How Could the Disciple I Raised Be a Yandere?

Goodbye, author. I have no choice but to make this decision. I hope I Let's meet again by chance. Because something unexpected happened Love has a greater impact and blow on me, so I want to formally talk to you. Don't. I really miss you guys. It's really nice to get to know you. Happy. I came across your book a few days ago and I feel like it is really a treasure. I have been reading your book for so long, but the joy and joy you bring me It's touching but unforgettable, but there's nothing I can do about it, isn't life like this? Yes, full of helplessness. I hope you can always stick to your original intention like this Keep going and persist until the end. Thank you again for bringing me so much. So happy and touching, angry and sad, thank you for your continued support these days Stay with me. The main reason for leaving this time is because I am sleepy Now, I'm going to bed. I'll come back tomorrow and remember to update.

Your star is on revenge. Although he is small. Don't quite understand. But if it were me, it doesn't matter who's wrong. He killed me and I was wrong. I killed him and he was wrong.

It's a bit interesting. I thought it would be a classic fantasy novel about a master and a disciple who rebel against each other. The first few pictures about the relationship between master and apprentice are pretty good. It's like a high-end version of a fantasy novel that is cool and depressing. It's recommended to read it.

The protagonist of this book, the male counterpart of other books He wanted to write a knife plot but actually ruined the overall plot. Just like what he wrote in his introduction, Tang's story is boundless and the protagonist is also very responsible [laughs]

Gone. Gone. Very nice. Everyone, come and see [laughing evilly]

I read the article to relax, but unfortunately, it's either impossible to read or too depressing.

It's pretty good-looking, a little bit poisonous, but you can keep watching it. The main conflict is the relationship between Shen and the protagonist, it is not the kind that kills his whole family and falls in love with his enemy. The author's handling of this aspect is okay, but at least it has to give people some hope. Shen Yixin feels that the protagonist only lets him live for the sake of his bones, but this is not easy to say at all. After all, it is not fair to Chu. It is okay to have a knife, but not too much, otherwise it will not end well. The author wants better data, so it depends on this contradiction. How do you deal with it? Don't dig a hole that is too big, otherwise it will not be filled. Readers certainly won't buy it. Come on, author, please update soon Hehehe, it's good to watch, the conflict is resolved

After all, it was written seriously by the author, so I won't give it a low score, but I really can't give it five stars. I didn't want to comment at first, but I was really poisoned. The poisonous point is in Chapter 8, which in my opinion is extremely poisonous. The resentment is palpable, so just pretend you didn't see it? Judging from the above, the male protagonist should only have true feelings for his master. Dozens of formations equivalent to all the belongings in the tribulation period can be broken by the gods? First of all, something went wrong with the sect leader's son. I don't care why his master came to save him? Secondly, after living in this sect for so long, you should know the character of the main characters, right? Moreover, the protagonist should hate this person. He is not afraid of offending the Immortal Sect for the sake of his master, but is he afraid of a little second-rate sect leader? What's even more ridiculous is, hey, just let him go after he feels better after being beaten? 666! Now let's start thinking in the opposite direction. The villain's grandfather has completed all the Tianji formations and still has the ability to create an incarnation of a god without being discovered. You might as well just let the villain succeed. Then, after that, the villains came one after another, and the other heroines also succeeded. With the author's power, the protagonist barely defeats the villain in the finale. Then the villain said before he died, I didn't lose to you, I just lost to the way of heaven. I can still take a good look at you! The book is not perfect, and the little poisonous points are simply ignored, but no matter how you think about this villain, he is bound to die, and you insist on staying here, disgusting! In fact, the writing is okay, but it's not suitable for me. Come on, I hope the author can write better and better!

On the whole, it's okay. The emperor's uncle should look like an emperor's uncle, just add heaven-defying skills, weapons, and physique, and slowly upgrade. The rest is just rich and colorful content. The author should be bigger and stronger, and should not go off topic or be ambiguous.

Personally, it's pretty good. The first half of the novel is on the lighter side, the middle and later stages are more on the heavy side, and the end is more of a relief. Every heroine wants to have him as her own, but she can't actually do it. Although this ending is not perfect, it is still a good ending.

Very good, why is the rating so low? The emotional portrayal is very delicate and the writing style is very good. It is much better than the master-disciple novel I recently read which was rated 9 points. Although there are indeed some poisonous points, they don't have much impact. By the way, I like Su Qingyue the most among the characters. [Shy]

The beginning is still okay, the conflict points, foreshadowing, and suspense are all quickly provided, and the writing is still okay, which is worth looking forward to. It's just that the male protagonist is a bit bitter and hateful at the beginning, and the plot is a bit depressing originally. It would be nice if the male protagonist could be more positive or humorous to neutralize it.

It's weird, you know? It's like, when Pangu created the world, Sister Yu trapped him with her beta and created an illusion to trap Pangu. Nuwa was Sister Yu's child. After knowing this, Nuwa prepared to kill her relatives righteously, but was discovered. Although she rescued Pangu, she was trapped inside. The aliens found out about this and were very moved. Wa was rescued. Pangu and Nuwa created the real world together and gave birth to three children. The youngest child was Satan. He fell in love with Sister Yu. In order to rescue Sister Yu, he trapped Nuwa in the sky and rescued Sister Yu. Pangu knew that he could not defeat her so he borrowed a stone from the aliens. A monkey jumped out of the stone and set out to the west to save Nuwa🤔

It's not bad. Those with strong toxicity resistance can check it out.

