Elf: the Favorite of the Heartthrob Group Relies on Adding Points to Become a God.

It's really rare to have two male protagonists in a Pokémon fanfic. The author is super awesome💗. This book is so beautiful! ! ! ૮₍♡♡₎ა Has Aoki's F4, the protagonist's friendship from the beginning, and our male protagonist's CP Dago ˃̶͈ ꇴ ˂̶͈ , the mutual attraction between him and the protagonist ┗(･ω･;)┛, the protagonist is completely a heartthrob ૮₍◜ෆ◝.₎ა, His character and personality are super charming, and the protagonist of this book is not strong because of ignorance, it is all based on the protagonist's own efforts ദ്ദി˶>ω<)✧, it is very enjoyable to read\^O^/⭐

Yes, the writing is quite good. I still like to watch this kind of genius and beautiful boy. Since feeding back can greatly increase the life span, is it possible for the protagonist to maintain the status of a beautiful and beautiful boy all year round [laughing]

I saw chapter 26 or 27. Why is there only so much? It's really beautiful. So I found another good book. Why do all the books I like recently have 20 pictures and 50 pictures? I'm so broken, I have to wait for a long time. The protagonist is also very charming. It is described many times in the article that the protagonist is handsome and has super powers, but he does not show them in front of others. He is also very strong, a genius, and he is also very lucky. Well, it should be smooth sailing. Is the CP of the two male protagonists Dawu? However, I have read this book, and it is quite stable to update two chapters every day. The author must stick to it. And although there are only about twenty pictures, it feels like I have been reading it for a long time, maybe because there are more words! Recommend! It still looks good. This super power is the power of Viridian, and it is also shown in front of others. Well, it doesn't matter. It's pretty good, but if you keep reading, this book might die, so it's better to keep reading every day.

I stayed up late to watch it... It's really good! ! It's just too little... It's really the best-looking Pokémon male protagonist I've seen recently... It seems like I'll see Larurus and Tanchan soon... I really like these two Pokémon! ! (This author has a very high aesthetic quotient, and the tentative elves are all handsome!)

My corpse feels warm when you look at it_(:3∠)_ I will tell you in the most straightforward, straightforward, least roundabout, most objective, most correct, most systematic, most true, simplest, easiest to understand, most concise, and least pretentious way: It looks great, but it doesn't look good on me. For eight lifetimes, I will not be able to make a fortune, I will not be filial to my parents, my financial resources will be cut off, I will die alone, I will have no relatives or friends, I will be in poverty, I will have nothing, I will have no one to rely on, I will be alone, I will be homeless, I will be displaced, I will have no relatives... (Purely typed by hand)

It's great to add points. Skills, characteristics, and levels can all be added with points obtained through battles. The bond (crossed out) Duanshui is also quite interesting. The male protagonist's Pokémon are all fans. I look forward to the daily relationship with the final 12 Pokémon. The emotional line is quite natural, the male protagonist is charming, suitable for both men and women, and it is not awkward. It has the feeling of Bai Yueguang in his youth. This is the author's first book, but it's super good. I just saw the protagonist and Daigo getting along. How can I put it, I skipped and watched their interactions, especially the dialogue part, and it felt awkward that I couldn't take a closer look, but I think it's okay in general. I suggest the author use his strengths and avoid weaknesses, either not to write emotional lines, or to reduce some of the face-to-face descriptions between them. For example, in the dialogue, there can be more side descriptions, such as how they get along with each other in the eyes of passers-by or friends or others. Or if the author wants to make a breakthrough, the dialogue can be combined with some other descriptions_(:3 ⌒ﾞ)_ I am very grateful to the author for creating such a world that has Pokémon (I was surprised that it was not the pet beast in the beast-controlling novel, although that is also good, but this Pokémon world is full of my childhood memories, as well as those familiar characters, all of which are particularly surprising.) And has some added abilities.

It's really super, super pretty! ! Every Pokémon written by this author is in my aesthetic taste🥰The bond between the stars and Pokémon is really incomparable and beautiful! ! I'm really looking forward to the appearance of Electric Cat and Blue Dog, and I also hope that Larulas can evolve into Elledor! ! (This one really writes about Elle Duo (┳◇┳)) Tan Xiaoshi is also looking forward to it! ! ! Of the two evolved types, I prefer the Blue Flame Blade Demon (it's not that the Red Lotus Armored Cavalry isn't handsome, it's just that my personal aesthetic feels that the Red Lotus armor is a bit bulky). In short, this article is shocking and delicious! ! ! The author's art quotient is very online! ! Everyone, come and see me! ! !

