HP: Alice in Dreams Simulation World

The chapters in it are simply too satisfying for me. I feel like I can buy a separate volume of the fifth and sixth chapters. Is this the charm of the fourth natural disaster? It's so cool. Alice is a master-level existence, with Max personality charm. Whether it is the be (pseudo) ending of the fifth week that the world is destroyed together, or the sixth week of the evolution of all mankind together, and the final realization of the community of human destiny in the magical world, they all have the feeling of players playing the human world. After each week, the system's complaints make me realize that this week is over and it is time to return to reality. The connection between the weekly plot and the world plot is super good. I am very much looking forward to the next plot development, this is the most powerful of the HP works I have watched so far. (Additional sentence: Ahhhhhhhhh!!! Alice, I am your dog! Just this Alice is cool!!! No, I feel like I will get ejaculated if I don't see the author's Alice for a day. Again, I am Alice's dog)

Perfect, I love the heroine's fun and ambition. The simulator theme is also very new in HP, and the character is authoritative. It's more than a little better than the old-fashioned heartthrob HP. I look forward to the heroine's great career [Sending my heart]

It's amazing. When the protagonist simulator was updated at the beginning, I was a little disappointed. It wasn't until the fifth week that I got it completely. This fourth natural disaster that completely destroyed the whole situation was really fun to watch. In comparison, it feels like driving low and driving high. The writing is really good, and the character of the protagonist is also more three-dimensional, but it is too short. I must update it more [Sending Hearts]

The fifth and sixth games in the simulator can be regarded as masterpieces if opened individually. The combination of technology and magic is really cool. After reading it as a whole, I just feel very shocked. I feel that it shows a different level from other fan works. Of course, in the daily transition after each weekend, there is a small sense of emptiness, that feeling of not being able to distinguish between reality and virtuality. In our daily life, who would have thought how crazy our Alice would be in the simulator? A little snake with white fur and blue eyes, Alice is simply a calm madman [Love] Just a little control, in order to protect the hateful foreign persimmons, we are not friendly towards fan works at all [smile]

It's so cool, so cool. In fact, I was more excited about the fourth natural disaster in the spin-off novels, but this article completely broke my radar, and the author's writing style can be ranked in the top five of Tomatoes for me. The character of the heroine is also very interesting. I originally thought that the author was going to arrange a funny route, but it turned out to be a crazy beauty route. I was so happy when I read it, and there was no meaningless emotional description. I was so happy to see the emotional pull between Alice and Voldemort in the fifth episode. Is this the brother-in-law? A bit interesting Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. It feels so good. I was planning to sleep, but I clicked on an article randomly when I was bored, but you told me why it looks so good. I stayed up late again and wanted to cry [I cried for a long time. Jpg] Madam, if you're tired, just play. If you're sleepy, just play. If you're hungry, please continue playing. Your child is hungry [crying]

It's pretty good. Although it's a little too casual at times, the flaws are not hidden. The simulator settings are not too human-machine, and the NPCs are more responsive. The heroine also has certain control capabilities, rather than just what the simulator says. It's quite interesting, and it attracts me to continue watching. I don't know much about the original work, and I don't feel that the OOC of some characters is very obvious, but some familiar readers in the comment area may mind this. The heroine is the kind of fun-loving person with a bit of a bad taste, but she is relatively kind-hearted, right?

The protagonist, Alice Revend, comes from a Muggle family whose mother is engaged in law and father is engaged in finance, but she gained magical power through the simulation of [Wizard Life Simulator]. The whole process is to continuously become stronger through simulation. In reality, that is neutral, and neither side can offend. To be honest, the fifth week is really fun. There is no meal replacement. The protagonist is like a ruthless researcher conducting experiments. He has a good attitude and treats everything as a simulation (although it is indeed). I just feel a dizzy feeling after reading it. Unfortunately, it is capped at the end. Each attribute is capped at 10. I am probably worried that I won't be able to play it, so I break the name and get away from the main purpose. After all, it is a "Wizard Life Simulator". In fact, you can turn this book upside down. Reality is secondary, and simulation is really interesting. Other content such as introduction.

It's very interesting, but there are too many dialogues between the characters, which makes me feel that the pace of the plot is too fast, and it lacks the appropriate soothing feeling brought by the action description and environmental description. However, the last two episodes are particularly exciting (must watch). Sometimes it feels like the heroine knows everything, but no one around her is surprised, and there is no sense of transition in the middle. Some characters also reacted very strangely. For example, when the heroine asked Harry how he got his scar, Harry suddenly became wary and answered stiffly that it was because of the car accident in which his parents died. The heroine showed no sympathy or apology for asking about this matter, but he didn't know the wizarding world at this time and shouldn't behave like this. But the setting of this life simulation is very novel, and the combat power is not broken, so there are not many points added. There is no exaggeration that someone in the first grade can have stronger magic power than Lao Deng and learn the three unforgivable curses. It's that kind of macroscopic beauty, and it's worth seeing.

