Dragon Ball: Start Summoning Whis

Orange LV7, 36.25 Points/50 points Start+Follow-up 150%: 4+4 Writing + Creativity 125%: 4+4 Plug-in + setting 50%: 3+3 Rhythm + Main Line 75%: 4+3 Details + Logic 100%: 3+3 Additional deductions: Feelings: Very interesting Dragon Ball novel recently Score calculation: 1.5×8+1.25×8+0.75×19=36.25 Points Difficulty score: 65 (65) Since the clipboard is blocked, the number of typing by hand is reduced. ─────────────────── Feeling more and more watery

Nice setting. The system has been written more completely, and the division of combat power has also been improved. The protagonist is also set up with a cool plot. There's been a little loophole recently in the Alternate God of Destruction Arena. Jiren and others have directly practiced for thousands of years. It's definitely much better than the original. In this case, should we hold a conference of strength later? How will Wukong and the others fight? Use Broly to attack?

It's acceptable, it looks pretty good. Then I want to ask, is there a female protagonist? Nothing else. Bulma and No. 18 Are really good. I want to see if I can accept the protagonist. Even if I don't accept two, I can accept one. I can also accept a single female protagonist.

The author should be a senior Dragon Ball fan, and the setting is very consistent with the original work. It is much better than most fan fiction on the market. Currently, many Dragon Ball fan fiction has basically been written after watching two episodes. The setting is a mess. Although the writing is average, there are not many poisonous points as you continue reading, and you can follow [eating melon]

The 6-year-old Saiyan Gran is a modern time traveler parallel to the world of Dragon Ball Super. He has a system reward space that is not available in the Dragon Ball world. He can quickly increase his combat effectiveness by doing push-ups and increasing his body's gravity by 100 times or more. He has been taking steps towards the strongest king in the universe! The content is exciting and interesting, and it is one of the Dragon Ball Super fan novels that is still being serialized!

It's pretty good. Is there a female protagonist? Otherwise, it feels like all you are watching is cultivation. Nothing else to see.

What can I say about this book? It is a high-quality book and has its own setting. It is just a rough description of combat power, which is also a sign. From Beijing, it actually makes no sense to get to that kind of unit. Chao does not originally emphasize combat power, but emphasizes the pursuit of true self and the sublimation of realm. In fact, the essence is to pursue different quality. Read the latest chapter, the protagonist is 9 years old At this age, there is no need to have anything to do with Xiangpa. The protagonist's pursuit of Super Four allows Xin to take him to the Great Demon Realm to experience and polish. Find that old Namekian to help you sublimate your bloodline. After all, it was an old bird who opened a new map for you, the author, in the Great Demon Realm. It can also enrich the plot of the blank timeline at the stage when Goku grows up. And regarding the formation of parallel universes, in fact, the protagonist cannot form parallel universes. The universe the protagonist goes to is the main universe. After all, the protagonist has traveled through it, and neither the great priest nor the king has stopped or discovered it. This means that the protagonist's entry into the Dragon Ball world is reasonable and legal, and his identity is normal. After all, the Dragon Ball world is not a game world or a program. It is an author's story world. Parallel worlds can only form new branches when the later world is adapted from the previous world. So there is no need to have Trunks, there are too many.

It can be said that it is very detailed. It is very different from the ones I have seen before that only distinguish the combat power points. The realms here are very clear, and there are many different realms (dimensions, mental states, martial arts, physical instincts, and combat power levels). These are very clear. As expected of you, Xiaobai, it's even better looking than this one (Dragon Ball: The Beginning Shocked the Universe) [Like]

It looks good, but I have a very curious question. Does the protagonist have a partner?

It's quite fun. It's not like the usual Dragon Ball fandom that constantly improves combat power or acquires countless daughters or drags on. If you insist on completing 10 stars, there will be no problem

Divine book! It is truly a sacred book! The third young master of the Tang family was about to cry when he saw it, and Tiancan Tudou was amazed when he saw it! This is the fourth son of the Tang family. The rebirth of a great masterpiece, the leader of the literary world in the 21st century! "Holy Ruins"? Lost in front of it What a literary talent! "Dou Po"? It lacks some connotation! "Execute "Immortal"? In front of it, my feelings fade away! "Shading the Sky"? Fell in front of it Three points of imagination! "Buddha"? Half of the layout is missing! This is an online article A once-in-a-century classic! The greatest literary giant of the 21st century On! From Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Chengen, Cao Xueqin, to Kong Mo's old village, Poet Immortal, Poet Sage, Sansu Jiaxuan; since Qin Emperor Han Wu, Tang Zong Song Zu, Cheng Ji Sihan, to Gautama Buddha, Plato, Copernicus, Aristotle -Who wouldn't be in awe after reading this?! This book by the author is really the work of heaven and man! His literary talent is outstanding However, the rhetoric is exquisite, and the The style of the Wei and Jin Dynasties, the charm of the Tang and Song Dynasties, is profound! I will see this in my lifetime. Books are truly a blessing for three lifetimes! However, after reading this book, a feeling of sadness suddenly emerged: Such a masterpiece, if the day What's the point of my life if we never meet again? What's the point of my life?! Fortunately! I made a prompt decision and put it on the bookshelf! Only then can my restless heart find peace for a moment. Ning. However! If these masterpieces were covered in dust and the world could not see them, wouldn't it be considered violent? What a waste of natural resources and wasted effort of the author?! After a lot of fighting between heaven and man, I finally made up my mind: to sacrifice myself and fulfill the greater good. Me! This book review is dedicated to the world for everyone to appreciate! This book must be reviewed again and again. Nine days in the sky, let the whole world know! Traveling across the rivers and lakes, rivers and seas serve as evidence: Is this book enjoyable? --No Enough! Standing on the top of the fairy mountain, Qionglou Yuyu echoes: Is the update fast enough? Not enough! Not enough! Far from enough! Not enough chapters! Not enough speed! Not enough content! Not enough at all! [Come on] [Come on] [Come on] [Come on] [Come on] Walking between heaven and earth, the scorching sun and bright moon are witnesses: Is this book refreshing enough? --No Enough!

