I Asked You to Pick up a Girl, Not to Be Picked up by a Lolita!

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There's not much to say, let's give it a thumbs up. The plot arrangement is reasonable, and the little girl is quite cute. All in all, it's a normal redemption story. The background is common school bullying (I always feel that a lot of people are like this). The writing style is up to standard, there is no long paragraph of text, and there are no abrupt turns. It's good grass to eat. However, I think the details can be better handled. For example, in the scene between the male protagonist and Jiang, they hang up the phone directly because of teasing. The background here is that Jiang cares about the male protagonist, and it is obvious that the concern is greater than the teasing. The male protagonist hanging up the phone directly will make some people feel that the male protagonist is unreasonable. You can add one or two sentences after confirming that nothing is wrong, and let the male protagonist hang up after laughing and cursing, or follow up with "The two said some things, some things, but no," and then hang up the phone. The above are some suggestions that I wrote out of my identity as a reader and my sincere concern for this book. I am not condescending and I do not hope that the author will follow my wishes. I am just making reasonable suggestions for everyone to know.

Not bad, the author writes well, these pairs of CPs are almost complete. The emotions and daily interactions are also wonderful. Sometimes I cry while watching some of the plots, and I also laugh with the interactions of the characters. [Top post]

A classic redemption novel, the writing is excellent, at least it was very sweet for me to read. I rarely write long reviews, but the author seems to be unable to stand it any longer. I'll try to save it. Analysis (minor spoilers): First of all, the male protagonist is somewhat chauvinistic, but not as absolute as Bai Yu. Instead, he is more like an ordinary person and more (closer). The relationship between the two protagonists develops very naturally. There is no emotional explosion in Little Rose, but the relationship develops naturally. (There were originally a few poisonous points in the book, but the author was very brave and changed it to "Adoration". The pure love warrior is a great victory!) Every couple has their own beautiful features, they are all delicious! Each has its own characteristics, but they are all loli! (Lolicon fans are overjoyed!) Finally, don't think too much when reading, let your instinct control you (thinking too much will affect yourself, life is so tiring, so don't be mentally exhausted [laughter]) Come on, author! There will always be people who don't like what you write, but they will quickly move away, and the ones who stay with you are your true fans! Come on!

It's quite healing, but it makes me want to cry a little bit. Maybe it's because I share the same problem. After all, I am also a patient with mental illness. I just hope that there can be a happy ending, where good people are rewarded and evil people are punished by the law. Don't let it happen that good people are not rewarded and evil people are still at large abroad or enjoying themselves as local emperors in prison. The feeling Dr. Leng feels is the powerlessness he feels when he studies medicine because his sister is sick, or because he is a psychiatrist, but his sister is not protected and suffers from depression (I have only read Chapter 30, so I don't know where the plot will go next)

It's actually quite good, but there are too many branch lines. I don't really like multiple branches. Some people only like a single main line, and some people like multiple branches. I happen to be the first type, but Orange Dove is very easy to read. This book is actually quite good. It's not easy for me to persist in reading it, because I don't know how to read it. It's llk2 that I don't like multiple branch lines. I'm also a music game addict. When I saw the butt, I smiled unconsciously and said yes. I personally think the writing is quite beautiful. The shortcomings of multiple branch lines are that there are many pitfalls. However, if you choose to give up this book, if it can make you relax, that's fine. Thank you A Zhi for bringing such a beautiful book, thank you for your hard work [blowing kiss]

A sweet love book, but if you read it carefully, you will find that it is actually a sour candy. It is not the fault of the book, but the sourness of you in front of the screen [smile] [smile] [smile] (It is undeniable that this book is really good-looking, it belongs to fine chaff, and there are many groups of pure love CPs, oh, by the way, did I mention that this is a lolita novel, a lolita control [adoration] [adoration] [adoration])

First of all, I am not a lolicon. The redemption and unobtrusive emotions in the book are very comfortable for me as a goblin. Secondly, I am not a lolicon. Each character has its own characteristics and is vivid. It feels like the male and female protagonist in another book. Also, I am not a lolicon. It can also be seen that the author wants to write a story involving all members of the team, so Lao Xia's cp should appear soon.

