The Yandere Wants to Kidnap Me Home

I saw that the original protagonist of the latest chapter is a female. Which succubus really likes the original protagonist? After following the routine and found out that the original protagonist is a female, she found the male protagonist as a replacement. I personally have no feelings for succubi. It would be better for the two sisters to target the protagonist from the beginning [laughter]

To summarize, first of all, this book does not have a high level of yandere content. Instead of saying that all the characters are yandere, it is better to say that all the characters are clingy and jealous. Different from the traditional yandere novels about being imprisoned in Shura Field, yandere is just a setting in this book. Looking at the whole story, the story design is very interesting, and the main plot is very focused. It revolves around the relatively clichéd ending of defeating the devil, but it adopts a good narrative. Let's talk about the advantages first. The world view setting is novel, the author is very good at writing stories, and the multi-perspective narrative technique has a good effect. The protagonist's growth trajectory is clear, the character creation is relatively full, and the changes in the psychological journey are well portrayed. As for the shortcomings, the division of strength is relatively vague. You can feel that the protagonist is getting stronger, but in terms of fighting scenes, it always stays at the level of martial arts, and there is no real superhuman. This is closer to Western fantasy, but it does not explain the specific abilities of the Demon King, such as why the human sea tactic cannot be used, and why modern military fails (it rarely involves physical strength). But it's understandable. After all, the main plot is just to defeat the devil. It's impossible to complete a perfect story line based on this. The author has written it very well. I give it five stars.

It's pretty good to read, but there are some things that more people will say after reading it. One is the perspective. At least in my opinion, more people read Tomato in the third person. Basically every first-person book will have a lot of people talking about it. The other is the issue of soul penetration. Although I don't have any taboos, at present, soul penetration has become a poisonous point and will make a lot of people give up reading in the first chapter.

It's a good-looking novel. I feel like it's okay, but I don't know how to write it. I personally think that after the fight with Lu Boxiu, I should start to work on Shura Changla. I also hope that Hela can be rescued by the protagonist and give it a perfect ending [crying] [crying] Thank you very much. I hope you can read it😐

If you give me five stars, Ye Chen must be a woman! [Cry]

At least it's the best first-person narrative I've ever read, and the protagonist's personality changes are also better portrayed.

It has a very good rhythm, good psychological description, and the characters are very distinct. If you stick to it, it will become a hit. Come on author, affirmation from a ten-year-old bookworm [blowing kiss]

Is the succubus in the author's profile Su Ling'er? [Why] Why does she like Ye Chen? Shouldn't it be the male protagonist? Isn't it the same succubus? [Sinister smile]

Okay, very ok

Kids, run away, it's too poisonous

Yes, although it has some bad points, some aspects can cover up some of the shortcomings. The remaining bad points are not unacceptable.

The protagonist is different from the traditional one. The supporting character can also stir up the storm, which really made me fired up.

The description is not bad, but the plot needs to be polished to get a 9 points [Learned]

Who is the succubus in the author's introduction? I really like Su Nian'er, but as the author, you can follow your own pace. Don't worry about me. I'll give you a 5-star review to support you.

Except for the character of the protagonist, everything else is very good

The writing is very good, but not many people read it.

It's pretty good. I was a little bit uncomfortable with the first person version at first, but it's okay later [shy]

Generally speaking, it's pretty good and worth a look.

What a good book, I recommend reading it

The content is very interesting, and the writing style is very good for Tomato. I hope it will have a good ending. Also, the title of the novel is not very attractive. I read it several times before I thought about clicking in.

The subject matter is novel and I love to read it.

Password, it scared me to death, I thought there was also Nantong

Hehehe, I just like watching this🤣

Four points, the world view and background are quite attractive, but the character development of the protagonist is not very detailed. They say they are far away, but they are still close. It can be described with more causal events.

It feels like reading a diary

Six hundred and sixty-six, the author doesn't even act anymore. A good brother turns into a daughter-in-law, right?

The whole book is from a first-person perspective, and there are a lot of perspective changes.

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6.7 Points has its own reason.

Wondering if it will be a single female protagonist? Then the male protagonist is also a time traveler. Will his wife be Sister Yaoyao?