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Tian Nai is really good-looking and well-written. I originally liked Wood as the male protagonist or the female protagonist who likes Quidditch. When I saw the introduction, I was really excited, excited, and excited! ! ! ! The description of the heroine's emotions is super delicate. From always thinking that she would always go on her own to feeling the power of her friends, don't be too happy. When I saw the heroine going to Snape's office alone, I found a group of little badgers following behind, not the heroine alone to please Justice! She was very passionate during the competition and I really liked the character of the heroine. But now that I have read more than 20 chapters, the male protagonist has turned into Drisek. [Shy] Oh my, my Chinese is not very good and I can't describe how beautiful the text is [Shy] Anyway, it is very beautiful. The rest is a bit reluctant to read [Shy] [Shy] Is it true that the male protagonist cannot become Dricek? [Exploration]

Very well written! Although I don't know why there are so few people, the writing style of this article is really smooth and the growth line is very natural, unlike some articles that are lyrically rigid and abrupt. Moreover, the heroine is so handsome and she is my favorite type. The emotional line that is now emerging is also eye-catching. The hazy ambiguity is so delicious! ! I rarely see Wood's articles. Generally speaking, everyone thinks that although he is handsome, he is insulated from love. But this article is about a rare love story that is not OOC and is really delicious... It's so delicious. (So teacher, please try harder, it's too early and you're so lonely)

Author, I like your novels and your portrayal of the characters. I especially like the junior high school you wrote. It brought me countless inspirations. When I first saw that the catalog was for Hufflepuff, I was very happy (≧∇≦) Because I have read a lot of fanfics, but few have written about Hufflepuff, but when I saw the beginning, I had already recorded it, talking about the heroine guarding the door alone, and her heroic deeds. Especially when I saw two or three pictures, I found that it was not in any one period, not the same period as Harry Potter, nor Snape and the others. The heroine was in the same period between the two of them as they struggled and grew up with Gran. In such a period, I was very impressed. Moreover, the words in this novel gave me a lot of inspiration, because when I read Harry Potter before, I also had very big prejudices about treatment, like Slytherin, Hufflepuff must be manual and so on, he is just a loser, a fool and ignorant waste, and so on. Such words also made me fall into a trap. This is a misunderstanding. When I read the article and the Miss Slytherin and the Miss Hufflepuff were talking about this matter, I realized that I had really fallen into this misunderstanding. Just like there are infatuated and kind-hearted people in Slytherin, there is no shortage of cruel and cruel people in Hufflepuff, but such things have been infinitely weakened to zero. What I like very much is our heroine, her bravery, her miracle of being alone, and her sense of not giving in. She walks alone, thinking that there is no one behind her. When she looks back, she feels that she has her own teammates, which strengthens my determination to continue reading. I I thought there was no one behind me, but it turned out that you all gave the heroine a great confidence behind me, not to mention Hufflepuff's loyalty. It made me understand the word loyalty again. He is loyal to Hufflepuff and also moves towards a bright future with them. This is their promise. This one fascinated me so much that I couldn't finish reading it until the end. Author, I like your idea, and your understanding that is different from others adds a rich touch to your novel. So the author should persevere and work hard to update. The author loves you, loves you, loves you and works hard to update (๑˙❥˙๑)

What can I say, it's very cute! Most of the fanfics I have read before are dominated by male and female protagonists, and other characters seem to serve the protagonist. But this one is very different, more like a group portrait. Each image is very three-dimensional, such as Farley and Blanche, both are cute. The atmosphere in Hufflepuff is really warm! The green emotion of a teenager is like a green apple, with the feeling of sugary honey, a bit sour but mostly sweet and pure. Really enjoyed this book! Author, please let me be your editor. This book is so cute! (Sorry, I'm short of words. I like to use cute when describing things.) Be sure to read it! ! !

Different from many fanfics, in this article I saw a vivid spirit, a group, the glory of our Badgers, and the players who showed their talents on the court. The descriptions on the field were very passionate and real, which gave me a feeling of shock. I did not follow the plot of the original work, but I saw the new life of Badgers. This article is also very natural. There is no rigid transition in each chapter, but it is very daily. The big words give me a kind of bud born in spring, which grows with its kind. "The wild fire cannot burn it out, but the spring breeze blows and regenerates." The heroine gave me such a spirit, not fragile, free. I think her best reliance is her inner self. After falling, she stood up again and looked at me with her stubborn eyes. The heroine is a very powerful person, and the author is not like other fan fiction heroines. Cora is a strong-hearted but also scared person. As written in the article, when the troll comes, the scene is chaotic and full of screaming. Cora is also scared but she is also a conscientious prefect. She is covering her emotions. All in all, boss, I will always follow you

The writing is very, very good! I've read a lot of HP articles and this is the first time I see a heroine like this! The description of Quidditch subverted my imagination! Ced's growth is described delicately and naturally, Cora's personality is also very distinct, giving me the illusion of being a Gryffindor, and Blanche's character is also very full. Cora and Wood's emotional line, especially the hazy emotions of Wood who have a crush on each other but are not aware of it, are particularly well described. To be honest, at first I thought the two would be rivals or old enemies, but the two of them working together to deal with Flint is really passionate! ! Too bad it's a new book. . But well written! The author would like to read it more!