I wasn't interested in the title at first, but then I read it because I didn't have any books to read. It's really good. First of all, the combat power system is more systematic, such as personality, combat power realm, and the realm of physical instincts. Coupled with the filling of rules, it is truly a top-notch work among Dragon Ball fanfics.

The protagonist cannot fuse his soul due to time travel, and becomes two. Because the time and space rift is not in the same place, one learns divine power and the other learns Saiyan transformation. Later, a solution is found and the two souls fuse. Will this also count as a golden finger and become a fusion person with super talent?

@ Nowadays, those who watch Dragon Ball are all emotional Dragon Ball fans. Don't have too many private designs.

Holy book! The third young master of the Tang family shed tears when he saw it, and Tiancan Tudou sighed when he saw it... This must be one of the four famous paintings, and it is definitely the number one sacred book in the 21st century. Shengxu almost lacks literary talent in front of it! Doubo almost has no connotation in front of it! Zhu Xian almost felt emotional in front of it! Zhe Tian can almost imagine it in front of it! Buddha almost made a plan in front of it! A once-in-a-century classic of online novels! The greatest literary work of the 21st century! Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naiyan, Wu Cheng'en, Cao Xueqin, Kong Mo, Lao Zhuang, Li Du, Su Xin, Qin Emperor, Han Wu, Tang Zong, Song Ancestor, Genghis Khan, Sakyamuni, Plato, Copernia, Aristotle, all said it was good after reading it!

It's very interesting. It's one of the few dragon fan fictions. The first ten chapters may make people a little uncomfortable. In addition, I saw that some people scolded the part where Vegeta was let go. People who don't like these two points may quit it. The protagonist's talent is very strong, but if you think of the protagonist as Sun Wukong, it would make sense. It is a relatively good Dragon Ball fan novel. After all, Dragon Ball's combat power will not collapse. It depends on how the author will write it later, and whether he will add some plots from the game into it.

But people's physiques cannot be treated in the same way. When I was in junior high school, I was hit by a nuclear bomb and was knocked unconscious for two days before I woke up. Afterwards, I went to the cafeteria and ate 50 kilograms of rice and 30 kilograms of beef. Then I beat more than 50 classmates with my bare hands and went out to shovel a tiger. The physique of an athletic student is by no means unworthy of its reputation.

There are too few Dragon Ball fans, no matter what, it's 5 points. The writing has nothing to do with the traditional Dragon Ball plot. The protagonist started too high, so he directly played with the God of Destruction Angel and the others. The updates are a bit slow. I don't know how it can be written. Come on.

It's good. I like it. I don't like system writing. This is the best. I don't understand. The Saiyan bloodline is the biggest golden finger. What's more, there are Dragon Balls. Why do you need such a system? So I think the author's writing is quite good. He also has a comprehensive understanding of Dragon Ball. It's good to read. I love reading it! !

Very good plot, not much description of love, few likes. Most of them are descriptions of fighting and growth. This is also the reason why there are fewer likes than others, because many people still like to read the kind of books with more exciting articles and sweet heroines. I think the evaluation of this book should be more than that, and it should be much higher. This is the development of the plot in Dragon Ball fanfiction. The protagonist slowly becomes stronger, which is very interesting.

Author, can the next Dragon Ball novel be illustrated? Please satisfy a novice reader like me who has only watched Dragon Ball for a long time! I have almost forgotten what Gohan looks like, let alone all kings and angels [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

Great, I finally found a good Dragon Ball novel [crying]

Okay, Very good. It's an enjoyable article. I felt quite comfortable reading it. I'll talk about the rest after it's finished.

The writing is quite good, and it is also very organized and well-founded. It is not a bad article and is worth reading. However, the progress is a bit slow. There are no Z warrior scenes at the moment, and the author is lazy again!

I have read a lot of Dragon Ball stories, and the writing is much better than too many Dragon Ball stories. Keep up the good work.

So far, I feel comfortable reading it. It's a pretty good Dragon Ball novel.

It's a very interesting Dragon Ball fanfic. It ranks among the top five (if it's not bad) among all the Dragon Ball fanfics I've read. Including the Dragon Ball fanfics from the starting point, the top five is definitely not an exaggeration. If you like Dragon Ball fanfics, don't miss it.

Well, I see that the current fanfic is okay. Although the combat power has increased a bit quickly, it is destroying the divine world, not the earth. It's understandable that he grows up faster.

The overall story is very good, but I still hope that Vegeta and Bulma will be together. I sympathize with and agree with the protagonist's experience. I just think that Vegeta has a more charming personality and is not a bad person in the future, so I hope that the protagonist can let go of his hatred towards Vegeta.

Set your heart to the warmth and shine, express your ideas and hide your clever charm. Quick hands cultivate the clouds and condense wonderful thoughts, and the breeze carries the reputation all over the courtyard. Sincerity melts into fireworks, and friends from thousands of miles away share the same chapter. And when you go to the mountains and seas with your original intention, your character is the most outstanding.