[Zhongwu] [Single heroine] [Adopted daughter] [The heroine is a bit bad] [Yandere] [The heroine guides the male protagonist] [The master and the disciple] [No system] [Traditional] [Everyday] [Something to overcome]
In order to repay his kindness, Zhou Xuanmo took the baby girl from the queen's hands when she was dying, and led her to fight through the siege, and then started a long road of raising a baby.
But the little girl's thoughts don't seem to be pure…
New emperors, national forces, sect disputes, various rivers and lakes forces are competing with each other, and conspiracies are brewing.
In such a crisis-ridden world, Zhou Xuanmo's past has been chasing him...
Reader comments
Simply write a book review.
Let's talk about the conclusion first. I think I get full marks for being a hidden yandere.
The heroine is quite jealous, which is delicious. There are also many small theaters in my mind, which I also like. Let's talk about the male protagonist. He seems to be very strong, but he doesn't seem to be a grand master? (The female protagonist doesn't know when she can reverse it, and the male protagonist feels that her talent is a bit too abnormal, and there seems to be a little bit of resistance).
Let's talk about development, now we talk about their travels, and then the heroine's growing desire for the hero is also a highlight, but it seems that she is still far away from explosion. I hope there will be opportunities to eat more tofu secretly in the future (the hero is so strong that I find it difficult to drug him).
Finally, there is actually a single female protagonist. There are so many female pairs and the male protagonist admires but none of them are in love. It's good, lest everyone watch the single female protagonist and can't let the female partner quarrel.
After reading it, as a rare hidden yandere, this book is really a pity. I feel that there is still too little writing about the heroine. This book gives me the feeling that it has a good skeleton but not a good body. It would be much better to add the daily life of the heroine and the hero as an adjustment. All the male protagonist's teammates appeared one by one to recall when it was too cheap. I couldn't stand it and stopped for a while. I didn't expect that it would be over when I came back. It was too rushed later on, but fortunately the heroine ate it. Although the eating appearance was not very good, it was far from the scene I imagined. (Do you know how weird it is for a yandere novel to spend most of the time reading the male protagonist's memories [laughs awkwardly]. To be honest, I really didn't care much about the male protagonist's past. In the end, so many people took up so much space, and the interaction between the female protagonist and the male protagonist was lost later)
I am not shy about saying that the storyline is very good and novel. The writing needs to be polished and the characters three-dimensional.
I looked at the rating and found it was 6.3. Not many people who gave negative reviews actually read it. It was quite annoying. This had nothing to do with the book. It was just that I didn't like the structure of the article and just quit. I had to give it a bad review.
If the author can see it, I hope that the later abuse will end in a good way
The author insists not to stop updating, otherwise there will be no traffic at all. This is a good book, don't be buried.
The painting style is quite novel, and you can see the youthfulness, but also the growth.
I'm not very good at judging, but I personally think it's pretty good.
She's not a yandere at first, but a yandere she gradually becomes.
There is a sense of gradual progress, should it be said or not, is it worthy of cultivation?
But when I was reading book reviews, one person pointed out
So this book review ends here. Come on, author, I'm quite optimistic. If there is enough traffic, there should be a score of more than 8 o'clock.
It was okay in the front, but why did you let yourself go in the back?
It's normal for a good-looking love line to heat up slowly, not the kind of thing that happens as soon as it starts.
This book... The plot is very new, but the plot is a bit vague in some places, you can read it,,, it's worth reading, it's not a loss if you get into it.
I feel that I have a general understanding of the plot. I feel that it is still in the early stages and not many people are watching it. I am afraid that the ending will be discontinued [Start]
The setting is good, but the plot about the growth of master and apprentice is still not enough, and the ending feels a bit rushed, but overall it is a book worth reading, and there is too little content about them being together later, which is not enough.
It's good to watch and worth recommending. I'm looking forward to the follow-up plot.
Um, is it a good ending or a bad ending? I'm afraid it'll be so cruel and bad that my liver will hurt.
Are there boundaries?
How awesome🤓👍🏻Come on, author🥰
Not bad, very comfortable to see
This book is quite nice
Not bad Not bad
Hope it gets better and better in the future
Good looking, good luck to the author
There are flaws, but overall it's okay
Very good book
Isn't this the end?
It looks so good. I love watching it.
It's hard to calm down. I don't understand the protagonist's fight. Although it's to educate the heroine, it's good so far. I wish that chapter was real. I feel sad.
It's okay. The level of combat power can be a little higher. The protagonist can be rejuvenated.
Not bad, Ten Miles of Gold Rush is quite interesting.
Okay, the story is well written, I hope to see a good ending
It's very, very beautiful, and the characters are all very three-dimensional. The little monk only appears in a few chapters, but it's also very regrettable. I look forward to the subsequent chapters.
