Traveling Through Team Red, Four Problematic Teammates at the Beginning

Excellent subject matter, but the origin of the protagonist can be further optimized. The setting of the time traveler can be changed so that the original memory is replaced by the time traveler's. The BOSS's awakening requirement is changed to part of the soul (memory is also part of the soul). In addition, when there is no inspiration, the author can find inspiration from the villain cadre and the book where the sister is a team member.

I think it started well. Through the battle between No. 1 And the weird cadre, the character of the male protagonist was expressed. The male protagonist is a team cook like the Red Warrior of the non-recognized Sentai Akihabara clan. By the way, I would like to ask the author, will it be linked with other teams in the future? Such as King or Baotarou

How can the team not have Blue Warrior? Hey [smiles]

This book is very good in terms of subject matter and description, and the writing has a strong sense of the team. It tells about the wonderful adventure that the protagonist started after being transported through time like a heavy truck, and then passed through the body of Long Jianhong, who was originally killed by a sneak attack. What kind of individual team members are there, the team's red power is definitely strong and lucky, and the big radish merges into the big radish, these plots are all there. The first character I fought was a monster transformed from the soul of the original Sentai Kurenai. However, it is a pity that the flavor of the Sentai is too strong. The protagonist is a traditional hot-blooded type and is habitually led by the nose. There are also aspects such as the treatment of the strong topic of the Sentai Sentai created by the authorities and weirdos. As a result, I am less and less interested in reading this book now. It is not to my taste. I may leave after a few chapters.

Come on, big brother who writes books, there are very few people who can write original teams and follow the right path. Zhengmo Dao, hot-blooded, idiot-type oil, don't give up, I like to watch it Profound knowledge, strong will, the cane is a hidden black hole, the former ruler of reason, pioneer - Huang - Walter Young Childhood adventures, reliable character, coffee is an unexpected weapon, the train navigator, pioneering——Red——Himeko Hidden strength, calm heart, the spear is the kindness of an old friend, the former Dragon Lord of Xianzhou, pioneering - green - Dan Heng Disappeared memories, kind conduct, the camera is a copy of memory, the royal servant, pioneering - pink - March 7 Visitors from a foreign land, the position of chaos, the star core is the original power, the bat man of the galaxy, pioneering - gray - dome/star The guidance of the road, the trust of faith, the hat is the inheritance of the future, the doorman of Pinoconi, the pioneer - blue - Misha (Uncle Yang adjusts his glasses Himeko drinks coffee Dan Heng raised his gun Photoshoot in March Yeheng bat) Misha bows, Star Team, Pioneer Company (explosion, smoke) give you a roll call from other teams

Shirou is my sister😘😘As a brother, I know her better than anyone else😄😄She is very pure😌😌Just like Advent Like an angel on earth👼👼What do you know about Shirou😠😠Shirou is my love, my hope [blowing kiss][blowing kiss] mine, doll😚😚Therefore, I will choose Shirou's friends😠😠all of you are unqualified😠😠I will force you to get married even with force😄😄Come and get married! ! Shirou! 🥴🤩 I'm your brother ah ⚡ Why don't you listen to me ⚡ Are you going to betray your brother for a teammate you just met ⚡ You are my prey ⚡ My dear sister ⚡ Desire for nothing ⚡ Pray for nothing ⚡ No. 1, Right? ⚡I will not allow you to escape from this battle, Shirou⚡I will destroy you⚡Then come you and destroy me⚡

It's very interesting, very interesting. It's the first time I've come across a team novel. It's not bad. I really wanted to laugh at the scene in Chapter 44 when Mrs. Wang was having trouble with her. The Black Snake Team God TM was under the age of 18 when he came out, and the magic fight was a yes.

Although the theme of team disqualification is a bit old-fashioned. But it can be seen that the author is still careful. It's also more to my liking.

Watch the original Ultraman-like monster fights next door, watch the original team fights here, it's so cool, don't stop updating [Hold][Hold][Hold]

There are some elements that disqualify the team, but it turns out to be pretty good-looking [I learned it] Come on, author

The writing is good [laughing evilly] So far, there is no big problem. The protagonist is a bit abstract, the plot is interesting, and the protagonist should be in an invincible state now [laughing evilly] [Like]

Crying and Sweeping Graves, a great book on a common theme It's a pity that I'm sweeping the grave again. The author's writing is not bad, but it's a pity that the plot is difficult to advance, so I stopped updating it.

Personally, I feel good. The three views are very upright, and the plot is okay. Let's see if we can stick to it [Thoughts]

Are there any additions? There must be a roll call [almost crying]

About the roll call, Heroes of justice, dragon sword red Fly freely, crane sword powder Go forward indomitably, the tiger sword is yellow Make the best use of everything, turtle sword green Punishment eliminates evil, snake sword is black Beast Sword Team, Star Breakers, join us!