The interactive plot between the male and female protagonists won my heart. There is not too much Riddler plot, and there is no repeated plot dragging. I don't think the characters are too artificial, so I think this is a good novel [Chigua]

This kind of redemption article feels very good. As a patient with depression, I can feel that the feeling of being bullied before was really helpless. When I was bullied before, I also thought about someone coming to save me, but the reality is just like Jiu in the book, no one will care. , Watching Jiu get better and better, the easier it is to think of the feeling of being bullied at that time. I dare not say that I am a tearful person, but when I think of being bullied like Jiu, but Jiu gets better, I can't help but want to cry, imagining how good it would be for me to be like this at the beginning. I hope this book will get better and better. Let me imagine what it would be like to be redeemed myself.

What happened to this introduction at the end?

It's like Bai Yuyou, but that book with male and female protagonists is even worse, and it has multiple female protagonists.

The biggest feeling I feel after reading this is two words: comfort. The plot is not complicated, but the relationship between the male and female protagonists is really sweet, and you will laugh unconsciously while watching it.

It's very interesting. I hope there won't be any knives in the back. Don't mess with the plot where the male protagonist escapes and rejects the female protagonist's love. If you like each other, you just have to be together openly and openly.

I really like it. It's basically not toxic. I read a few chapters every day before going to bed. I see Xiaobai and the male protagonist hug each other and slowly fall asleep. Then I turn off my phone and sleep together. It's really comfortable [shy]. I will always support the author [blowing kiss] By the way, I looked around and most of them received five-star reviews. The remaining one or two were also four-stars. Why are the ratings so low?

Pure, too pure. Come on, two more chapters

It's a pretty good book. The plot is not boring but also entertaining. The heroine is also very cute. There are desserts. It's fun to read at the beginning. The bully got the punishment he deserved. I'm also a high school student and will keep reading. Wisdom Teeth [Like] There are also some memes and game animations to add to the fun. Author, you really make me cry to death. High school starts tomorrow and I can't watch your amazing masterpiece [fear][cry]

The introduction seems to have been changed, and I finally let go of my worries.

It's pretty good-looking, and the writing is good. The few shortcomings should be that the "family" setting feels a bit old-fashioned and traditional. But each character is well written, real, and likable, and the interaction between CPs is also well written. I hope the author can stick with it, I really like it

The writing is great, the entry point is perfect, the content is real, the world view is easy to accept, the author is really great, maybe it has been changed too much, but I really hope it will be published more, it is really great... Especially for people like me, I know the violent tendencies and character flaws very well, and I don't know how the author wrote it, but I hope it will get better and better. The feeling of wanting to have someone who cares, the feeling of wanting to rub someone into your arms... Maybe it is a pathological disease of character flaws, but, it seems that I really want to

The plot is indeed a good healing novel, but I feel that if so many couples are described in detail, it would be better to just flesh out the relationship between Jiuluo and the others (this is just my idea [sending my heart])

Personally, I think it looks very good, and I feel that the battle line will be very long, and it may even involve cultivating immortals? The author has dug too many pits, and the pits of those families should be filled in. There are hundreds of chapters to finish [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration], and why are they all Lolita? ! ! The author is a real lolicon! And several of the stories are quite tragic. I wonder if it's be...

Shouldn't it be 7.4 Points? I want to raise points.

I don't care how often I update it. I just hope this book can be finished successfully.

The emotional lines are sorted out well, and most of the foreshadowings are taken back, and the summary is nice [laughs]

I am so angry! The hero is late! Pain that is clearly avoidable

The writing is very close to reality, extra points, super nice ദ്ദിᵔ.˛.ᵔ₎✧

It's beautiful. I hope this book has more than a million words (≧∇≦)/

Very beautiful[]~(￣▽￣)~* Cheers) Ah, I really want to see the first uncut version~ (The current version is also very good, I'm just curious)

It's so good-looking, and it suits my taste very well. It doesn't seem to have that kind of powerlessness, nor does it seem that boring, and it's very interesting to watch. I hope the author can keep writing, and I look forward to it. 😊😊