One Piece: Creating the Darkin from the Start

This novel is quite interesting, and it's worth following through the first few dozen chapters. But there is a big loophole: all the history is told by the protagonist and the dark descendants, but no one has verified the authenticity of these histories. If ten thousand years is too long and all the documents have disappeared, no one will doubt where the protagonist, a self-proclaimed historian, got this information from?

It's very nice. We can reduce the protagonist's scenes appropriately. Now we should add new factions. What's most satisfying is that they all have their own souls and are not disgusting 100% loyal puppets. Come on In the later period, they continued to strengthen the forces of the dark descendants. The revolutionary army came out with hundreds of major generals and brigadiers. This was already an upper-level combat force. The balance was seriously broken. Various lieutenant generals and major generals were killed in the navy.

The author, I saw Acnologia in the introduction. You must be someone who plays League and watches Fairy Tail. Can you please publish Fairy Tail Albarez's Twelve Shields of the Empire? I've searched all over Tomato's books but there are no Twelve Shields characters. It's better to be more powerful and all of them are like the Yonko. Thank you [sending my heart], I love you [sending my heart]

Let me give you a plot suggestion: reach a balance between the Darklings, Pirates and Protoss, and then introduce other characters. Both sides began to sway people, such as Foyego who came out to cooperate with the dark descendants. The Darkin gained the upper hand, and then fabricated something such as the Shurima Scepter that could suppress all Shurima Ascendants. The pirates sent people to find artifacts to lead to the Shurima Empire, Dog Head, Renekton and so on. Then the pirate side gained the upper hand, and the dark descendants found a way to contact Mordekaiser in the underworld as an ally to prepare for the invasion. The pirates contacted Yodel City as an ally. Then the characters are added slowly. Let the natives of the pirate world know that the Dragon King is an existence that the Celestial Spirits are afraid of, but at the same time they also know that the Dragon King only hates the Celestial Spirits. After the natives of the Pirate World know the power of the Dragon King, they are ready to backstab the Celestial Spirits.

I've finished reading the Dark One chapter, but Fairy Tail didn't stick with it. I haven't watched the anime, so I can't relate to it at all. It's well written. A real person who has fun is one who dares to use himself as a tool for fun. If you add all kinds of insurance, that's not fun, that's fantasy.

I feel like Aatrox is a bit weak.

Although the writing is immature, and the plot also has issues of imbalance and periodic emptiness, the characterization is relatively profound, and I have a full personal understanding of the original work. There are no poisonous points of conflict with the original work, and the author updates it very quickly, making it well worth reading. Now the plot has fallen into a hollow trap. I hope the author can slowly think about the development of the plot before writing.

It's pretty good. When will the yellow chicken, dog-headed crocodile appear, and Void? Will you write about other heroes, such as Foego's Shadow Isles, Noxus Iron Man, Freljord Ornn's Three Bear Sisters, Targon, etc. Then I'll look at the introduction and see how it will write about the Holy Grail War.

Why are we still talking about dark descendants in more than a hundred chapters, but no other characters?

Okay, if there is a problem with combat power, the original world won't be able to come out, at least not now.