The Hehuan Sect Cultivates Immortality Through Love, Starting from the Mine Supervisor

Some readers feel that the protagonist's use of the Heart-Eating Gu Pill to control the clan leader is too much. I will try to explain the protagonist's motivations. I can understand the readers' thoughts very well. Controlling the sect leader is not only dangerous, but also insidious and despicable. It is the behavior of a villain. I struggled with it for a long time when I wrote it, but I still wrote it like this. The reason why the protagonist does this: 1. The protagonist has just returned to the sect and is about to alarm Elder Leng Wuya. The protagonist needs a backer so that Leng Wuya cannot touch the protagonist. Guan Shiting is only in the foundation building period and is not enough to protect the protagonist. The protagonist needs a more powerful backer, and the sect master is a suitable backer. Second, the protagonist is a weakling in the Qi refining stage and has top-level alchemy skills. If high-level monks know about it, they will probably use similar means to control the protagonist into a puppet and an alchemy slave day after day. There are many similar situations. For example, Leng Wuya planted a blood medicine for his direct disciple, preparing to refine Li Siyu into a Yuan Dan. Third, the world of cultivating immortals is like a dark forest. The protagonist does not know whether the suzerain is a good person. He controls the suzerain in order to control the initiative. He has no intention of harming the suzerain. The protagonist will not make the suzerain suffer a lot, but will benefit the suzerain a lot later. It is probably for these reasons that the protagonist attacks the innocent sect leader. Okay, I have finished explaining honestly. I beg you, the reader, to continue to accompany the protagonist all the way. I'm going to give you my heart. The third article will be explained in detail. The world of immortality is like a dark forest, full of dangers. Once the identity of the protagonist is known to the master, it is like a weak ant exposed in front of a strong man. We can only hope that this strong man is kind and will not harm the protagonist.,, If the protagonist wants absolute safety, he must take the initiative and take the initiative before his identity is known to the sect master. In short, the protagonist's motivations are all for his own safety. This is the survival rule of the immortal world.,,[Cry][cry][cry]

The plot is okay, the writing is smooth, and some minor flaws in the setting are acceptable. If you want to be perverted, just make it funny. If you add more to adjust the plot, it's not a big problem if it's over-the-top and exaggerated. Either it's not big enough, it's a realistic route, and it's necessary to reduce the explicit label settings. Too many labels means facial expressions, and the characters are not vivid enough. It is difficult to combine the two with the author's writing skills, so it is better to rewrite one.

It's great, I just like fairy tales

I like it very much, keep going

The plot is very exciting, good luck to the author! ! !

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's worth a look, come on

Watch well, study hard and make progress every day

The plot is okay and the logic is continuous.

I've read Chapter 50 and it's pretty good. I'd like to support you a little bit.

Super pretty! @Happy gate female cultivator 17

Okay, pretty good-looking

Very good book, good book

Okay, ok, ok, ok, ok, ok

Keep up the good work, come on.

Why don't you appreciate Su Yang's appearance? ? ? ?

Good things happen one after another, and the happiness behind is full!

The plot is compact, the male protagonist is emotional and good-looking

Anyone can step on the protagonist anyway, but the problem is that the protagonist never returns in revenge, and it makes me feel aggrieved just looking at it [smile]

Super beautiful, worth nine points

Not bad, worthy of praise

Not bad, you can take a look.

Good-looking, good-looking, still good-looking

Not bad, not bad, worth watching [Like][Like][Like]

Pretty good, just watched it haha

Very good, well written

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very good and worth reading

Favorite book

The exciting part of the story is tense