People Are Here************

It's not bad, but the author thinks it's troublesome to keep changing the protagonist's name when entering the dream world, then you can just use the protagonist's real name, so you don't have to change it back and forth.

The subject matter is novel [Like] I haven't found any poisonous points so far. The writing is good.

Fast pace, yes!

Come on, come on, come on

The dream world can be simpler

Wow, it's so beautifully written, Yosi

Not bad. It's just that some plots can be written shorter or covered in one stroke (if it's too long, you won't feel interested, and you may skip it directly, and then find that it's gone [laughing])