I'm only commenting after the tie. It depends on the duration, and I'm not asking for it. First of all, it integrates the beast-controlling worldview. To be honest, this is my first time watching it, and the author really stood up to me. The writing is very good, you can read it! ! Also, it's very warm. It makes people's bodies feel warm when they see them. It feels so good so far. The elves are all poisonous, and it's a long road for Dawu to pursue his wife [smirk] [smirk] Finally, the character creation is really good. Pokémon is almost a utopia! ! The follow-up review is here, it is very slow, impatient and not very friendly, the contract just passed is too purple [Ghost] os: Doesn't anyone think the contract looks like Ye Luoli [joking face]

It is suggested that the author can also write about the strength and satisfaction of the protagonist when adding a love line, and can be more career-minded. It would be more interesting if there were more male suitors. Anyway, the main palace is decided, and it is almost boring to only have one person.

Super pretty! ! ! ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧ I like the character of the protagonist very much. The plot is my favorite among all the Pokémon novels I have read. As long as the author keeps updating, I will keep reading!

It's so good. The protagonist gradually becomes stronger. The bond with the elves and Qingshan F4 is very strong. The emotional line is not abrupt. The interaction with Daiwu is very sweet. The straight man is not too light or too heavy. I look forward to the protagonist's enlightenment and the plot after he enters school.

The daily life is very warm, but I feel that the competition for favor is a little bit deliberate, and then it is relatively slow to warm up. The main character is just a blockhead and not very friendly to impatient people. Also, I feel that the main character is growing up so fast. Is it too much? ()

The character of the protagonist and the characters of the elves are very well matched and lively, and the way he talks to the elves is also very interesting. This is also a very interesting book, especially the character of the devil is a bit yandere, and the way the protagonist and Da Wu get along is also quite special. I don't get tired of reading it. The more I read, the more I want to read. I hope the author will keep reading 👍🏻

I couldn't help but comment after seeing it. The book has great potential and deserves a good review, but it also has some problems. First, how old is Daigo now? Mikri has become the gym leader. Why are you saying that Daigo may go to the same school as the protagonist, or that Daigo will be the protagonist's senior in the future? The second is Daigo's liking for the protagonist. It feels a bit unexpected, and he suddenly fell in love with it. Is it because of the protagonist's physical problem? The third is the protagonist's commanding ability. When I was watching "Conquering the Stupid Fish", I kept complaining, and when we were fighting, just give me a good fight! Charmander was still on the battlefield, and the trainer kept being "shocked" and "his pupils shrank." It felt a little outrageous. I only see this here for the time being. These are my questions when I read it. I don't mean to deliberately cause trouble. This book is actually good. It is better than some of the Pokémon articles I have read on other channels. Come on, author! I have seen the latest chapter and the author's words. After thinking about it, I feel cheated. Just hit the bricks and fly. I don't have to pay much attention to tactics. However, the perception of the Benbenyu Conquest Battle is really not good (personal feeling). It can be seen that the author's sweet spot is the bond between the protagonist and the elves, and he is not very good at describing battle scenes. However, many people who watch Pokémon should come for the bond between people and Pokémon. As long as the plot is not too outrageous, most people are willing to continue watching. I also hope that the author's book will get better and better [sending my heart]

First of all, the theme is Pokémon, friendship and bonding. The description of the article is delicate, the battle scenes are appropriate, and the plot rhythm is relatively slow, but it also takes into account the description of Pokémon and humans. Relatively excellent

The author must keep writing. I really like the interaction between Xingxing and Pokémon. It is very warm. There is no dark intrigue in the newbie period. I will wait until I have a certain fighting ability to talk about these messy things. At present, it is a very simple Pokémon world. I really love it. I am also looking forward to the next trip and the stories and bonds with Pokémon. I look forward to the growth of Xingxing and Pokémon.

Who would have thought that by just flipping through the book list, I would find a novel that matches my interests [laughing]. I really like the feeling of intertwining daily life with the ups and downs of the story, and the ambiguity between the protagonist and the people around him (mainly Daigo) is full of youthful and yearning feelings [Love] This feeling is like recalling the most delicious toffee you have ever eaten. Although you cannot really feel the sweetness in your memory, you can clearly taste its sweetness and beauty. 😊 It's so fascinating that I can't help but feel happy [blowing kiss]

It's very good, the logic is good, and the writing is very good. It's just that the ambiguous scenes are too frequent. They need to be stretched out a little, otherwise they will look cheap. I know that the author is easy to write and it makes me happy.

The writing is quite good, and the cheating is appropriate. There are also some supplementary explanations about the strength in the article. Overall, the cheating will not affect the reading too much. The bond between the protagonist and Pokémon is very realistic. The writing is a bit novice, but the emotion is more sincere. Some of the plots are quite touching, and they really fit the world view. The heartthrob setting is quite cool, but some plots feel a bit repetitive. Dawu continued to have low self-esteem, and Mi Keli was often depressed. When can the love line be advanced?