It looks good so far. The heroine is really weak in reality, which is in great contrast to the strength shown in the simulator. Sometimes I really feel a little aggrieved. I hope to strengthen the heroine's strength in reality. It can be written as the heroine hides her strength in reality.

Although some content definitely uses AI, it does not prevent this book from becoming the most special existence in HP fan fiction. I have tried using LLM myself I came to write articles like this, but they are actually quite empty. After the author polished them, they are much more readable and interesting than real AI. Re-revise my opinion, I think this book becomes more authentic as it is written, and LLM is used to assist writing in large parts. It's not impossible, but since LLM is used, the shortcomings of this book are also obvious. It has a lot of flaws in logic and details. The author's revisions partially made up for this shortcoming, making the overall writing acceptable, but it is obviously not as high quality as a fully human-written version. As for the forensics part of this article, fortunately, the things written by this LLM are quite reliable and are not very biased. Even so, the flavor is almost overflowing, and there are many factual errors. (Although they are basically fictional plots)

It's quite a scary book. Alice's ambition can even make people a little uneasy about the author. It's worth reading. However, after the fifth simulation, people will feel the huge changes in the turbulent era and feel powerless from the bottom of their hearts. The author has written this aspect quite well.

A bookworm's approval, it's top quality. AI doesn't matter, as long as it looks good. It's hard for the author to ensure that every dialogue is concise when writing novels. AI is very suitable for writing these, but pure AI cannot satisfy the imagination and sense of satisfaction. The combination of AI and author is really nice.

The heroine's funny style was a bit childish in the early stage, but she grew up in the later stage. In the fifth week, the world will be leveled, and in the sixth week, global evolution... Don't make the situation too big, okay? I will always support King Alice!

A classic female channel, the main attraction is the simulator and the growth-oriented female protagonist. You can indeed see the growth of the heroine in the novel, but no matter in the early or later stages, it feels like the heroine is licking Harry, and the heroine's character sometimes gives people a contradictory feeling. Later, after the system changed to a male, he became inexplicably obsessed with the female protagonist. In addition, some people in the comment area said that the author may use AI, so you should read with caution. If you prefer books on the subject of simulators, you can read it.

It's so cool... This is the real fourth natural disaster. I've seen so many fourth natural disasters. Only this one has the real player mentality, just to clear the level and become famous in the world. Come on, you must keep writing! ! ! !

Yes, it is rare to see simulations written so well, and the real simulations that follow are even more exciting. However, the nuclear bomb destroying the world and flying into the universe are a bit rushed. There are too few clues and details. It is just a torrent of times. I hope I can write more details in the future. I look forward to the follow-up. It's a pity that the author's imagination does not support lasting innovation, and I won't go into the repetitive plot. There are also people who restore memories, but the actual effect is not much, and it is a bit confusing to read.

The rating of this book is really low. As a fan, it should be at least 9.4. Let me talk about the shortcomings first. This fanfic has actually deviated from the original story of Harry Potter to a great extent, and the historical background (in the simulator) has evolved to a level of grandeur visible to the naked eye. If you want to read an original magic story, then this is not suitable for you. In addition, the early acceleration will make the heroine grow too fast, and there are some parts that are not consistent with the understanding of the original work (for example, the Mirror of Erised should only be able to see what is in her own eyes, etc.) But the biggest advantage of this article is that the author evolved the character and emotional development in the new story while maintaining the original settings of all the characters. It is a very reasonable and non-OOC process. This book imagines the combination of magic and technology in the subsequent simulations. It is a very epic story, and you can see the arc of human thought. In the simulation, the differences between it and the original work cannot be explained in a few words, but perhaps it is these contrasts and connections that make this article so fascinating. I hope the author can maintain his standards and continue to write stories. Come on

So fun! The heroine's main body is the same generation as Harry, and she entered Slytherin as a Muggle. However, because her family had contacts with the Malfoy family, she had a good life, and she became stronger little by little through system upgrades. The first generation of the simulator started. The first eye was stared at by a basilisk. The second eye worked as Voldemort's follower but was killed by sneaking away. The third eye was too low-looking and could not be looked at directly. The fourth eye died as an intelligence agent in a black and white melee. The second in command of the Death Eaters in the fifth eye became the boss and united with Muggles to provoke a world war and nuclear peace. The sixth eye suppressed Tom everywhere and became a saint and continued to cooperate with Muggles as a loyal P Club player...

