Traveling Through *********

Hmm... It's okay, but the protagonist is a bit too heaven-defying, even more heaven-defying than the original protagonist, and some settings have been changed too drastically. For example: the cave sky beyond the limit is not the return to unity, that is Shi Hao's path, the colorful bird is almost dead as soon as it is crippled, and it has been I don't have much memory when I'm confused. At most I feel that Liu Shen is relatively close to me. That realm of carboxylic acid can only be transformed into a spirit or an inscription. Even if the protagonist has memory fragments of his predecessor, he won't be able to casually comprehend the Immortal King's method without some foundation, and the Holy Spirit can only appear when he is a genius. Finally, I want to ask if there is a heroine. I hope it is a witch or Liu Shen [smile] If I accept the witch, I can get an incarnation and practice the two paths again in Jietian Sect to prove myself, and then my childhood sweetheart... [Smile] [smile] [smile] Liu Shen mainly focuses on companionship [smile] [smile] [smile] The author's last book was very good, but it's a pity that it was banned [face covering]

Come on, author, because Tomato doesn't have perfect copyright, so be careful, don't let it go, then take it off the shelves and then block it again.

It's a very nice and perfect fanfic, all the descriptions are online, the rhythm is very strong, and the battles describe Hongdae's passion. Anyway, it's very good [laughs] It's a pity that I haven't seen the heroine in more than 40 chapters. Liu Shen can't develop another one now, and original ones are not unacceptable [Thinking]

Wonderful! Good-looking and good-looking👀

It's been a long time since I watched a perfect fanfic

It's different from other fan fiction, it has a unique charm, and it's more comfortable to watch.

The writing is pretty good, very good. It has a plot and a process. As long as you don't mess around in the later stages and don't mess up, this book is very stable.

It's very well written and very interesting.

Where is Shi Hao, how long has it been?

It feels good, take another look

Why was it removed? [Eat melon]

I've finished reading it, it's pretty good. By the way, I bet on the heroine Liu Shen [laughing evilly]

The story is very good, keep writing, fan fiction

Okay, okay, it's a rare and perfect fanfic, overall it's average but it's all about the details that can still be read.

It's very interesting. It has its own innovations and the plot is okay. You can watch it [Cool]

It's pretty good, keep writing✍

It's really well written [Like] [Like] Come on, old man

It's good-looking, and it's average among all the fanfics.