World Online: I Am the Insect Swarm

Regarding a series of issues in World OL2, it is impossible not to talk about this matter, so I still want to sincerely apologize to the readers who have watched World OL2. There are many reasons why I gave up on this novel. First, the early writing was a bit vulgar. I read it many times and always felt that something was wrong. I overused certain methods to uglify the protagonist, making him lose the majesty of the insect leader. This was caused by immature techniques, and it is difficult to change again. [Because I won't be able to go anywhere later...] Second, the story of Jinxuan and the story of the Great Master both have an impact on the ending of the First King. However, two novels of the same type, written from beginning to end, will make many people feel fatigued. Therefore, between the two, I chose Ren Jin, who is more important in the Tilting Universe. After all, he is the key force that ultimately kills the First King. Third, I still lack technique and experience. My description of Jin Xuan's story is a bit unsatisfactory. This is supposed to be a fun type of novel, about crushing with swarms of insects, but I have read it a few times, and it always feels very awkward, a bit... Childlike. I found that readers who like Jin Xuan's story line like not Jin Xuan, but the Shi Wang line. This puts the cart before the horse, because he is the protagonist of Jin Xuan's story line. To sum up, after repeated consideration, I decided to insert Jinxuan's story line into someone else's story line. Indeed, the two Zongqun novels were a torment for readers and myself, and the novelty would disappear all of a sudden. Finally, I would like to sincerely apologize to those readers who have watched World OL2. Sorry! I have delayed this apology for too long! I hope that this story of the Great Lord can make you forgive me again! [Finally, I would like to elaborate on this. Readers who have not watched World OL2, it is best not to read it, but it is not impossible to read it. Basically, Jinxuan's story line will be re-edited and inserted elsewhere later, and it will not be written as an independent story. However, the Shi Wang line in OL2 is the main line of the Tilting Universe. This will not change. You can read a few extra chapters. ]

I came across it by chance and was shocked. The author has written more than 1 million words, but there are less than 50 comments. It can be seen that the author has control over the details of writing. This definitely shows Tomato's malice. Ordinary authors write millions of words and get no traffic at all. I sincerely admire the author. I was inexplicably addicted to reading the Zerg novel when I was in elementary school. Now I have found a book that I feel comfortable reading. It is really not easy. I admire the author greatly The biggest disadvantage of this work is that there are not enough readers, although if there are more readers, there will be many negative comments. But for such an author who creates seriously, the work he spent time polishing has not been recognized by the market. Even if the evaluation is bad, at least he knows where the mistakes are. Nowadays, all the author's works are considered tepid, and can be directly understood according to normal understanding. No results are equivalent to failure. Get used to looking at the final result. I also hope that when writing books in the future, the author will create a small account to cater to the creative market. Your creative career shouldn't be something no one cares about. There is nothing wrong with catering to the market and giving yourself more income. I wish the author not to become Van Gogh [blowing kiss]

Influenced by StarCraft, I tend to have a preference for Zerg-like online novels, but after reading them for six or seven years, I only really liked three or four of them. And you my friend, I love this book you wrote. Come on [salute] [salute]

In fact, I think this book is quite good. I just read it and it satisfies my fantasies about most insects. Come on, author, I believe this book will be seen by more people [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

The two personalities of Ren Jin are clearly portrayed, which makes people want to explore this book. I think this kind of book is more attractive for readers to read. The plot is coherent, the logic is clear, and the protagonist's IQ is online. The world view described is very grand, vividly showing all kinds of people in the apocalypse. Everyone has their own independent thinking about the nuanced portrayal of human nature. It is a good book worth reading in depth.

Very interesting, I hope the author can give it a rating soon

I read it for a while when I was in a book shortage, and I thought it was pretty good, but I couldn't read it anymore. Recently, I was in a book shortage again, and I saw this book again, but it didn't have a rating yet. I came here to give a rating. It's really amazing. It obviously feels much better than some low-scoring books. Why is it that no one has read it even with so many words? . .

This theme and the opening chapter are still very new.

