Zenyuan Shisui Is Also Rewriting Be Today

It looks good. I haven't seen any surprises so far. What can I say? It's that warm and cozy feeling. The overall main tone is also great [send heart][send heart][send heart] It can be seen that Da Da devoted all his writing power to the character, making him as versatile as possible and like a living person. Here I saw a Shisui who cared about everyone and had a heart of love, a Shisui who would lend a helping hand to strangers, a Shisui who would step forward without hesitation when his friends were in danger, and a Shisui who grew up under the care of his parents. It's really great. The description of Shisui is also in line with my wishes. I just feel that there are some foreshadowings that I can't understand. I hope that I can describe this foreshadowing in the following text. It's best to be consistent and not stumbling. That's good. The second thing is, don't stop updating. I finally found an article with a description that I recommend that fits my mood, 👌? (If you stop updating, I promise to stare at you all the time👁[I am so shameless]) Finally—— My love for you will never change [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

Good looking! What a heart-warming article! I especially like the Zenyuan family in capital letters! It's really heartwarming [crying][crying][crying] Most of the articles on Tomato that I have seen so far are about Long Aotian, harem, otome, system, and the most hateful black characters, Latai, etc. The large articles on Tomato are really a breath of fresh air [crying][crying][crying] I haven't seen such heartwarming articles in a long time! You are the light! You are fire! You are the heat that burns my heart! Big! You are like the Virgin Mary, allowing me to see the truth, goodness and beauty in this world! Big! I respect you, love you, sing your praises, and praise you! You are the Mona Lisa in my heart! (Toast) Can you please advise that you should never have CP! Never have cp! Real! The pacing of your article is really, really good! There is really no need to have CP, family and friendship bonds are the best! Women, big and small, are writing this in blood, begging you not to have CP [crying][crying][crying] Finally, the little girl here praises the big brain and literary talent! Hope you will continue to work hard! The little girl will definitely support the big one!

In fact, there are a lot of flaws. I personally feel that I wrote whatever I thought of. Although it follows the timeline and has the kind of character foreshadowing to lead them out, it still feels a bit stiff. The subject matter is still very interesting. Please give your best to the author.

The plot logic is very online and there are no brainless cheats. Every step of Shisui's actions is foreshadowed. He uses chakra to nourish his mother and uses the destiny system cautiously (and has to bear the price of instant death). The process of rewriting destiny is both reasonable and suspenseful.

The fusion of cross-world views is so natural! Combining Naruto's ninjutsu, Sharingan, and spell-returning curses, sky and curses, Shisui uses Susanoo to force the setting of the special curses without violating the rules and is super flammable. It's quite exciting to watch.

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The bully leader is dead. The protagonist was wrongly accused by his younger brother's family and decides to prove his innocence.

Shisui is such a righteous child🥺 and he feels at ease without a knife. I like it very much❤️My favorite palindrome!

I like it so much! ! There are very few articles with Shisui as the protagonist. I suddenly found this article and strongly recommended it [Like] [Like] [Like] [Love] [Love] [Love]

It's okay, but some places are too deliberate.

As a derivative work, it is really thoughtful. There are no OOC original characters, and a new story is written on this basis. Whether it is a sentimental party or a reader who just likes the plot, it should be able to read it.

Nice characterization! After rebirth, Shisui lost the heaviness of his previous life and cherished his family more, and his occasional tenderness was particularly poignant; Shire's setting of "not a magician but crushing cursed spirits" was very touching, and the interaction between father and son was also very interesting.

I like this article very much. It gives me a very warm feeling. Our Shisui brother is really handsome!

Wow, nice looking! (Shameless author sent a positive review)

This article is quite good. I saw 56, and at first I thought it was an ordinary cool article about killing monsters and upgrading. It was only when I saw that the main character was Shisui that I clicked in to take a look. Unexpectedly, it turned out to be the kind that is relatively warm and cozy. It can be regarded as a daily battle. I would like to open it at 55. The description of Shisui's character is quite good. I hope the author can update it to the end, and don't be like a certain news I watched before, where I saw the wonderful part and then disappeared. Please

Hmm~ Super nice book [blowing kiss][smirking]

It's super good-looking, a rare Shisui protagonist, and the writing is very smooth.

Shisui lives a different life in the world of magic, but his good heart runs through it all.

Suddenly tied, above, Shisui has a happy family, and Tsumeki will also live together. I'm really looking forward to the next plot.

It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author😘😘

It's not bad, but it doesn't feel the same as the original Shisui. The plot of Shisui's family at the beginning is very comfortable. The plot from the senior high school chapter becomes more and more boring, but it is worth looking forward to the following chapters.

It's a pity. Actually, I could have written the outline at the end (I've seen many authors do this, and the look and feel will be much better than now)

Suits my taste

It's nice to watch and the plot is super comfortable

It looks good so far

Although there are some changes, it is really good

Very nice to look at. . . I don't know how to describe it.

The subject matter is quite novel, but the number of chapters is very small. I hope to write a method to restore the Sharingan as soon as possible.

Super pretty! Ahhh, Shisui is so handsome!

The writing and characters are all very good. I really like the story with Shisui as the protagonist. I give it good reviews.