It looks good, but I don't know why the rating is so low. Maybe some people don't like this sharp and sweet feeling. I hope the author can balance these relationships well and not end up unfinished [Salute][Salute]

The emotions are delicate, but the changes are not obvious. If you read it with your brain, you will find that some parts are not consistent with common sense. For example, why so many female characters fall in love with the male protagonist all at once? The short name is too fast, there is candy and there is a knife. The author's writing style is very beautiful, but there may be some shortcomings in logic. Some content makes it difficult for readers to understand what the purpose is, but the overall evaluation is a good book. Although the current rating of this book is not high, it is recommended that everyone read it (only personal evaluation) I have finished reading this book and would like to express my personal opinions. Overall, it is a good book. The author's writing style is very elegant and romantic. There are many illusions in the article, and there are also some very beautiful images, such as crabapples, grasslands, swings... The characters in the article are very vivid, and the content is guaranteed to be novel. However, the plot of this book is too fast, and the emotional line is not deep enough. At first reading, it is difficult for readers to understand what the author wants to do in writing this part. There is candy and knives, and there are a lot of flaws in the middle part. Moreover, the protagonist's strength has been flickering and erratic, and he is often bullied. It cannot be regarded as a refreshing article. Some of the characters are a bit witty, which may be because the author does not often write harem stories. The logic of the whole book is not very coherent, but if you see the ending, you have to admire the author for making everything come true. This is quite awesome, and it also shocked me. I have never seen anything like this after reading so many books. Rather than saying it is a harem novel, I think it is more like a pseudo-harem. It is not the peace after the Shura field, but the break after the Shura field. Each heroine has the same happy and somewhat tragic ending (it is a bit contradictory, but it is true) and it would be better if it was longer in the end. Finally, I want to say to the author You'd better stop writing harem stories in the future and just write single female protagonists, wouldn't you? (Because you must be very good at writing a single heroine, and you are really terrible at writing harem stories) All in all, this is a good book and I recommend it to everyone.

Good to read, good to watch, good to watch [Adored] [Admired] I finally waited for a Chongshi article with delicate emotions [Like] The emotions are indeed delicate, but the strength is not necessarily so. The first thing is that Brother Jin Dan can actually use the talismans and formations of the incarnation. In addition, the upgrade of cultivation level is also fast-paced. 18 Golden elixir is a bit interesting

I personally think this book is quite good, and the emotional line is also good. The protagonist likes his master, and his master secretly promised him. Later, it was revealed, and there is a power behind the protagonist's master. But when I see it now, I feel that Yuan'er is miserable, but very arrogant. The protagonist is a bit poisonous. He has ruined Yuan'er's family, and he has two emotions in his heart. It can be considered, and it is also forced by the system. As a last resort, although Yao'er's status is also miserable, he has to care more about the protagonist. I feel that the protagonist is a little biased. He is very good to the two apprentices, but he puts the apprentice aside as soon as he sees the master. Moreover, the starting direction of being good to the two apprentices is also inconsistent. Yao'er is obviously more from the heart. Overall, it is very good. It is best to give more love to people who are more miserable, so that we can feel more comfortable watching it. Come on, author! I feel like the Tomato score is a bit low here. I think I can give it a score of more than 8 points as of now, about 8.45.

He has the qualifications to be titled Douluo [laughing evilly]

I just like this kind of twisting feeling, but it's also very sweet. So sweet [laughs]

The writing is pretty good. Shen Hongyuan is pitiful. She has more knives and less sugar. The other two characters are all sugar [Adoration][Admiration] Keep sending me sugar.

The writing is delicate, sharp when it should be, sweet when it should be sweet, but in the middle, it's a bit poisonous.

The overall writing style is good so far, the story is very interesting, and there are many abstract but not poisonous points. I hope the author can maintain this rhythm and keep writing without breaking down. Just tap the knife lightly when the knife is in trouble [crying] [crying] Otherwise, I'm afraid it will hurt too much. It's still worth a look. There's a lot of foreshadowing in the front. As long as it doesn't collapse, it should be pretty good later on.

I guess someone in front of me was poisoned, otherwise the score wouldn't be so low.

Good stuff [laughing evilly] I didn't expect Tomato to have such a good book again [Learned]

After reading it, overall it was good, but the ending was a bit regretful. I prefer the happy ending of making dumplings. However, it is also understandable that a book cannot satisfy everyone, and regret may be the norm. Looking forward to the author's next book.

Okay, ok, it's okay. Articles about Shusen-ryu's romance, which focus on emotional description and partially ignore cultivation, are rare. What's even more commendable is that the female protagonists described are very good. It can be said that there are no characters that are too disgusting at present. The three female protagonists and the male protagonist are all pitiful people. The Master who dares not love boldly, Little Beggar No. 2 Chu Yao, Xiao Shen whose family was destroyed, and the Little Beggar No. 1 Male protagonist are all endearing settings. I hope that if they fall in love, it would be best for each other to save each other, instead of being like those who are strong and cultivated, and their relationships are more casual.

I really loved reading the chapter "The Broken Halberd"

No, I never expected the benefit of sleeping late. It's so damn good-looking. The author's words can no longer describe my feelings. I can only say that it's awesome. As long as I keep updating, I will follow it forever.

It's really good to watch. Although I originally wanted to read the article about the apprentice's regret for killing his master, but now this kind of development is not bad [Thoughts]