Nice! ! I have to say that the author Haji is really good at writing about love [blowing kiss]! ! The ratio of training elves and love is very good! ! It's obvious that the protagonist is really a heartthrob! There are a lot of crushes! I look forward to the author's explosive and more complete work! !

Have read it carefully I'm lying to you. Actually, I can't hide the smile at the corner of my mouth. This book is a relatively high-end kind of heartthrob. Some heartthrobs write so eloquently that others fall in love immediately when they see it. It's too ordinary. I think this book is handled very well and is acceptable, but the number of words is a bit short. The author should hurry up and update it! ! ! Can the author reveal when the relationship between the two began to change qualitatively?

OMG, this article is also very awesome. It doesn't matter if you haven't read Pokémon. Our stars will continue to be succubi like this. We are also successfully enchanted. Author, you know how awesome your writing is. It's so beautiful that it will make the kids in the neighborhood cry. Ok, Doubao generated bikini photos of the author for me. All veterans, please give me support for this author. Editor 2: Let's talk about it more seriously. In the early stage, you can still see that the writing is a bit dull. The repetition rate of sentences such as the sun stretching the shadows is too long. However, the author still made progress later. It seems that the author is getting better and better in about thirty chapters. OK, I won't say anything else. Explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates Updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates]

This is quite well written. The description of the relationship with Pokémon is very detailed and heart-warming. The combat writing is temporarily lacking. I don't know if there will be any improvement in the follow-up. Overall, it's great so far. Come on, author! The current Pokémon are Charmander and Ugly Fish (called Stupid Fish in the article). I hope the author will produce food soon! ! And for now, it's a little cool story (a heartwarming cool story). There is no brainless villain, everyone is nice, cute, and loving. The main character is not particularly hung up on. You still have to rely on yourself and Pokémon to collect bonus points. It's not the kind of straight-up promotion for free, which is pretty good! Big cheers for the author!

It's nice to look at, and it's so warm and cozy!! It's fun to have Pokémon in a Utopia that's a little warmer! [Sending a heart] The character of the protagonist is also very cute! The author gives me a lot of cheers, cheers, cheers [blowing kisses] (Off-topic: When I saw his family, I also thought about seeing him so happy. Will the whole family be overturned later and sad and take revenge... Ba ba ba… Okay, after watching too many Pokémon Dark novels and counterattacks, this is what it looks like [face covering] [ps! I don't like this! Or maybe I feel like that when I get tired of it (it's kind of like that) I'm not looking for abuse (well, I'm looking for abuse [I'm about to cry] because there aren't many good-looking Pokémon articles that suit my taste, and the ones that aren't really to my liking but are well-written should be read as a way to pass the time))) Pokémon is still warm and everyone is a good person, and it's great to have mutual growth, passionate struggle, and warmth [blowing kiss] (only personal preference)]).

It's so beautiful... So happy... It's so beautiful... The protagonist is so cute, the interactions are so cute, so happy, everything is great. Protagonist, you must always be very, very, very happy. Your family and friends are all well🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 And the emotional line is also very cute! ! That feeling of gradual progress is so natural and happy! ! ! The atmosphere is completely different when Dawu comes out! ! ! I swiped through it a second time in a hurry. It's so beautiful and happy. The fourth baby is so adorable before it even comes out. Author, you are so good at writing😭😭😭😭😭

It's really beautifully written! ! ! ! ! ! ! This book has a natural and natural feeling of comfort. Some other Pokémon Shuangnan always give me a very deliberate feeling. The teacher's writing is really beautiful! ! ! The teacher's writing is really good, and to have this amount of traffic is already amazing for a new Pokémon book with two male protagonists! ! Those with high traffic came later, and what they write is really not as good as what the teacher wrote (in my personal taste) (because there are very few girls watching Pokémon, let alone watching two male protagonists. There may be boys, but they are definitely in the minority. The teacher is already super awesome!!)

I rarely read Pokémon books because most of them are unreadable, but I think this book is very well written and makes people want to read on. I highly recommend it [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] and so far most of the books are normal people, there is no stereotyped plot [note] [note] and the protagonist has always been the strongest among his age group, which is very satisfying [full] [full] [full]

This is the first Pokémon book I have read. The serialization is very painful. I briefly read other books and I didn't like this one. It depends on me personally. I didn't like some parts at the beginning. Then I felt uncomfortable and disgusted after reading it. I chose to let myself go and skipped a few chapters. It was much better if I didn't write the later chapters. It was well written. Memmm

The author's writing is super invincible. It's a rare Pokémon novel with two male protagonists. The author must stick to it. I really like your novels. It's great [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's good to read. It's my favorite Pokémon series book recently, but the update is too slow and I can't read it. I hope the updates don't stop. I support [Send Heart] and [Send Heart] with both hands. I don't know if the proficiency of the moves will collapse. Currently, the Pokémon are all unevolved. Come on come on! ! ! !