Bengtie: Being Eroded by Honkai, You Say This Is Not Honkai

Subjective evaluation, I think it's good All kinds of pitfalls and poisonous points are explained. The part about rushing to the lower city can be interpreted as the protagonist's inexperience with his power. What was criticized was the relative length, which made him feel that "the protagonist is an envoy, why can he rush so slowly". Comparison can be made by adding time in the context, such as: "7:00 a. M. Sharp" when the protagonist sets off, and "7:56 a. M." When receiving Yang's message, so as to portray his speed in profile.

What do I think? If you are not familiar with them, you can still transform them. If you are familiar with them, you can create them using spirits. Wouldn't that be better?

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Brother! Can there be another novel where the "male protagonist" can transform into three characters? , I haven't seen Otto's plot in the back yet, I heard it's quite poisonous. But regardless of whether it is poisonous or not, I will definitely give you 5 stars. I just hope you will publish another novel in which the "male protagonist" can become a three-character Honkai character~! [Praise]

It's okay, although the description of the bishop is a bit stiff. The more I write about the bishop, the less I can achieve that feeling. It's true that part of the reason why your score is not higher is partly the reason. The book is really good, but some things are too stiff. As expected, it directly ended Otto's really abstract

It's a very good novel, and it doesn't have the most basic setting problems like other fanfictions I've read. And the plot is not very cliched. I originally thought it would be highly tied to Yalino, but I didn't expect it to be very good. I hope the author will continue and hope that the protagonist will not be treated like a monkey and the power system will not collapse too much. Oh, by the way, there is one more thing I forgot to add. Because the protagonist has no memory at the beginning, the order's ability is not fully displayed, and therefore the combat power is not up to par. Even if it is a little bit poisonous, it is still very good in essence. There is no big poison.

Five stars are given to celebrate Alicia's birth! Love the door!

Very good transformation essay

I have a bold idea, just like resurrecting Alicia, I will resurrect Kallen and make Otto a Green To.

It's good. I just want to strengthen the protagonist's facial expressions. After all, he has a high-power virtual age ability.

Nice looking, quite interesting

They can all transform, and they should have enough energy. When the time comes, there will be no one saying "I will kill all enemies in the world for the sake of the Emperor of Heaven."

I have a friend who was so angry that the author was too slow to update. He cried and fussed, so pitiful, so the author should update quickly!

Very nice, I don't know why the rating is so low

The rhythm of the story is well grasped, and the conflicts are arranged very reasonably. I couldn't stop reading it. It is really a rare good work that I have read recently! The author, please continue to work hard~♪

Did the author forget to write one thing, that is, there was a believer of memory on the train. The protagonist is the order of memory. I don't believe it. He didn't find out.

The writing is a bit dishy, ​​the idea is good

Very good, keep it up 💪Author

Very pretty, not bad

It's pretty good. If you can visualize it, there will be more interesting things.

Very beautiful, this book is so well written

Awesome, but too easy to watch [crazy]

Come on, author!

Great author, come on~~~

I really like it and want to see it

This book is quite nice

Good, good, good, good

Super nice book

Not bad, very pretty (=^▽^=)

Is it a single heroine?