**

The more I read, the more interesting it becomes. There is no system or aura. It is not an invincible and refreshing article. The writing style is also good. The author has a wide range of knowledge and the writing is very detailed and gives a sense of immersion. It is rare to find a good magic forbidden fan. The author was previously unsuccessful in 🐱 and switched to Tomato. I have to thank 🐱 for this. However, in my opinion, the reason why it was rejected in 🐱 is not because the plot and writing are not good, but because it is slow to warm up. At the beginning, after passing through the four branches of Index, Rampage🎵, Vampire Killer, and Misaka Sister, I began to explain the protagonist's life experience. 🐱 Only those who can pass it will have ghosts. The remaining mainstream platforms are terrible, each one is more radical than the last. I wish I had three chapters of background, three chapters of upgrades, and three chapters of killing gods. So it's great to come across a non-systematic article now. Some readers said that the plot follows the protagonist throughout the whole story. In fact, the feedback is that the pace is slow. Well, fast is better, and slow is better. I think it is okay. More updates will be better.

Come on, author, one of the few fics that I can watch is that the protagonist is level 0. He will definitely not be able to learn the magic test. Except for a few people who take the scientific test, they are too weak. The protagonist has not made much progress in strength now. In the later stage, he may be killed by others if he doesn't take a glance.

Although the protagonist was a little screwed up in the early stage, it also reflects the author's deep understanding of the forbidden world. In the underworld environment of Academy City, ordinary people can only be imprisoned without hanging. Moreover, the other details and character descriptions of this book are also very good. Although it is still a little far away from the definite deviation, it is almost the same.

It's very strong. Each chapter is basically 10,000 words, and it's pretty well written. There's no big problem with the logical narrative.

It's a very nice book [heartfelt]. The main character is ordinary and extraordinary. When I read it, I was still thinking whether the main character would look weak if he didn't have the ability. But the author is really great and the details are well described. It gave me a feeling of knowing that the main character has no ability and is weak, but he is also very powerful without feeling too powerless. I really like this kind of reading experience. I hope the author can write new stories in the future. Also, can an author write a lifetime of novels? I really like it [please update]

The quality is guaranteed and the setting is very rigorous. The author seems to have checked the setting of the Magic Forbidden. Basically, the ability settings have a source, or there is a perfect reference for the setting of the original work. There is no over-derivation. For example, there is a fan work for Naruto's Eight Gates of Dungeon. It sets up the counter-reduction of the Eight Doors Dungeon and the eternal improvement of chakra. This kind of over-derivation, conjecture, and self-justification is an operation that overly destroys the setting. Moreover, each chapter is a big chapter with a lot of words, but it is comfortable for you to read, and it is basically very natural. The author crashed [face covering] I give this book a score of 8.6 Because it already has a score of 1.4

It looks good, but the foreshadowing is recycled too slowly, and the male protagonist in the initial chapter does not make any changes to the plot, and the sister chapter is too weak, so it attracted a large number of readers in these two stages, otherwise the score should be 0.5 Points higher [laughing]

Good, very good, very good. Highly recommended! ! ! The author seems to treat Saten Ruiko a little bit special, how about it? Is Saten Ruiko the heroine? But that's not important. What's important is that I'd be happy if I could write more about Saten Ruiko.

The volume is large, and one chapter is basically 10,000 words. Although the plot is a bit watery and the pace is a bit slow, the writing is very good and the protagonist setting is good. Please come back soon, I will never keep books anymore [crying]

These pictures are a bit long. I just noticed it when I looked at the table of contents yesterday. The WOC author is awesome. One chapter is about 10,000 yuan. It's amazing👍🏻 The rhythm is very good, and Simin Slag does not affect the original plot in a big way. It has its own plot, and it is consistent with the original work to a certain extent. GOOD, although it occasionally has some teaching content (clearly referring to English usage), but it can reflect the basic qualities that Academy City high school students should have, making it more appropriate. The biggest problem now is that there is only one update a day (ƪ(˘⌣˘)ʃ I hope the author can achieve more than one update a day, I looked at the phone screen and dreamed, drooling thirsty, Haas Haas)

It's pretty good to watch, except maybe the main character is a bit "twisty" [blowing kisses]

I love watching it at all, and the price is slightly lower at the beginning

It's beautiful, very thoughtful, and the number of words is conscientious.