I loved this article, especially the description of Quidditch! I think this is actually a test of one's skills. A paragraph of text can show the intense atmosphere of the scene! Each college is trying their best to win glory for their own college. I am a person who particularly hates sports, but I also like the pride of honor brought by winning. In many cases, the impact of the picture will be far greater than the text, and the description of the game here makes me have a desire to rush to the field! The description is very powerful, with a far greater impact than the picture, and is full of beautiful longing and yearning! This article is also very good at describing daily life. Every excellent result in a competition is the result of thousands of practices. After the competition, everyone returns to daily life, laughing and joking, and giving each other gifts on important days. Cora seemed a little lonely at first, always thinking of surviving everything alone. Well, after each game, everyone got closer to each other, and the relationship between Wood and Cora was more than just rivals and classmates. From shopping together in Hogsmeade to asking what he liked at Christmas and wanting to know him, this is a very ambiguous boundary. They are close to friends, but they seem to be more than that. Whether it's a thunderbird brooch or a warm, singing scarf, it's a warm and happy moment that makes people forget for a moment that they will have to face the Dark Lord in the future. And the female prefect of Slytherin (please allow me to forget her name for a moment) has changed since she apologized to Kara and admitted that she was biased. At this time, Hogwarts's deep-rooted hostility and prejudice against other houses has changed. , Cora and her conversation in the shack sharply pointed out the problem between the colleges. Everyone in the college has a deep prejudice against each other, putting inherent shackles on them, and through good luck and accident, the family obliterated their efforts. Although the Slytherin prefect cannot make a choice when she is engaged to someone else, it is precisely because her fiancé is not a very decisive person. This outstanding and capable girl will surely be able to win her own glory one day. I really hope that her name can be completely remembered and addressed by everyone. In short, what is presented in this article is not just a superficial story, but also contains some realities and problems that existed at the time. For example, some people work hard, but are denied by others with a light word of good luck. This exists whether in the book or in reality. I think the feelings are written very delicately. It's a feeling that is secretly explored before it is spoken (?). The rhythm is not fast, and it feels like a long and steady flow. The above are all my personal opinions. They are purely subjective thoughts. The author has not finished it yet, but it can be said to be a very excellent novel.

It's really refreshing. The badgers are all very nice and united. Cora is also super cool. She has a mother-like feeling, and sometimes she's a little cute. The interaction with Wood is also very pure and fun. I hope the ambiguity period will be longer. After all, they are still very young (only fifteen or sixteen years old) and it is hard to imagine what it would be like for two people to fall in love. In the end, the ambiguity period is the most comfortable and the most enjoyable! ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

Nice. . . Ah, in the end, I had to endure the punishment in frustration,,, I like the way the protagonist looks confident and flamboyant on the court [crying][crying][crying][crying] I really appreciate your writing. I really like your writing. The heroine is so charming. She is locked with Wood. I like this kind of confrontation but the love is just beginning. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Love]

Really super pretty. This is my favorite book so far, bar none. Every character has flesh and blood, and the heroine's image is very three-dimensional. She exudes unique charm both on the Quidditch field and in everyday life. She shows amazing abilities on the field; off the field, she takes the initiative to take responsibility and also has a vulnerable side that is not revealed. I also felt the unity of Hufflepuff, the tacit cooperation on the field, and going to Snape's office together to discuss explanations... I especially like this kind of unity. I also like the emotional line very much. The unpredictable atmosphere between the two people is well expressed. Every time I see the relationship between two people getting closer, the corners of my mouth fly to the sky [laughing]

The heroine Cora is the main character, and it has nothing to do with the original work. If you like Quidditch, you must read this book↖(^ω^)↗The descriptions of Quidditch are very passionate and can easily arouse emotions! The author's writing is superb!

