Reincarnation************

It looks okay. The cold-faced fairy eats the fireworks of the world. It's very contrasting. The main reason is that the male protagonist is a bit too stupid. Compared to the little apprentice, I actually admire Xu more (I've read Chapter 24). Why do I feel that the heroine stayed too much in the later stage [face covering] Here is a little opinion (it doesn't matter if you don't want to listen [grievance]) First of all, hurry up and write about the female protagonist's cultivation. Most people who read this novel should be fans of immortality. She lost her cultivation at the Nascent Soul stage and was bullied by Foundation Establishment and Golden Pill. Moreover, as a genius, she has other secrets hidden in her body. She cannot kill enemies beyond levels, cannot break through, and does not find her senior brother. This is the most poisonous thing. Secondly, the heroine should be smarter. After all, she is a time traveler, not a feudal prehistoric person. She has a cold face and a paralyzed face. She is lively and smart and has a bit of pretense. It is a bonus, but the fussing is a poisonous point. The character change of the male protagonist is also a bit sudden, as if he has been taken away from him. It feels like he suddenly changed from a young chef to a big man with thick and thin parts. It feels best to add an important event or "xx years later" in the middle of the change, or you can directly write that the male protagonist is reborn from the beginning, which is the simplest and most direct. Finally, after all, she is a genius heroine. She can also write some golden finger opportunities or a heaven-defying background. In short, she can make the heroine more legendary. The current story is a bit bland as a whole, and no one will really like bland novels. Thank you for reading. I look forward to your new novel.

It's okay, but if the cultivation level never recovers, it will be uncomfortable to watch, and the protagonist's character changes too quickly.

So is it a fairy or a martial arts? [Thinking] It's pretty good to watch, but the heroine is a bit OOC.

Very good, come on author.

Forbidden to be happy,

It's not enough to read at all. It's a very good book about changing marriages.

The author (*ΦωΦ*) cheers! Come on come on! Come on come on!

Although the heroine has a tragic life experience and has a bit of a knife, she is still pretty good-looking [please update]