So far, it's pretty good. The male protagonist has very upright views, but some scenes are too deliberate.
I feel like I can continue writing. The ending is so sudden. Other than that, there are no shortcomings [please update]
The details are well handled, the story line is very tight, and it looks good.
Simply write a book review. Let's talk about the conclusion first. I think I get full marks for being a hidden yandere. The heroine is quite jealous, which is delicious. There are also many small theaters in my mind, which I also like. Let's talk about the male protagonist. He seems to be very strong, but he doesn't seem to be a grand master? (The female protagonist doesn't know when she can reverse it, and the male protagonist feels that her talent is a bit too abnormal, and there seems to be a little bit of resistance). Let's talk about development, now we talk about their travels, and then the heroine's growing desire for the hero is also a highlight, but it seems that she is still far away from explosion. I hope there will be opportunities to eat more tofu secretly in the future (the hero is so strong that I find it difficult to drug him). Finally, there is actually a single female protagonist. There are so many female pairs and the male protagonist admires but none of them are in love. It's good, lest everyone watch the single female protagonist and can't let the female partner quarrel. After reading it, as a rare hidden yandere, this book is really a pity. I feel that there is still too little writing about the heroine. This book gives me the feeling that it has a good skeleton but not a good body. It would be much better to add the daily life of the heroine and the hero as an adjustment. All the male protagonist's teammates appeared one by one to recall when it was too cheap. I couldn't stand it and stopped for a while. I didn't expect that it would be over when I came back. It was too rushed later on, but fortunately the heroine ate it. Although the eating appearance was not very good, it was far from the scene I imagined. (Do you know how weird it is for a yandere novel to spend most of the time reading the male protagonist's memories [laughs awkwardly]. To be honest, I really didn't care much about the male protagonist's past. In the end, so many people took up so much space, and the interaction between the female protagonist and the male protagonist was lost later)
I am not shy about saying that the storyline is very good and novel. The writing needs to be polished and the characters three-dimensional. I looked at the rating and found it was 6.3. Not many people who gave negative reviews actually read it. It was quite annoying. This had nothing to do with the book. It was just that I didn't like the structure of the article and just quit. I had to give it a bad review. If the author can see it, I hope that the later abuse will end in a good way The author insists not to stop updating, otherwise there will be no traffic at all. This is a good book, don't be buried.
The painting style is quite novel, and you can see the youthfulness, but also the growth. I'm not very good at judging, but I personally think it's pretty good. She's not a yandere at first, but a yandere she gradually becomes. There is a sense of gradual progress, should it be said or not, is it worthy of cultivation? But when I was reading book reviews, one person pointed out So this book review ends here. Come on, author, I'm quite optimistic. If there is enough traffic, there should be a score of more than 8 o'clock.
It was okay in the front, but why did you let yourself go in the back?
It's normal for a good-looking love line to heat up slowly, not the kind of thing that happens as soon as it starts.
This book... The plot is very new, but the plot is a bit vague in some places, you can read it,,, it's worth reading, it's not a loss if you get into it.
I feel that I have a general understanding of the plot. I feel that it is still in the early stages and not many people are watching it. I am afraid that the ending will be discontinued [Start]
The setting is good, but the plot about the growth of master and apprentice is still not enough, and the ending feels a bit rushed, but overall it is a book worth reading, and there is too little content about them being together later, which is not enough.
It's good to watch and worth recommending. I'm looking forward to the follow-up plot.
Um, is it a good ending or a bad ending? I'm afraid it'll be so cruel and bad that my liver will hurt.
Are there boundaries?
How awesome🤓👍🏻Come on, author🥰
Not bad, very comfortable to see
This book is quite nice
Not bad Not bad
Hope it gets better and better in the future
Good looking, good luck to the author
There are flaws, but overall it's okay
Very good book
Isn't this the end?
It looks so good. I love watching it.
It's hard to calm down. I don't understand the protagonist's fight. Although it's to educate the heroine, it's good so far. I wish that chapter was real. I feel sad.
It's okay. The level of combat power can be a little higher. The protagonist can be rejuvenated.
Not bad, Ten Miles of Gold Rush is quite interesting.
Okay, the story is well written, I hope to see a good ending
It's very, very beautiful, and the characters are all very three-dimensional. The little monk only appears in a few chapters, but it's also very regrettable. I look forward to the subsequent chapters.
So far, it's pretty good. The male protagonist has very upright views, but some scenes are too deliberate.
I feel like I can continue writing. The ending is so sudden. Other than that, there are no shortcomings [please update]
The details are well handled, the story line is very tight, and it looks good.