The writing is good, but it seems that the audience is not me. I searched for Zerg articles just to read about the explosion of troops, but this book has many other things, and the pace is very slow, and the scale of the Zerg has not increased.

It is a very good-looking Zerg novel. The plot is very logical, the characters are also very distinctive, and the world view is very grand. When I first saw the Zerg Leviathan, it made my eyes light up. It can be seen that the author is very attentive, but too few people have read this book. Come on author.

A very, very, very beautiful book. It will definitely become popular. 😋Waiting for the big update of Twitou every day

The author's writing is actually quite good, but there is little traffic (ー_ー)!! Okay, okay, I really like reading this kind of dark text (will it really not be blocked)?

The logic is clear, the characters are pretty good, it's cool where it should be, and it's pretty good and will definitely be popular.

Actually, this book is pretty good in my opinion. But the advantages and disadvantages should be discussed seriously and not carelessly. Let's talk about the advantages first. After all, I was also attracted to it. First of all, this book has a great world view, has its own conception, and the portrayal of the protagonist is also okay, and the other hidden thread is also well buried. Overall, it is okay. Okay, now that we've talked about the advantages, it's time to talk about the disadvantages. First of all, this style of writing inserts several girls out of order, which feels very strange and makes it very uncomfortable to read. For example, I have read 50 chapters now, and there are at least ten of them. Also, this subject matter and this dialogue can easily be restricted. This is a big problem. I searched for Zerg on other accounts before. For those who only read books with a million words, when I first read this book, I saw that there were only more than 300 chapters and I crossed it out. I'm not going to lie to you, I've crossed it out twice before. So, I hope the author can divide it into chapters, and there won't be so many girls at the end. It's really weird. Just keep two or three. I hope the author can see

It's very interesting. Why are the data so bleak? The only shortcoming is that the author acted too hastily and wanted to fully display the world view. It may be a bit uncomfortable to watch it if it doesn't match the radio wave, but it is at least average. Come on✊ I take back the preface, at least the early writing is a bit messy and the plot needs to be polished.

It's pretty good, but not many people see it

The way of thinking matches mine, the kind that pursues rigor, self-consistency and systematic innovation. Must give five-star praise

Is there no rating for an article of more than 2 million words?

The Zerg set in StarCraft are really beautiful.

It's well written, the protagonist's mentality is interesting to you, and the details make people interested in reading it in depth. Why doesn't anyone comment? ! There are not many Zerg novels on the Internet. I encourage authors to write more about this aspect.

The book is okay and I can read it. However, there is no sense of oppression like the interstellar and Terran Zerg that I thought. However, there are few authors writing about Zerg. I hope the author can work hard. Hello author, I read this book again today. The author's perseverance and patience are really great. After writing so much, I thought the author might have published a new book. I only watched it for a short time this time, and I still felt like I wanted to watch it but couldn't. I don't know if the author has ever read Tomato's Zerg novel about God's Domain. Although the author of that book is slower, he basically writes about the oppression of the Zerg. The author can learn from it. There are also settings like the Tyranids in Warhammer 40K, the settings of the Zerg in the interstellar, including the settings of the Zerg breeding in the Collapsed Star Dome Railway. They are all very powerful, and they feel like they can sweep the entire universe. After all, big is good, and more is beautiful. I hope the author will continue to work hard, come on [Like][Like][Like]

It's good to watch, but it could use less digressions, so it's easier to take away when you're fascinated by it.

It's a pity that Rare Tomato has a good book, but it's not very popular.

The writing is okay. Just write less digressions in the novel. If you really want to explain it, put it at the end of the chapter.

Come on, author. This book is good. I hope more people will read it.

The subject matter is very novel, and I have a strong desire to read it. It's beautiful.

The plot is exciting, overall the pace is good, and it's quite enjoyable to watch.

The article is expressive

Okay, okay, it looks pretty.

Pretty good. Human beings are the gems in heaven and earth. It's just that whether the gem is bright or not, we need to carve it ourselves. Every effort and every choice we make is a carving.