Zhan Shen: What Should I Do If the Male Protagonist Is Posted at the Beginning?

Very nice! The author must keep this level! Lin Qiye is the best match for the heroine! Don't be all [crying]

The plot of this work is compact, suspenseful, and the story frame is quite brilliant, but there is still room for improvement in character creation. It is suggested that the protagonist's character characterization can be strengthened and the image be fleshed out through more detailed descriptions and inner monologues; the setting of the supporting characters can also be more three-dimensional to avoid being too facial-like. If the character's motivations and emotional entanglements can be deepened and the character's behavior can be made more convincing, the overall story will be more appealing. I look forward to the author continuing to polish the integration of characters and plot, there is great potential!

Madam, you will keep going, right? [Smile] I couldn't help it when I saw Chapter 10. It's so to my liking. There are only about 20 chapters so far, which is totally not enough.

Lin Qiye encountered a full-level succubus when he was just starting out. He tried his best but could not defeat it.

It's good-looking, really good-looking, just (pointing fingers), the author is great, is Lin Qiye really the only cp? (Twirling)

There is a high probability that it will be the leader Lin Qiye, with no deputy, and there will be a Shura field. Taozi is naturally stupid (it doesn't feel like it). All in all, it's very sweet! ! !

Please write more, you must still have it! I really like the heroine's character. It must be 1v1૮ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅ა

The good-looking heroine is a relatively straightforward one. I like this kind of character. Although there are only 60 photos, she is still very good-looking. It has received five-star reviews.

At present, there is no awkward period in reading this book. The plot and the emotional development between the characters are very clear and not confusing. I personally feel that it is a book with great potential. I hope the author will not give up and keep updating!

It's beautiful, I love watching it, the groundhog screams, my aunt's heart is overflowing, I just love to see the emotional pull between them, ahhhhhhhhhhhhh, who can understand my mood

I must keep writing this. It's really interesting. Taotao is a bit of a natural straight-shooter.

I really like the interaction between the female protagonist and the male protagonist Lin Qiye, and the female protagonist and the male protagonist are both very strong, not bad, not bad. I really like ヾ(*ΦωΦ)ツ Come on, come on, come on, I hope the relationship between the two can... [Sneaky smile] [Love]

Incredibly beautiful book

I haven't seen such a sweet couple for a long time [laugh][laugh][laugh] My girlish heart~

It's so good-looking, the younger sister and the male lead are perfect for each other.

The author writes so well, keep up the good work!

Come on, author, I really like your original character (* ⁰̷̴͈꒨⁰̷̴͈)=͟͟͞͞➳❤

Uh, who is this guy with the lowest CP?

I particularly like the author of Qiye, and I beg him to make Qiye the male protagonist.

So pretty! ! ! Author, please don't give up! Don't stop updating

It's good to read, I like it ^ω^, the author's emotional drama is great and very delicate [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

So beautiful! ! ! I have to keep updating, I will catch up until the end of the book [Flowing Kiss][Adoration][Admiration][Please update more][Sparrow Food Masterpiece]

Author, will you stop updating? I think it's very good, so I hope you will finish it!

It's great, and I'd like to ask who's in the extras and if lines? [Sending Hearts]

Very plump setting. I like it very much. I will give it five stars directly.

Love it. Love it. Love it.

I really like how they get along

Come on, come on, come on

Love this feeling so much

The food cooked by a good cook is delicious.