Zenin Shisui Is Still Rewriting the Bad End Today

It looks good. I haven't seen any surprises so far. What can I say? It's that warm and cozy feeling. The overall main tone is also great [send heart][send heart][send heart] It can be seen that Da Da devoted all his writing power to the character, making him as versatile as possible and like a living person. Here I saw a Shisui who cared about everyone and had a heart of love, a Shisui who would lend a helping hand to strangers, a Shisui who would step forward without hesitation when his friends were in danger, and a Shisui who grew up under the care of his parents. It's really great. The description of Shisui is also in line with my wishes. I just feel that there are some foreshadowings that I can't understand. I hope that I can describe this foreshadowing in the following text. It's best to be consistent and not stumbling. That's good. The second thing is, don't stop updating. I finally found an article with a description that I recommend that fits my mood, 👌? (If you stop updating, I promise to stare at you all the time👁[I am so shameless]) Finally—— My love for you will never change [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

Good looking! What a heart-warming article! I especially like the Zenyuan family in capital letters! It's really heartwarming [crying][crying][crying] Most of the articles on Tomato that I have seen so far are about Long Aotian, harem, otome, system, and the most hateful black characters, Latai, etc. The large articles on Tomato are really a breath of fresh air [crying][crying][crying] I haven't seen such heartwarming articles in a long time! You are the light! You are fire! You are the heat that burns my heart! Big! You are like the Virgin Mary, allowing me to see the truth, goodness and beauty in this world! Big! I respect you, love you, sing your praises, and praise you! You are the Mona Lisa in my heart! (Toast) Can you please advise that you should never have CP! Never have cp! Real! The pacing of your article is really, really good! There is really no need to have CP, family and friendship bonds are the best! Women, big and small, are writing this in blood, begging you not to have CP [crying][crying][crying] Finally, the little girl here praises the big brain and literary talent! Hope you will continue to work hard! The little girl will definitely support the big one!

In fact, there are a lot of flaws. I personally feel that I wrote whatever I thought of. Although it follows the timeline and has the kind of character foreshadowing to lead them out, it still feels a bit stiff. The subject matter is still very interesting. Please give your best to the author.

The plot logic is very online and there are no brainless cheats. Every step of Shisui's actions is foreshadowed. He uses chakra to nourish his mother and uses the destiny system cautiously (and has to bear the price of instant death). The process of rewriting destiny is both reasonable and suspenseful.

The fusion of cross-world views is so natural! Combining Naruto's ninjutsu, Sharingan, and spell-returning curses, sky and curses, Shisui uses Susanoo to force the setting of the special curses without violating the rules and is super flammable. It's quite exciting to watch.

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Shisui is such a righteous child🥺 and he feels at ease without a knife. I like it very much❤️My favorite palindrome!

The bully leader is dead. The protagonist was wrongly accused by his younger brother's family and decides to prove his innocence.

I like it so much! ! There are very few articles with Shisui as the protagonist. I suddenly found this article and strongly recommended it [Like] [Like] [Like] [Love] [Love] [Love]

Wow, nice looking! (Shameless author sent a positive review)