Jiang Jinyue transmigrated into a book one day, armed with a System, Nascent Soul cultivation, and the position of elder in the cultivation world's number-one sect. The sect leader doted on her, and she could have any rare treasure she wanted by the handful. With a start this amazing, how could Jiang Jinyue possibly lose?
But reality was cruel. The System wasn't a golden finger, but a taskmaster pushing her to complete her mission!
Jiang Jinyue: “Waaah~”
Still, the taskmaster had a little conscience. It promised her a resurrection card if she kept the original heroine on the right path and was ultimately killed by her.
The reward was tempting, but Jiang Jinyue just couldn't bring herself to do the awful things the original story's wicked supporting woman had done. So she quietly added a few ideas of her own. She never expected the plot to gallop off like a wild horse, impossible to rein in.
Even the heroine went completely off the rails, turning into a sweet-on-the-outside, sinister-on-the-inside type who was coming after her!
Jiang Jinyue: Don't come any closer!!!
It's like weird-tasting candy. It's okay if the author takes out a separate paragraph. It looks pretty good and the writing style is okay, but the overall look is very awkward and incoherent. This makes it hard to be immersed in the book while watching it, and the mood is easily broken. When I read it, I felt like I was seeing flowers in a fog. What I saw was not a progressive story, but ideas strung together one after another. In addition, the emotional foreshadowing is well done. The process of superimposing pressure little by little looks quite enjoyable, but after the superposition, the climax of the release feels a bit heavy-handed, which makes people feel very suffocated. The lack of the Riddler or information (the perspective of the author and the reader does not match) deepens this point. Ah, the above are all my humble opinions, don't take them too seriously. Then you want to ask me if I recommend watching it? Then I personally recommend reading it, it's like this strange-flavored candy 🤤 The author's astringency that comes out of the article is really delicious 😘
OK, it's also a comment. In the book, Jiang Jinyue is like a succubus, starting with Xiao Yun, then Jiang Xi, and then Liu Qingyan😂Ye Luoshi is really miserable, she is still a sensitive character, Jiang Jinyue has done that (just one step away from becoming a real person), and still daydreams about who Ye Luoshi will be with in the future, even if she is emotionally slow, she will not be like this😏Don't use Jiang as always thinking that she is a straight woman, think about it yourself It's similar to the bro's point of view above. After all, the author is a high school student. It's really not easy to create a plot. The emotional jumps between characters are normal. It's easy to create a Shura field with a word count. Of course, I can say that this is actually because I don't like this kind of writing. The author doesn't need to take it to heart, just treat me as complaining😏 (I will apologize if the author is unhappy🤔) The writing style is really good. If a high school student can write this, you are really lucky as the author😢 Human evolution does not take me with it
How can I put it this way? The relationship progress between the two protagonists at the beginning changed too fast like riding a rocket. There was no transition. There are also some places where the plot jumps and connections feel weird, but it's not a big problem👍 Another thing is watching what someone said about the plot of "The Queen of Ten Thousand Females", where the protagonist is forcibly kissed by a supporting character. I saw the author said that the female supporting character is like this. If they don't kiss, it feels inconsistent with the character. If possible, you can actually use some beautifying and dislocation or white space to write, not so direct🤦. After all, there are people who can't handle this kind of plot, but I don't feel this way, because I already had psychological expectations after reading the comments before reading the book😏 There are no problems in other aspects. Finally, cheers for the author👍
So pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty! Big cheers for the author 😘😘😘😘
I have to say it's really good. 🙂 I read half of it, and the more I read, the more confused I get. 🧐 At first, people thought it was just an ordinary system to travel through books. When I saw Restart the World, what kind of experiment, I was completely confused 🙂 It is difficult to expand the world view of the whole book. If you can't construct this hidden world view well, it will make people confused. But I have already written it down, and I believe the author can write it well 😳
How can I put it, I feel like I missed something.
Pleasant to the eye, supportive
Nice! Bookshelf+1
Pretty good 🙂