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It's okay. There are some lightning points, that is, the part where you are bullied is really not handled well. It feels like a big fuss, like a punch on cotton, which is very annoying. The subject matter is novel and worth watching, but the lightning points are a bit poisonous. Looking at the subsequent development, the logic is very average, but it is still okay in Tomato. Come on, author!

Overall, the logic is quite reasonable. It may be a little lacking in some parts, but it's okay. Maybe because the protagonist is "isolated" from the world and has an attitude that "has nothing to do with me", coupled with past life experiences, there is some difficulty in accepting feelings, but some small warmth has also had some impact. I think the protagonist's way of dealing with the conflict between the original owner is not as good as Shuangwen, but it's still okay. I think one of the reasons why the protagonist does this is that he doesn't quite understand emotions; The second is that this leads to the familiarization of unfamiliar things, for example: treat it as a "trading mission", the mission goal is "revenge" (the other party used the "team competition" to cause the original owner to be seriously injured, and counterattacked in the same way), and the settlement reward is "body and rebirth"; Thirdly, the protagonist is not good at expressing emotions, cannot "act", and is better at "imitating". The subsequent acting arrangement of the protagonist's performance may (suspected?) Be foreshadowing, recycling or filling in holes? Finally, cheers to the author!

See the evaluation of Chapter 62 Writing style: smooth and natural, accurate description, easy to understand Plot: The pace is relaxed and relaxed, the world view is still being laid out, and no serious bugs have been seen yet. Characters: The characters are three-dimensional, and the personality changes before and after are reasonable. There is no serious problem of being nice to the protagonist one moment and slapping the mouth the next. The creation of the protagonist is very successful. Setting: I have never seen a similar setting, but I thought that One Punch Man also has hero rankings. It is quite interesting to combine it with the entertainment industry. How a killer learns to become a human being and find his place in a strange world. (Maybe it's possible to save the world?) Overall worth watching. I feel like I suffer from the introduction and previous content. The cover isn't very good either. The book title, cover, and introduction are completely in three styles. The introduction looks like a female video, and the cover looks like a male video, which is very fragmented.

So far, I feel that the author's rhythm is very stable, and the character of the protagonist is also very distinct. The night land that follows, I personally feel is very novel. The main tone of this book should be based on the character growth of the protagonist.

It's pretty good-looking and not toxic at the moment, although it's a bit embarrassing at times. It has a name, so it's okay! 🌹🌹🌹

Very interesting and well written. I feel like a black-robed picket team. I urge you to update [sending my heart]

Looks good and writes well

Super nice and novel theme

Very novel setting [Adoration]

When watching TV, the part about other people eating popcorn gave me a cold-faced and cute feeling.

Okay, the character of the protagonist has been filled in little by little, the plot is not a routine, and the power system is also slowly described in the plot [laughing]

Good-looking, the protagonist is ruthless and has no poisonous qualities

Very good, in line with the taste, the writing is good and the ideas are good

The subject matter is novel, it's the first time I've seen it, it's interesting