It's a very good Magic Forbidden fanfic. The current 32 chapters are basically not poisonous. The original plot has not changed much, which is a matter of opinion. After all, the protagonist is just an ordinary person with strong physical skills. It can be seen that the author wants the protagonist to develop his abilities step by step. The protagonist's hidden ability is very strong but the protagonist still doesn't know how to develop it effectively. On the other hand, the protagonist's character is a bit awkward, but I am worried about whether the author can grasp the improvement of the protagonist's strength. After all, the ability is very buggy, and he will become invincible accidentally. It depends on the author's performance. By Chapter 66, the author has written nearly 10,000 words per chapter and is really full. Now the protagonist is starting to feel better. It should be a harem story, but I, who is mainly a single woman, also like to read it. Without it, the protagonist is really trying his best to open a harem.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a hard-working author of a Magic Forbidden fanfic. The writing is also very good, but I still can't guess the protagonist's abilities. Is there any information disclosed?

Recommended! It didn't destroy the original settings, nor did it destroy the character designs of the original characters. It is fully qualified in terms of second creation. Then, not all the things written are the original text. On the contrary, almost all of them are stories from the protagonist's personal perspective. Although it does not play a big role, it can be said that the future is promising. In the end, both the main plot and daily routines account for a considerable proportion, so you don't have to fight all the time. Overall, it's very nice to watch.

There is a novel of this quality on Tomato. It is highly recommended.

It's very good to watch, and there are no problems except for the uncomfortable feeling of being frustrated by the protagonist's inability to control himself. It's better than 99% of Tomato novels today, the writing is logical and every chapter is generous and filling.

The front is a little slow, but I can read it, but it is easy to be led astray by reading the comments. There are not many fallacies/toxic points in some places. I feel that some of the comments are the kind of thinking that leads to wrong results. They combine the immaturity in other parts of the book with their own wrong logic to find poisonous points. The protagonist of this book has a lot of thinking process in the early stage. The early stage points to personal psychological changes. It is written based on the insignificance of the individual in the plot, so it can be said that the plot has not changed much. But it's normal for fellow fans to think this way. (I feel here that the author didn't have too much control. It should be that the author talked too much, 8k or even 10,000 words a day, which led to a longer process of personal transformation - this process lasted for about thirty or forty chapters) It's pretty good later on, so I don't have any big problems for the time being. I write pretty well on a daily basis. The advantage is that it's large in quantity and full in control.

This is the best forbidden novel I have read so far. It is not the kind of sadistic novel where the protagonist cheats in the forbidden world. It has story logic and context. The characters in the original work have not been modified by the demon to do things that are inconsistent with their behavior. This is the kind of story that gradually enters the world. Jiajing's novels become more and more interesting the more they are written later. It can be seen that the author has thoughtful ideas. Originally, the Magic Forbidden is quite unpopular, and many people write it casually. This one can be seen that it is written carefully and carefully. One chapter is as long as two or three chapters of other major novels.

It's so good that I finished watching it in one night. Many people said it wasn't fun enough and the main character wasn't enough. But in my opinion, the writing is smooth, the characters are not OOC, the daily life is good-looking, and the main plot is getting better. More importantly, it updates ten thousand or ten thousand a day. Where can I find such a diligent author?

The content is rich, respects the setting of the original work, has new ideas, and he is a very good author. He updates high-quality content every day while maintaining 8,000 to 10,000 words per chapter. It is strong and invincible👍The author's humor is also very to my liking, like it👍

You are all good people, and I will give you a good review. Girls can watch it, but boys are not suitable.

Very interesting. There are very few books about weak protagonists.

A very good book. There is no harem or invincibility. It is the experience of an ordinary person in this world. It is very real. If you are tired of reading cool articles, you can read this. It is very exciting.

Good reviews good reviews I don't know why, but I re-read Super Gun about a year or two ago. At that time, the only good-looking fanfics I could find were old antiques that had been discontinued. Recently, Tomato published two of them, and they were both written in the way that I prefer not to interfere with the original world and become a living person in the world. It's fun to read. The non-interference I want to express in my comment refers to not affecting the original logic by separate hanging.

It's very good-looking, very good-looking, and very comfortable to read. It has a lot of content. One chapter is worth 5 chapters, and the characters are very consistent with the original work. However, the ending of the event is a bit abrupt. For example, if it tells what to do next, the next chapter will directly start a new event or the daily life is a bit like an anime novel, it still seems a bit abrupt. There are no other shortcomings.

This is the only fanfic in Tomato that I can read and it's not too toxic.

Although the protagonist is always defeated, the story is indeed interesting. After all, it is a forbidden studio, and even a strong man has to be beaten constantly. It is reasonable [laughter]

It has the flavor of the original work. As long as there is no sign of suppressing the growth of the protagonist later and he can grow naturally with the plot, it will not be toxic at all. However, I think there are probably not that many people who like the original work of Forbidden City and just want to watch Long Aotian.