I Was Playing MC in Hongwu, and Milk Saved the Hero at the Beginning

To be honest, this novel is not satisfying enough. Some of the settings could be less followed and could be slightly changed to serve the purpose of the novel. I think it would be better. No, this novel seems a bit sluggish. I feel like every time I'm about to get better, I get stuck. It feels like I'm stepping into a door but being stuck by the threshold.

I know, no wonder some people say that there is a weird feeling, urgent, the plot is too urgent. The writing is not bad, but the plot is very rushed, and it feels very urgent. To put it simply, the previous small pleasant point has just reached the climax and the preparation for the next small pleasant point has already arrived. This is probably the feeling. If it is too rushed, it will be uncomfortable after a long time. There is a feeling of being stuck, and then I feel very anxious, so I can only continue reading slowly. You can feel it in the first dozen chapters, and if you write it like this, the plot world framework of 67 hundred chapters may be cut in half. You can add some daily plots appropriately, but this book still has great potential. I am optimistic about you [laughing evilly]

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It's very interesting. The author's ideas are very novel and make my eyes light up. I hope the author can work hard and he will definitely achieve results in the future.

In a word, bringing the MC system to the Ming Dynasty is the rhythm of invincible and refreshing writing. So there's only one problem with this book Cool article, but not cool enough

I have read more than 20 chapters so far, which is quite good. Fortunately, the presence of brushing machines in this book is not strong, otherwise I would run away as soon as the brushing machines appeared. In my personal opinion, the poisonous point of brushing machines in this type of article is no less than uncontrollable equivalent exchange. At present, it seems to be a little bit toxic, but it is still acceptable. ①The estrangement between the protagonist and Goudan's family was written too suddenly, without any plot foreshadowing. ② 10,000 Points unlock the water ring game machine. If you buy it, you can get 2,000 points each. From my personal understanding, this game machine has no playability at all, and 10,000 points is not cost-effective. It's understandable that the protagonist lacks fun, but there's no need for a tech tree and there are plenty of things that are more fun than this console. ③The character of the protagonist in more than thirty chapters feels a bit problematic in writing, and the follow-up is a bit uninteresting.

This is the first time I read an MC novel. This book is quite interesting. The reason for deducting points is that the plot moves too fast (holes are dug but not filled in), and the ending is too hasty (the last two chapters take away the content of two or three hundred chapters of others). The rest is not bad at all. That's right

Complete the main mission all the way (Shuangwen) I took the side quest but didn't do it (digging a hole but not filling it) At the end of the book, the author also gives an explanation (excusable) The overall novel is rather rushed, so I wouldn't recommend it if you want to read it delicately (and vice versa).

There is nothing poisonous at the moment

Very innovative, keep up the good work, keep up the good work

It's okay, not feeling aggrieved [cool]

This is the end

A legendary novel

It's really interesting. If you've watched too many dog-licking videos but don't want to see yourself becoming an emperor, you can try this book to see if it suits your taste.

It's okay, MC is okay, that's full marks.

It's so beautiful. I haven't seen this kind of bohemian pig's feet for a long time. The memes are so funny.

It's pretty good, but a little short. History is indeed difficult to write, but I have the feeling of being an MC, and I usually make some jokes, so overall it's relatively relaxed.