Dragon Ball: I Summoned Whis from the Start

Orange LV7, 36.25 Points/50 points Start+Follow-up 150%: 4+4 Writing + Creativity 125%: 4+4 Plug-in + setting 50%: 3+3 Rhythm + Main Line 75%: 4+3 Details + Logic 100%: 3+3 Additional deductions: Feelings: Very interesting Dragon Ball novel recently Score calculation: 1.5×8+1.25×8+0.75×19=36.25 Points Difficulty score: 65 (65) Since the clipboard is blocked, the number of typing by hand is reduced. Feeling more and more watery

Nice setting. The system has been written more completely, and the division of combat power has also been improved. The protagonist is also set up with a cool plot. There's been a little loophole recently in the Alternate God of Destruction Arena. Jiren and others have directly practiced for thousands of years. It's definitely much better than the original. In this case, should we hold a conference of strength later? How will Wukong and the others fight? Use Broly to attack?

The author should be a senior Dragon Ball fan, and the setting is very consistent with the original work. It is much better than most fan fiction on the market. Currently, many Dragon Ball fan fiction has basically been written after watching two episodes. The setting is a mess. Although the writing is average, there are not many poisonous points as you continue reading, and you can follow [eating melon]

It's acceptable, it looks pretty good. Then I want to ask, is there a female protagonist? Nothing else. Bulma and No. 18 Are really good. I want to see if I can accept the protagonist. Even if I don't accept two, I can accept one. I can also accept a single female protagonist.

The 6-year-old Saiyan Gran is a modern time traveler parallel to the world of Dragon Ball Super. He has a system reward space that is not available in the Dragon Ball world. He can quickly increase his combat effectiveness by doing push-ups and increasing his body's gravity by 100 times or more. He has been taking steps towards the strongest king in the universe! The content is exciting and interesting, and it is one of the Dragon Ball Super fan novels that is still being serialized!

It's pretty good. Is there a female protagonist? Otherwise, it feels like all you are watching is cultivation. Nothing else to see.

What can I say about this book? It is a high-quality book and has its own setting. It is just a rough description of combat power, which is also a sign. From Beijing, it actually makes no sense to get to that kind of unit. Chao does not originally emphasize combat power, but emphasizes the pursuit of true self and the sublimation of realm. In fact, the essence is to pursue different quality. Read the latest chapter, the protagonist is 9 years old At this age, there is no need to have anything to do with Xiangpa. The protagonist's pursuit of Super Four allows Xin to take him to the Great Demon Realm to experience and polish. Find that old Namekian to help you sublimate your bloodline. After all, it was an old bird who opened a new map for you, the author, in the Great Demon Realm. It can also enrich the plot of the blank timeline at the stage when Goku grows up. And regarding the formation of parallel universes, in fact, the protagonist cannot form parallel universes. The universe the protagonist goes to is the main universe. After all, the protagonist has traveled through it, and neither the great priest nor the king has stopped or discovered it. This means that the protagonist's entry into the Dragon Ball world is reasonable and legal, and his identity is normal. After all, the Dragon Ball world is not a game world or a program. It is an author's story world. Parallel worlds can only form new branches when the later world is adapted from the previous world. So there is no need to have Trunks, there are too many.

It can be said that it is very detailed. It is very different from the ones I have seen before that only distinguish the combat power points. The realms here are very clear, and there are many different realms (dimensions, mental states, martial arts, physical instincts, and combat power levels). These are very clear. As expected of you, Xiaobai, it's even better looking than this one (Dragon Ball: The Beginning Shocked the Universe) [Like]

It looks good, but I have a very curious question. Does the protagonist have a partner?

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