I really recognize Cora's character and outlook. I feel that she is similar to me in some aspects. Her innocence and mine stem from a change in routine. I hope to change the intellectual gap between boys and girls in the eyes of teachers, and I also want to change the absolute power that others say. Suppress, I want to change the minds of many people, but these are too naive, so I can only work hard slowly, but my enthusiasm will be extinguished, but it will be ignited. After reading your novel, I feel that my inner thoughts are burning again. Thank you very much for your novel [Blowing Kiss]

The description is particularly delicate and touches the depths of the soul. As a person who likes to observe human beings and think about the reasons for their behavior, I have to say that the author has a profound observation of human beings and society. The author has conducted a profound, thought-provoking and introspective analysis of each character, whether he is a villain or a decent character, a marginal character or a protagonist. The description is even a little over-detailed, but that's the essence of the novel. The author's writing style seems to be a pile of words (he especially likes metaphors, and almost every sentence must be used without repetition. There is also a combination of three adjectives). In fact, it is a careful study of psychology, human nature, and society. Whether it is Cape, Wood, Ced, the Weasley brothers, Marcus, Prefect Farley, etc., They are all struggling and growing in adversity, and they will eventually achieve glory by not being afraid of difficulties and constant reflection. It's really great. Your words not only bring me the plot of the novel, the beautiful qualities of the protagonist such as warmth or tenacity, but also teach me to reflect and change, create and persevere. (Reading big books makes my understanding of human beings clearer, and I can feel that my writing skills are gradually improving.) You must continue to work hard and write more! ! ! ! You are a treasure author. I am so touched. How could I be so lucky to meet you in Tomato? Maybe it's because I haven't read too many books. It's the first time I've seen such a beautiful and detailed writing style. I have never read such words in classics (if readers read my comments, please don't call me illiterate, thank you). I hope you won't just stick to the subject of HP. A genius keyboard should not only be used to create novels, but should be used like a sharp scalpel to analyze and heal the world.

It's great, and the character settings are also more biased towards the original version, but the main characters in the article are not described in detail in the book, so... It's more or less different from the settings in common fans, but! I love it so much, it's bigger and more generous! [Adoration]

It's really well written, and it really brings the heroine to life. I've read a lot of HP fanfics recently, and not all of them, but almost most of them involve being with a threesome. Although I don't dislike it, this one is perfect! It directly writes the heroine's sense of being alive and the five virtues' sense of being alive, as well as the love for the Quidditch game and the plot, as if they are living in the real world, and everyone has a branch line of their own life. The three little animals are also carrying out their own branch lines in the original play, and the heroine and Wood are also carrying out a branch line of their own. It's really hard to use the book! It's really well written! Forgive me for my lack of expression! It includes relationship management. I thought it would be difficult for this guy to woo the heroine, but I didn't expect that he handled it just right, even though we're not together yet hahaha

The author is not a native of Tomato at first glance () The writing style is too mature, the narrative rhythm and character control are also very accurate, the heroine has a very very charming personality, and the group portrait narration is also attractive!

What should I say? This is the first time I have read such a satisfying book. In my understanding, this is a double-strength book. It is also the first time I have read such a hp fanfic that has no sense of violation. Even if I don't read it carefully, I can tell that the author's writing style is really good. Good. I want to keep it and watch it, but I can't help but it's really cute, and like Wood, he likes to extend his hand silently and then take it back silently. It's really cute. Our heroine's baby is also really straight [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] I love this book so much. After so many years of reading, this is the first time I like it so much. This is completely written in my heart. I rarely follow serialized novels, but I really love this one.

Madam's character creation is super strong! [Laughs] Every character is fleshed out and three-dimensional. Cedric's growth arc is obvious, and the portrayal of Captain Wooden has reached a depth that the original work did not have. [Like] [Like] [Like] The best thing is our Cora! Cora is upright, responsible, gentle yet decisive. She is the reassurance of the little badgers. [Like] [Like] [Like] But she is not always a superhuman image. The vulnerability she occasionally reveals makes people feel heartbroken, and her daily troubles make people feel real. [Love] [Love] [Love] Mrs. Cora has not been molded into an unparalleled myth. Excellent players such as Hughes and Seider emerge happily in Mrs.'S writing. There will never be only one outstanding person in an era. We have already seen the stars shining quietly. [Exploration] When Mrs. Uses delicate brushwork to polish the characters and emotional context, readers can feel the texture and thickness of the story between the lines. [Learned] I sincerely hope that such masterpieces can be discovered and liked by more people. The author's wife is also a very good person. Every time she writes a long review to her, she responds seriously, and she is really moved to the point of crying. All in all, I hope every Harry Potter fan will not miss this masterpiece. [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Top Posts][Top Posts][Top Posts] My wife's story about the Slytherin stereotype really resonated with me! I have always been in poor health. Even before the physical examination, I felt that I was not good enough. But after reading it, I felt that I must break this view. The encouragement my wife gave me also made me happy. I've been happy for a long time ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧. The idea of this article is great, and it focuses very much on Quidditch! My wife also wrote about the game situation wonderfully! In fact, I even had a deeper understanding of Quidditch after reading my wife's article. Quidditch is not easy to write, and many authors dare not or cannot write it, but what my wife wrote is super good! I really want to praise my wife! [Top post][top post][top post]

It's a very novel subject matter. It's rare that it doesn't follow the original work. It's like she really exists in that world.

