Tales of the Strange: The Neurotic Girl Clears the Game by Cuddling

Not bad, the protagonist's character design is on point, the descriptions are good, and the plot is interesting. There is a more typical cannon fodder villain (I hope the description can be reduced), and will the protagonist have a mechanism to become stronger, or will he be a Pokémon trainer?

It's beautiful. Yaoyao feels too much pain in real life. Because of the difference in cognition, a strange combination of circumstances allows her to have a sister and get warmth in a strange world, which is also a kind of salvation.

It's actually pretty good to watch, but it's a bit hard to comment on the country aspect. Although the little heroine doesn't understand what a game is, don't you guys understand? He was imprisoned as soon as he came back, and even took blood tests. Wow, and morally kidnapped him by saying that others need a heroine. The little heroine is so young, so who can help her?

It's a good read. At the beginning, I saw that the heroine has no offensive power at all, but the more I read, the more heart-warming and touching it becomes... It's rare to see such a sincere article on Tomato. It balances the combat power with this kind of sincerity. This book will be really good to read.

It looks good. Dragon Kingdom does have problems with its treatment of the protagonist, but judging from the current plot, it will change. The writing of the mental hospital is also very good. Two words, very good. The protagonist is very pure and I am very happy to see it. Hehehe 😳 Excluding the fact that the author is reincarnated, the writing is very, very good 👍

Although the second copy feels very cliché, I still can't help but be moved by the emotion. I read that there is a male protagonist in CP, right? Although according to this direction, I always feel that two female protagonists will have more emotional depth. It depends on the author's arrangement. I'm looking forward to the update. The stickers on the third copy are really cute. Off-topic: I would like to ask how old the heroine is. Because she has cognitive impairment, I can't tell her age from her appearance, and her body feels very thin. I often don't notice the heroine's biological age later, and I feel a little confused.

The author's problem is that weirdness is not like weirdness, but like people with weird abilities who know how to play with their own minds. The strange stories about rules give me the feeling that there are no rules, only weird stories. Because normally in most rules novels, the setting is that low-level weirdos have no emotions and will only act according to a set of rules (weirds also have their own rules, and weirdos will be lost if they violate the rules). This is a mechanism to prevent weirdos from harboring humans. Only high-level weirdos have relatively indifferent feelings, and the weird hierarchy is also strict. It doesn't mean that you can usurp the throne if you want to. But there are too many weird characters in this book, and it doesn't feel weird at all. For example, the vice principal wants to usurp the principalship, and it doesn't seem like something that would appear in the Rules of Weird Tales. But if the author wants to write that the principal and the vice-principal are opposites because the plot requires these two people, it is actually very easy. Combined with the above setting that weirdness has its own rules, the principal's rules conflict with the vice-principal's rules, so there is an opposition. But in this case, Yoyo and the nurse can no longer protect the protagonist, so they have to strengthen the protagonist a little bit. But this is also good. The protagonist redeems the dungeon partner, and the partner protects the heroine, and they redeem each other. Another thing the author did not write about is conflict rules and false rules. In short, the design of the author's copy is not very good, but there is no problem with posting it. The above are just suggestions, the author will follow his own advice

The first dungeon is pretty good, and then the second dungeon depends on personal taste. 11111 The following are suggestions for authors11111 Opinions are for reference only. In the end, you should choose what you can read as exciting as you can, and don't piece together the four different images based entirely on the readers' opinions. 1. Clarify the theme, including the content to be modified, must focus on a clear theme. For example, the first dungeon confirms the theme of the weird post, so the description in reality can actually be written like that. After all, there are people in the weird world who will give warmth, but the second dungeon is a bit conflicting. Everyone except the nurse sister is a bad person. As a result, the weird world has become cold, and the entire environment cannot make people feel the emotional warmth and protection. 2. Maintain it with warm emotions instead of force and sacrifice (subjective opinion, for reference only) For example, in the first dungeon, in addition to Yoyo, there was a kitten leading the way, a female teacher helping in the cafeteria, and an old professor giving a final reminder. They were all rewards of kindness, but they made the strange world flow with emotions and not so cold. (The following are more subjective opinions, just to expand ideas) Don't highlight the fact that Yoyo is too strong. For example, the plot of the laboratory building can be changed to Yuyou: My father, a physics professor, and the teacher in the laboratory building did not let him go because he was afraid of his strength, but let him go because of the emotional reasons of pampering his own daughter. Another example is the fear of 404 roommates. You can even remove the roommates and directly let Yoyo be your roommate, such as Yoyo, Haruka, and Sakura girl who committed suicide in the same dormitory. The main focus is on emotional interaction, rather than differences in strength. I haven't read much about the second copy. My suggestion is not to let the nurse sister fight against the entire hospital and the rules alone. For example, the extension can be used as a cute little nurse sister, and together they can prove that doctors are the bad guys, etc. It is for reference only.

It would be a shame not to read this book! My favorite is the famous scene where Xiao Qiao confronts Optimus Prime for Big Qiao. If Sasuke Uchiha hadn't suddenly blocked a nuclear bomb with his Susanoo, this wave of Spongebob's Krabby Patty bombs could have blown through the entire magic school. There is also the most classic one - Bai Suzhen yelled at the Avengers, "Sister's tenderness is only for those who stick to it, you guys get out of here", vividly portraying her frustration at being blasted away by Iron Man. After all, the book's stickers are so sweet that it hurts your throat, the knives pierce your heart, the random fighting scenes are dazzling, and the characters are as three-dimensional as 3D models. You think you are taking sugar, but in fact, the things wrapped in the sugar are premeditated glass particles after you open it.

I personally still like this kind of warm and sweet plot. I am very happy to see the interaction between Yaoyao and everyone. However, I saw that the author said it would be completed this month, but there is no sign of ending it now. Here are some suggestions for the author 1. It is also a very important point. I feel that the author should have just written a post and had fun at the end, forgetting the setting of the weird dungeon. The first dungeon still has a scary environment, the second dungeon has reduced the horror elements a lot, and the third dungeon feels like it is a human dungeon. Except for expelling people from other countries, it is difficult to see the weird elements, including the drowning of the eldest lady, bleeding and other human characteristics, which are sometimes easy to cause drama. 2. There are some places where the details are lacking, and some places feel a bit too much. For example, the female teacher in the first dungeon spent a lot of ink in the early stage, and it also showed that she has a good impression of the protagonist, but there is almost no role in the later part. Another example is the housekeeper in the third dungeon. I remember that. In the beginning, I wrote that I had a good impression of the protagonist who cares about her, but later on it felt a little bit directed at the protagonist. I feel that there are some places where I don't need too much writing, and there are also some places, such as how strong Yoyo is, how she has the second form, and some background supplements can also give a better look and feel. 3. The protagonist can actually write about some growth and the like. The better one is about low self-esteem. After the first two dungeons, especially the second dungeon, the head nurse should have allowed the protagonist to regain at least some confidence. However, in the third dungeon, the protagonist actually still lacks confidence. The author can make the protagonist more confident. Apart from these, if I modify some details, I feel that it is very good. In fact, it is a very good article. I have been listening to the book for two days. I really like the story between the protagonist and the little protagonists of the dungeon. Good luck to the author. It is already very good. At least the writing has surpassed me a few times 🤦 Also, the first eldest lady should return [air kiss]