Disturbing a Pool of Muddy Water

Basically, it belongs to the narrative type. This kind of writing is the least enjoyable and has the least flow. But I was inexplicably attracted to the author's writing style. The story is simple yet profound, especially the second volume! It is estimated that not many people can read the second volume seriously, but when they do, they can't help but sigh. Sun Jun's final choice was the best option for him. Just as he said to He Yuyu and He Yuzhu at the beginning, there is no right or wrong, only choice. If you choose, you will finish the journey even if you kneel down. Whether you eventually become an immortal, or whether your life ends with a lie, there is nothing wrong with choosing to end and dissipate between heaven and earth. There is a reason why the author insists on writing the second volume. It is not to prove or describe any definition, but to pour out the things in the author's mind in a different way. Readers can read it or not, and their own feelings after reading it... I believe that the author is restricted by 🍅 to write only a little bit, and it doesn't matter if the author only writes a little bit. That's it! It doesn't matter [thinking]

If you travel back in time to ancient times, you can write about martial arts, weirdness, or science fiction. Cultivation to Immortality is very difficult to write about, especially the way you write it, it's very tiring to watch. So be it, Yan Guo leaves traces, I wish you write better and better, come on

There are people who find fault with you, but you are quite grateful. Ren. I will register his residence first, and then run around a bit. This old face is no longer working well and will definitely come to visit. " (Thanks to user 21732413 for picking out the error.)

The reading experience is great. It has a sense of déjà vu like a biographical novel. Although it is a space travel novel, it is not dramatic at all. The logic is very strong. The plot unfolds neatly and neatly without being muddled. It makes people's eyes shine from time to time. Good book recommendation [Like]

The introduction is very well written. It is a wonderful short chronicle novel. The content of the main text feels a bit pity. It can be written as a sequel without affecting the independent score at all. Although the thread is buried in the front, if it is put together into a two-in-one, many readers will probably feel separated.

To be honest, it's quite interesting, although a bit bland. I'm just a little unhappy. I didn't write many chapters, so I can't even tell how many chapters I've read. As soon as I opened the catalog, I dismissed a lot of people. When I first saw this book, I immediately dismissed it after reading the catalog [shy] There was no book to read later, so I found this book, and after thinking about it, I decided to read it. Silly Zhu was beaten by the protagonist and hospitalized. When he woke up, Silly Zhu was reborn. However, when he woke up the next day, Silly Zhu seemed to have no memory of last night. He didn't remember that Yu Yu and the protagonist came to see him. I haven't seen what happens next. I just saw that the main character wanted to find the Tao Te Ching, and I commented on whether he wanted to become an immortal, but the author said he couldn't become an immortal😓

Just read the first volume. Full marks for Siheyuan. Full marks for the chronology. There are definitely some minor flaws but there are no discomforts. If I haven't read the second volume, I guess I am cultivating immortality. No money will be charged for comments.

The writing is quite good, the logic is reasonable, and the characters are vivid and full.

Wearing the skin of a courtyard, doing a play in which those who rebel against me will perish, I think it's okay

Keep it up

It looks okay from the front, but it depends on whether it bounces from the back.

Come on, come on, come on, come on. Are all the original works in the later stages?

I feel pretty good now. For me, it's pretty good if I can read them one by one without jumping.

It's not bad. I have my own ideas, and the writing is close to that era. It also has a sense of immersion and the writing is good.

Leave a comment for yourself, dear friends, we have reached the main text, why there are so few comments. I can't find anyone to communicate with. You won't force me to write another Siheyuan book, right?

Fast in and fast out, quickly get rid of Yi Juehu, and solve the source of all evil easily.

Okay, pretty ruthless, cool! ! ! !

Well written and interesting

Wonderful and awesome five stars

Good writing, keep up the good work

The end point of the novel is to cultivate immortality

Not bad, keep it up

Not bad, give it a five-star rating

Good, good, good

It's interesting, I can look into it

I really like looking good.

I didn't realize you were good-looking long ago

Not bad, you can take a look.

Really good novel

Okay, ok, ok, ok, ok, ok!