It is close to the famous soul wear, and is about three floors higher than the hidden soul wear.

I have not read the Sentai series, I have only seen some characters in the theatrical version of the collaboration with Kamen Rider, but if the Sentai series is as good-looking as this book written by the author, then I really should read it. If not, then I can only say that this book is what I think Sentai should be like.

Personal contribution Guardian warrior Lin Jianbai, whose real name is Bai An, self-discipline: protect everything, sword spirit: Shenglin, seal puppet: Shape of Lin, fighting moves: Shenglin Jue, Xuanwei's direct disciple, he has kept in mind the Taoist teachings of entering the world to save the common people since he was a child, he is a persistent warrior, always hoping to protect everything Just warrior Feng Jianlan, real name: Lan Xixi Personal setting: The girl who was saved by the previous generation Long Jianhong was influenced by him and became a police academy student. She graduated from the same police academy as Officer Zheng. She was a junior whom he was quite optimistic about. She had a more paranoid sense of justice than Zheng Yi. She eventually became a bailiff. When she was secretly investigating the garrison team, she was After being discovered and dismissed, she was later recognized by Feng Jian Sword Spirit Feng Qi and went to Galaxy City to investigate secretly. The self-imposed commandments were: to be fair, to be a loner, a cold and arrogant girl. One of the purposes of coming to Galaxy City was to train He Jianfen. When she was a judicial police officer, she was called Sister Xi by her colleagues. Moves, Phoenix Sword's first move, Burning Heart, Second move, Judgment, (can be changed by the author) Roll call: Judgment of rewards and punishments, justice, Broken Star Blue, the characteristic of the move is to attack the opponent's soul, the more evil deeds done, the greater the impact will be. What is strengthened is the eye that can see evil clearly, ps: can be modified by the author. Submitted for the second time

It's quite beautiful. It's the team in my mind. It's also a red warrior that can make both the people in the novel and the readers feel warm. Of course, the other team members also have their own image characteristics, which I like very much. Also, the author is great, can the heroine accept both of them [shy]

Beautiful, lots of words, 26 chapters, more than a dozen bookmarks

It's really good-looking. When are you going to do team-specific women's clothing, soul swapping, age manipulation, body size manipulation, etc. I want to see something new.

Is this protagonist originally from the motherland?

I think it's good, but there is a bit of poison in the middle, but it's acceptable. But it's a pity. I'm still counting on the "eldest sister" to clear her name. Looking at the plot, it should be the rhythm of killing them all. I prefer the passionate protagonist, but I can give the protagonist more combat power later.

There are indeed poisonous spots. Don't believe the comments in the comments section that say those without poisonous spots may be because they have higher poison resistance.

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It's a very interesting Sentai novel because it's an original Sentai novel. So even me, who has never watched Team, doesn't seem to have any obstacles. The protagonist has very upright views and a very likable personality. The villains are not purely bad, they all have a human side. Even the soldiers didn't kill many civilians, but instead captured them to beautify them. This kind of novel is simply great for people like me who don't really like dark literature. A great Sentai novel. The combination of the fictional world and the original team gives a very good experience. The knowledge requirements for the team itself are not that high, it can even be said that there is almost none. Although it is about the original team, it will not affect the reading at all if you have not seen the team. Everyone's characters are portrayed quite well. This is an important point to praise, especially the villain. He is loyal but does not know how to adapt. The villain who only knows how to fight sacrifices his life for the loyalty he believes in, but it also portrays that he is not the kind of mindless murderer. At the end, he gave the little girl a promise, a promise that she will be the county magistrate in the future. I think this interaction with the little girl is what really fleshes out her character. Other decent villains also have their own characters and stories. They are not the kind of villains that are only suitable for upright opponents in the traditional sense. Each of them is very novel and interesting. In particular, the protagonist's outlook is very upright, and the overall tone is also warm, with the villains interacting like a family. The interaction between the decent people and the sword spirits is also interesting. The people captured by the Spark Soldiers were not harmed. Just added a touch of fairy tale color to this story. Summarizing a very warm and healing novel about the hot-blooded team. The characterization is very good, and there is nothing too toxic. The overall evaluation can be between A and A+.

It's well written, thank you to the author.

The subject matter is very good, the content is also good, and the author listens to his advice. I like it very much.

Although it is original, it tastes very authentic! I can't bear it anymore, I'm so moved! What I want to see is the glory of human nature and the beauty of the world!

The villain's character is a bit abstract, the plot is not serious and very happy, the protagonist's outlook is super positive, and the portrayal of the little characters is very good.