With a clear structure, complete logic, and a rational personality, this book is quite good. I have read many Harry Potter fans, and this book is undoubtedly the best among the best. There is no poison, the heroine is cautious and rational, and the author's portrayal of the changes in mentality caused by the simulator is also very appropriate. The protagonist knows very well that all gifts of fate have a price tag in secret, and he also knows his own position as a manipulated person rather than a free choicer. The protagonist is dependent on the simulator, but she also understands her own dependence and knows what she wants and what she needs to do. This is much more rational and real than many protagonists who rely on the system but still make all kinds of complaints and abuse the system.

After only watching six weeks, I can't help but comment that this is the real fourth natural disaster! I read the comments and said that the fifth and sixth chapters were AI. I read it very quickly at first and I just felt happy. I have used AI outlines to generate novels, and I have also written essays to reduce the AI rate. Now that I think about it, the logic of the writing is correct. Some details are skipped directly. The overall logic is like AI. I can use it privately for fun, but I will not accept it when it is released [sad] It is obviously a very good subject matter.

It's so fun to read, so good to read, keep up the good work, author! I hope the protagonist will continue to become stronger and I hope there will be no cp [laughing]

The subject matter is okay, but I found that the heroine is rather reckless and has no sense of propriety when interacting with others. Moreover, she obviously has no sense of crisis in the magical world and is very relaxed. When dealing with the characters, she also has the arrogance of an outsider towards the natives. Of course, this arrogance is not meant to be impolite, but she does not take them seriously, as if she is playing a game. I don't care much about other people's thoughts. Sometimes I feel sorry for beautiful, strong and miserable characters, but it's just superficial. Other than these, I feel pretty good, and the plot is quite interesting, but I saw a lot of people in the comment area using AI, and I don't quite understand what this means. Is it the AI ​​I'm thinking of or some two-dimensional thing?

Poison points: ① The classic so-called cheat "upgrade" ② Personally feel that the realistic description should be reduced Although it is far inferior to the top Tomato works, in general, it is relatively good among Tomatoes.

It's really good to watch, highly recommended. The plot is novel, especially the setting of Zhou Mo, which allowed me to see the endings of different magical worlds. The heroine has grown up step by step from a Muggle in the early stage, integrating different elements, most of which are direct collisions of magic and technology. Moreover, the description of the characters is very good. In my opinion, it fits the character image very well. I like the heroine very much. The main reason is that there is no cp. If you want to criticize me, you can feel free to do so.

It looks good and the simulator is fun, but the heroine's level is too low now. Can the baby upgrade quickly? The perfect fourth natural disaster is full of charm, and some parts made my hair stand on end.

Very unusual and high class. Multiple weeks, different endings, very patterned and distinctive, allowing mankind to share prosperity! Real. This is a wonderful, unparalleledly beautiful film. I am very grateful to the author for allowing me to truly appreciate the charm of literary works. I hope the author can create better works. Looking forward to your good news. The last time I was so excited was One Hundred Years of Solitude.

Ten faints, ten faints, all!!! What an awesome idea, what a perfect fourth natural disaster. This is what the Fourth Disaster tastes like!!! Looking down at the world calmly and condescendingly!!! The NPCs love and hate the players, but they can only pray for the players' love!!! Have a good time!!! The old enemy fate between Tom and AC, the hatred between Sijiao and AC, and the eternal supervisor Wuhu! How could there be such a perfect fourth natural disaster article! It just tastes like this!!!

It is very interesting to watch, and the development of each week is very unexpected. Of course, it is understandable that the first few weeks were offline very quickly. The protagonist was still very weak at the beginning (if anyone dares to use this to complain, I will stop you). He did not work as a nanny, nor did he surround the protagonist. He even jumped out of school and directly competed between countries. The six weeks directly pushed the world into the interstellar age. It's very cool, the protagonist is very sane and calm, and the plot is normal (for example, because of Zhou Muli's achievements, the protagonist once lost herself in reality, but she reacted quickly). In short, it is super good-looking! ! !

This is my second time watching it. When I watched it the first time, I probably took the test after watching the fifth and sixth weekends, because I suddenly realized that the seventh week felt more like a bland narrative. Your entire mental state has been affected by the previous weekends. When the sound comes, my spirit is lifted, and the AI behind it has a human-machine feel, which makes me feel more and more satisfied. It makes people feel a kind of physiological discomfort, and everyone's code of conduct has changed very strangely, that is, you can clearly feel that you can't stand it anymore.

The layout is really big and I have never seen HP type before. The heroine is indeed suitable for Slytherin. After all, whether she is Ravenclaw or Slytherin, she can do huge things! Eagle Court is the world's public enemy, Snake Court has become political [Adoration] The honeymoon period is so sweet for me. The plots of each week's episode are very interesting, especially the last two weeks, which also added Death Eaters and Saints (although later on they followed their own ideas [laughs]). Will you join the Order of the Phoenix next weekend? Today it suddenly occurred to me that it might be the beginning of the parent generation. After all, the ancestor era is almost over [laughing]