Ice and Fire: the Prince and the Dragon

Compared to Tomato's other Game of Thrones fanfics that are like novices, this one even has some flavor of the original novel, at least in terms of characterization, it's quite impressive. If you keep at it, it will definitely become popular if the number of words increases.

Very good. This idea is really novel. There is not much room for expansion of West's story, but Valyria is almost a mysterious background. There is huge room for expansion, but it is also difficult to write. I think you can make money by writing online articles. Although few people have read this book, I personally feel that its quality is pretty good. At least I want to click on it and read it from time to time.

The writing is very good, especially about the glorious age of the Valyrian Empire. The supreme dragon kings were like emperors in the sky, looking down on the whole world. They were arrogant and unruly. What I want to see most is that the protagonist is selected by the gods of Valyria to become the future Valyrian emperor. The first emperor of the Valyrian Empire will lead this huge and glorious empire on the road to conquering the entire world and even the universe.

It's not bad. The writing is very good. I finally saw a protagonist who is not Teddy. Don't write off the heroine to death. I really like the emotional line. By the way, does the heroine really like the protagonist? If true, that's great. It's a strong alliance. Well, I can only say that this is not in line with my psychological expectations. I hope to see a happy ending, not just the protagonist's own happiness.

Very novel ideas, eye-catching, but updates are too slow Will Rhaegar get his own Valyrian steel sword? Like "Blackfire" and "Dark Sisters" in the original

Okay, now there are very few people who can write about the social framework, customs, etiquette, and basic necessities of a world, even if they have the original work to cover it all.

How should I put it? The background of the story written in this book is quite innovative. It is completely different from other fan fictions. Prince Rhaegar was reborn in the Valyrian period, and then looked at the continent of Westeros during this period. I feel it is quite innovative now, but the writing is not very smooth. I always feel that the article is not fluent and feels like it is scratching the surface. Reading this novel requires the brain to re-convert the language organization of this novel, but the story outline of the novel is quite good.

Author, have you ever thought about figuring out the names of Valyria's forty dragon kings?

Looks good, I hope I don't need a eunuch anymore

Come on, keep at it

Looks good but too short

There are no stars yet, rewrite the times

What is the name of the protagonist's dragon?

Very good and worth reading

The only question is, why doesn't the protagonist have a dragon? Even though he's powerful enough, this series feels a bit boring without a dragon.

When will the protagonist get the dragon?

Strong skills, really great

Good-looking, powerful story, and excellent worldview

Not bad, very pretty

This is really well written

Very interesting, but the author is a bit short

What will be the follow-up to this book? Will the current heroine and the protagonist go back a thousand years in the future? Which point in time does the protagonist return to, and can the endings of Lyanna and Ilia be changed? Now I feel that the plot direction is a bit cruel and depressing. Worried about the abuse that will follow.

Very beautiful, super exciting It's really beautiful. Please give the author more updates. At the same time, some parts need to be corrected The Valyrian Freehold is the capital of the Valyrian Empire that spans nearly the entire world. And the city of Valyria, This world is like the world of A Song of Ice and Fire. Her Majesty the Supreme Queen's world is the greatest, the greatest, the most majestic, the great Valyrian capital. It is the Valyrian Free Fortress, the Free Fortress, the capital of all nations, the supreme capital, the supreme imperial capital, the capital of no gods. In addition, Describe the city of Valyria, the capital of the Valyrian Free Fortress and the Free Fortress, as the capital of the Valyrian Empire, as being larger and more grand, like these, Giant towers thousands of meters high and huge tower-shaped palaces. Between the endless stretches of huge mountains, there are countless palaces and towers on the top of the mountains. There are also temples dedicated to the gods.

Yes, the author is an old foodie

Very well written and very beautiful

A very good read of Game of Thrones By the way, when will the protagonist be given a dragon?

It looks good, but don't write it like The Riddler

Come on author, it's very beautiful

Not bad, you can take a look

Will you continue to write stories about times thousands of years ago?