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Battle Through the Sky + System + Time Travel Thank You Everyone!
I'm looking for a novel where the protagonist travels to Dou Po Cang Qiong and awakens the system. Thank you all.
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Xiao Yan's Brother Starts at the Beginning of Battle to Break the Sphere, and There Is Dou Huangxiu at the Beginning.
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The first 20 chapters seem a bit slow and the plot is not very good, which can easily put people off. But the rest of it is okay. It has its own plot and participates in the plot of the original work, which is pretty good. I read some people's comments and negative reviews. Most of them gave bad reviews about which women in the mercenary group in the early stage and who didn't accept Medusa! Actually I don't quite understand! Is it because the upper brain of the sperm is controlled and only has this idea? Does having more girls mean that all female leads have to be taken in? If you come into contact with a female protagonist, you should accept it. Isn't that just to recruit girls for the sake of recruiting girls? If you like to recruit girls purely for sex, you might as well go directly to the website to read fan fiction and books. Doesn't that look very explicit and conform to your ideas? What novels are you going to read? I think the back looks pretty good! No problem
This book is truly a rare masterpiece. Whether it is the layout of the plot, the creation of the characters, or the texture of the text and the depth of thought, the more you read, the more immersed you become. The author's writing style is delicate and restrained, without unnecessary embellishments, but it can inadvertently touch people's hearts. He hides emotions, stories and truths between the lines, making it comfortable and powerful to read. The story has a relaxed rhythm, clear logic, and full of details. Every character is vivid and three-dimensional, as if it really existed. You will be moved when you read the emotional part, and you will stop and think when you read the profound part. After closing the book, your heart still cannot calm down for a long time. It is not just a book to pass the time, but more like a dialogue with the author, a touch of the soul, allowing people to see themselves and the wider world while reading. This kind of work can withstand repeated readings, and you will gain something new every time. It truly makes people remember it after reading it, and I sincerely recommend it to everyone.
Objectively speaking, the plot is okay. The protagonist opens the dungeon alone. However, having multiple girls and missing girls is indeed a relatively big disadvantage. It is better to wear the skin of Doupo and open a new dungeon. Even if you meet Xiao Yan in Zhongzhou later, it is worse than being in the same place with Xiao Yan.
It can be regarded as a rare Dou Po fanfiction ceiling. The early stage was very well prepared. I see that there are no poisonous points so far. Each heroine has a separate story line. It is not blunt and the plot is very touching. It also adds a lot of settings from the original world and improves some plots that have been touched upon in the original world. It feels like it can be viewed as a side story to Dou Po. I don't know why everyone is so angry. I hope this book will not be silenced. Also, the author must insist on updating it! ! ! [Laugh][laugh][laugh] Hahahahahaha, the score is 5.8. The author is really miserable [laughs]
The author should update it quickly. It seems that this book does not have any poisonous points at present. It is very well written. To put it bluntly, I have rewarded two books on this application. This one is comfortable for me to read, but it is too short. I hope the author can be more powerful. Update it quickly. I will give you a follow and support first.
This book is truly a rare masterpiece. Whether it is the laying out of the plot, the creation of the characters, or The texture of the text and the depth of thought make people read more and more The more immersed you are. The author's writing style is delicate and restrained, without Superfluous embellishments can inadvertently hit the mark The heart hides emotions, stories and truths in words time, comfortable to read and powerful to paste
It's pretty much the same as what the brother said before. It's quite satisfactory and nothing particularly sinister. I just don't understand why so many people always want to strip all the women around Xiao Yan naked? There are so many girls, so we have to accept all the girls from Douqi Continent.
There are only a few good-looking ones in Dou Po. I have set up the Little Medical Fairy's origins privately, and I have had to eat several girls. The Little Medical Fairy, Nalan Yanran, Yun Yun, and the original character Spider Big Sister (with long legs) are good-looking [laughter]
It's quite good to watch. The plot design and characters are both to my liking. Why are there so few reviews and ratings [Chigua]
It can be very good, consistent with the original work, and adds many peripherals. It also adds a lot of opportunities to the protagonist. The character of the protagonist is also relatively good, which fits my personality.
One of the few Dou Po fanfics that has the desire to read on, it's not licking and not arrogant, it's very comfortable, the author, please do more updates [please read carefully]
A rare good book that made up for the regret I had when reading Dou Po
So far it looks okay, I don't know what will happen next
Overall, the content doesn't have any major flaws, it's already very good. At least from the perspective of listening to books, it has been very smooth from chapter 1 to now, and it is now chapter 122. Still very good. [Praise]
Not bad, please finish it! ! !
It's very interesting to write. Please finish it.
Hold on, it looks pretty good, just don't end it [thinking]
The writing is indeed good, the original plot and the old plot are well integrated. It is not like the modern multi-female novel, but more of the older generation's writing style. I can only say it is good-looking.
In those classic novels from the past, how the protagonist leapfrogged the opponent and defeated the opponent made it feel reasonable to the readers: the protagonist and the villain are at the same level, and their skills are also at the same level or there is not much difference. At this time, the two sides are on par. The protagonist upgrades his skill by one level through understanding or opportunity. At this moment, the villain is invincible. Then another villain one level higher than the villain comes and suppresses the protagonist. The protagonist is injured but does not die. Then the protagonist upgrades his skill by one level or obtains a higher skill. At this moment, the protagonist is able to suppress the villain. This step-by-step transition will not feel abrupt [face covering]
It's very beautiful, very innovative, and has clear ideas. It's very beautiful, very innovative, and has clear ideas. It's just too short. Come on, author.
It's good to read😍There aren't many Dou Po novels on Tomato, but this one is pretty good [laughs]
[Chigua] is a fanfic of relatively good quality, and some of the plot arrangements are really imaginative. I hope the author can complete this fanfic.
The author's writing is quite good and does not make people feel disgusted. Unlike some of the protagonists, who are pure villains, Tang San [snickering] [snickering] [smirking] I hope the author can update it well
It's so embarrassing, I want to be embarrassed even more [sending my heart]
I have to say that the protagonist's personality is really good
It's well written, but there's a problem with the timeline. Thank you to the author.
This book is very well written, with smooth writing and a good plot. I don't think it's necessary to write this as a fanfic. It's a new book with some slight changes, and the rating can be around 8.5.
Not bad, thank you to the author. Will the male protagonist create power later? Is there a title after the hero?
Beautiful, a rare book
Not bad, not bad. I like it very much. Come on, author.