

The writing is very good, keep up the good work and don't turn it into a cool article. I really look forward to the protagonist becoming a mentor in 2018.

It's really beautiful, please come on

I hope the protagonist can go on with Jin forever Can the protagonists get back together again [crying]

It was a bit enjoyable to watch, but there was too little written about it. Injuries and injuries are normal, so there was a bit too much written about it.

It's good to watch. Although there are occasional clips in the middle, the trainee stage is very real and it's quite good to watch! I finally decided on the exo spot in the book. It's not easy. I'm full of expectations.

It's okay, it's good-looking😸👍