From the Dark Zone to Kivotos: the Land of Redemption

It's okay. The only shortcoming is that the emotional foreshadowing is insufficient, which makes some plots seem inexplicable and barely achieve emotional resonance. Come on author! I believe you can write better! ദ്ദി˶•̀֊•́)✧

It's cool to see that, to those realists, an academic city like Kivotos is stupid and arrogant. Shiloh may be redeemed in the end, but his words and actions will definitely give those arrogant Kivotos a slap in the face. And that flawless appearance will eventually be torn completely by reality, and it may also bring about earth-shaking changes to Kivotos... But all in all, this may as well be a good book. The author vividly portrays the changes in the characters' demeanor and the world view of the dark zone. If you are an emotional person like the teacher, I do not recommend you to read this book, because for the protagonist Shiloh, things like bonds and courage are not worth mentioning in the face of death and reality. Maybe the teacher would indulge those students, but Shiloh would not. He would use reality and his own experience to educate them hard. Let them understand that they are just living in a ridiculous disguise. When the mask is taken off, they will understand the cruelty of reality...

I have nothing to say. I think this writing is a masterpiece. Author, you must keep writing. I really like your style.

When I saw the author's introduction, I thought I had turned on Lagrangian [face covering]

A very good BA article, with excellent writing style and content. In addition, I hope to return to prison, otherwise who will help me with the title "Redemption" [crying]

Actually, it's not a knife at all. Hilo might really not be able to survive in Kivotos. His beliefs, his choices, he does not allow himself to live here, he feels that he is not worthy of this place

The overall article is good, but it is recommended that the emotional description be expressed more with the face and body, which will make it more immersive. For example: Lexie's pupils suddenly shrank when he looked at the soldiers rushing straight towards him.

The writing style is very good, and the subject matter is well controlled. You can even calm down and think deeply about the setting written by the author. Generally speaking, the novel is good, keep up the good work.

It's of high quality and the writing is very good. It's a good article.

It looks good, but it's too short.

Very good, the character description is very detailed and immersive.

I'm in jail [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying] It's hard to calm down

How to put it, I may not accept the fear setting, but I think it meets my expectations in other aspects. I have been out of the dark zone for a long time, so some equipment feels strange, but in terms of military-related content, I don't feel there is any problem for the time being. I will look at it later and give it 4 stars [smile][smile][smile] Okay, I admit that I saw it too early. This horror is too good, but my flesh and blood cannot accept it. I give you the last star.

The writing is really good, the pace is a bit too fast, but not unacceptable. I read Chapter 20 and saw that it was about the task force cleaning up their obsessions in order to welcome a better world. I didn't like it. It made me feel that the protagonist had lost something that I thought he couldn't give up. But it's still well written.

Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. So beautiful

😊Good good well

This is a really good book. The task force was originally here to make war profits. This book reverses this idea very well. Make their life more like an ordinary person's life. It's just that the author's plot is a bit too suspenseful and most people may not be able to understand it.

Rare, the only one I personally think looks good

The author's literary talent is very good, and the story is also very innovative.

To read this book, you must read the prologue carefully. The opening lightning strike is very well written. The subsequent plot is also very enjoyable to watch. I must highly recommend it.

The author's writing style is quite good. I really don't understand the psychology behind giving low scores.

The plot is well written, but the knife is mixed with the main text. I also suggest that next time the author opens a new book, he can write a plot about the soldiers in the tactical team traveling to BA. After all, there are too many plots about the dark zone traveling to BA, and the competition may be fierce. Just be innovative.

I feel very good, I have a feeling of being there, and I also have the unique pleasure of finding a good book. Of course, you have to read everything yourself before you can feel it. Whether it is good or bad is up to you to evaluate. This is just my personal feeling. Nice! ! !

The author is imaginative and rich in content.

It is the affirmation of people from two worlds Of course

It's nice to be able to write about the dark zone and micro-blue files like this

This article is clearly organized. Everything has a basis. It's clearly organized, but there are a lot of things that are difficult to understand. For example, Shiloh's "exit", I really hope that the author has changed it into a different skin. ^O^ Hope you know what I mean.

The blood of the dark zone and the beauty of BA are written together. Very good

It's well written and seems to be a character who plays well with Dark Maggot and Azure. Like

OK, I'm just a stinker who plays in the dark zone