The character of Cora is very successful... And the relationship with Wood is super cute and delicious. A very interesting one. The literary talent is pretty good, but the content in the early part is a bit lengthy, and the same meaning will be said several times in different ways, so these are not suitable for listening to books. In comparison, I prefer the story in the middle and later stages, mainly because it is very sweet and the rhythm suits me personally.

That's great, okay! I have been following this book since the end of June 2025. As a veteran Harry Potter fan digger, I admit that I have a very picky appetite. I don't like to watch fantasy time travel, and I don't like the heroine and the Black and Malfoy pure-blood families. I really like to watch this kind of warm group portrait. This kind of passionate, this very realistic, this kind of youth of wizards is what I like very much! Moreover, this group portrait does not serve the male and female protagonists. It also has its own full-fledged image, including OC and original characters without OOC. The writing is really good! I just wish it could be faster. This little badger is going to starve to death!

The characters are very rich, and the stories between the characters are worth pondering. I personally think that Gemma Farley's character is very unique, and I also like Perla's character very much [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart] The main text is very rich and detailed in descriptions, and the extras are written in a letter format, which is very peculiar. I personally like the content about Cora going to the Richard Artillery Youth Training Camp the most (the other content is also very exciting, read it carefully, and it will be another kind of fun). In short, it is good-looking, recommended, and the teacher's writing is excellent [plus one on the bookshelf] [give me heartfelt thanks]

Cora is so handsome, a great heroine, and delicious. Although the emotional line with Wood is not particularly passionate, it is very gentle and delicious. Cora is simply the handsome badger and leader of Hufflepuff. I love the author and give her a lot of food. I need to rest more but don't forget to produce food [Sending Hearts]

It's a super beautiful, very detailed group portrait article, and the characters are also very three-dimensional. I suggest you play "Young And Beautiful" [Send Hearts] when reading it (don't comment if you don't like it, thank you!) Especially when watching Quidditch, it's super suitable!

The characters are well drawn! The relatively rare image of a Hufflepuff heroine is a Quidditch captain who is tough, kind and brave. Wood's image has also expanded, becoming more vivid and concrete, breaking stereotypes but appearing real. There are also some other original characters that are well and impressively portrayed. The description of the Quidditch game in the article is also very vivid and specific. If you like Quidditch, you can read it. The article also adds some views that the author himself wants to express, which is profound. "The stereotypes in people's hearts are like a big mountain." The author asked the protagonist to think about the stereotypes of the four major colleges of Hogwarts, which combined with the heroine's own image, deepened the theme of the work. Overall a very good work. ) As an aside, I always thought that the word "For Rent" on the cover of the work meant "rental advertisement", and I thought it might be due to the unique design of the cover (I think the cover has the texture of a newspaper). It wasn't until I just discovered that the author's name is Zhaozhu. . Sorry.

I think the author's writing style is very good. This book is different from those I have read in the past. This is the first time I have read a book about Hufflepuff. In Chapter 33, I think the author's understanding of Slytherin has refreshed my "stereotype" of this school. It is really beautiful. Next, I am going to nourish this book and make it fatter so that I can read it all in one go. Come on, author! [Shy]

This is so good-looking, so good-looking, the two strong men colliding and confronting each other are our favorite pure love couple! ! The character is completely unconventional and is also very three-dimensional and rich. You can see the smooth arm muscle lines under the school robe from the sister's words and deeds. . . Sister, I like you! !

The male protagonist, Oliver, is very warm and written with great care❤️. The plot is 98% original content🏆🏆. This is the first novel I've read in which the male protagonist is Oliver, and I understand the "non-Quidditch Dream Man Wood". The Oliver here is not just bound to Quidditch, he has his favorite colors, favorite foods, and gifts given to him🎁It is no longer the same "Quidditch related"

Very nice! ! I'm actually kind of in love with Korra! ! Even if there are difficulties and setbacks, and there will be times when she feels confused, Cora will grow through it and become more confident! ! Cora's unique temperament really struck a chord with me! ! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

Shout! ! I want to watch the daily flow of Yingxiang, the super cool moments of the heroine and the sweet love style. Why! ! But the writing is so good, I'm so tortured! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !